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Bloodline by musicmel (NC-17) [Comments - 150]
 

Arabella Kinsey is about to embark on life in the real world, well as real as it could get in her world. With the last name Kinsey and living in this town, there would be no question to what profession she would end up in. When you say the name "Kinsey" they automatically assume you are a doctor. She is a descent of Doctors. Fleets of Doctors. Generations of Doctors. But that's just the way life is in the Hampton's. Everyone that lives here comes from money and traditions. The Bloodline is thick. But how thick can it get before she thins it out.



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Romance, Suspense

Series: None
Chapters: 34
Wordcount: 77913 - Hits: 84609
Complete?: Yes - Published: Feb 27, 2010 - Last Updated: Jul 06, 2010 -
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Date: Mar 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

ARGH!!!!  I really thought Arabella was going to wake up and try to leave. I really really thought she had realized all that, but then you throw us for a loop and keep us guessing!!!!  I think that is what I love the most about this story, you keep us guessing.  I cannot wait to read more!!!!

Reviewer: shan030709 Signed
Date: Mar 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Seriously, you jerk us up and down emotion wise and hope wise so much, but I LOVE IT!!!!  Cannot to wait to keep reading!!!!

Author's Response:

I love to make you happy then tear it away! ;) It makes me very happy

 

Thanks :)

Reviewer: shan030709 Signed
Date: Mar 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I just want to let you know I don't want to throw anything at you.  I think if you had ended it right there, the story might have ended sooner.  I really like where it is going.  Cannot wait to read more!!

Author's Response:

Thank ya thank ya!!

Reviewer: shan030709 Signed
Date: Mar 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

You are such a trickster!!!  But I absolutely love it!!!  I am glad that she has finally stood up and I cannot wait to read what happens next!!!

Reviewer: shan030709 Signed
Date: Mar 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

LOVED IT!!!!  I hope that you are not going to end things here.  I could see drama brewing!!  

Author's Response:

I'm not going to end it just yet. But yet I dont want to ruin their characters so who knows.... lol I have a few things I have up my sleeves for this story.

 Thanks ;)

Reviewer: shan030709 Signed
Date: Mar 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I am really in love with this story!!  I cannot wait to read how Arabella will cope with this new found freedom when Justin leaves for his tour.  I am also interested to read about her shoe line and how all that plays out.  Cannot wait to read more!!

Author's Response:

I'm glad that you love the story. I think Bells has become one of my favorite characters.

Dealing with Justin away could be her biggest task.

Reviewer: shan030709 Signed
Date: Apr 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I can only imagine what you will throw at us next!!  Cannot wait to find out!!

Author's Response: I like to throw things randomly  at  you! Keeps you interested! :)

Reviewer: shan030709 Signed
Date: Apr 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

You did not warn us about needing tissues!!  It is heart wrenching and the bit about their being a problem with her shoes, is going to make for some dark days ahead for Arabella.  I can just feel it!!  Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.  You really did make Justin that much more loveable!!

Author's Response:

Crap, I did forget the tissue warning this time. I am usually good about that considering I cried everytime I read this chapter. I'm a sap (Shh dont tell anyone)

The problem with her shoes ... hmmm I'm writing this so you can only imagine! lol

I want to reach through this story and pick just up and squeeze him :)

Reviewer: shan030709 Signed
Date: Apr 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I don't know if breathe is a good thing or a bad thing!!!  I am so in love with the story and I cannot wait to keep reading!!  I sure hope it's not a bad thing someone is in the apartment.

Author's Response:

I seriously love that your in love with this story!! Makes me very happy :) I hope the person in their apt is a a good thing as well.

Reviewer: shan030709 Signed
Date: May 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

LOVE IT!!!!  Just what needed to happen!!

Author's Response:

I agree. As much as she played she was ok. She wasn't. She needed him.

Thanks :)

Long Way to Happy by MarizlePanizle (NC-17) [Comments - 107]

It's gonna take a long time to love
It's gonna take a lot to hold on
It's gonna be a long way to happy, yeah
Left in the pieces that you broke me into
Torn apart but now I've got to
Keep on rolling like a stone
Cause it's gonna be a long long way to happy

Left my childhood behind
In a roll away bed
Everything was so damn simple
Now I'm losing my head
Trying to cover up the damage
And pad out all the bruises
Too young to know I had it
So it didn't hurt to lose it
Didn't hurt to lose it
No but oh
I'll keep on rolling down this road
But I've got a bad, bad feeling

A girl who is a nobody with a past to the outside world, meets a somebody that holds the future she's been searching for.



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 44
Wordcount: 202268 - Hits: 156630
Complete?: Yes - Published: Mar 09, 2010 - Last Updated: Sep 17, 2010 -
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Date: Mar 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I really like this story.  Seems that there are some major underlying issues with Marissa.  Cannot wait to read more!!

Reviewer: shan030709 Signed
Date: Mar 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I really like the story.  I think story line is very interesting and a lot could happen.  I hope you keep writing it because I want to keep reading it!!

Reviewer: shan030709 Signed
Date: Apr 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

You have to give drama for stories to keep them interesting and readers on their toes.  I am very interested to see how things go in Marissa's home town.  It is bound to be interesting!!

Reviewer: shan030709 Signed
Date: Apr 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Gees...I can feel a tissue chapter coming up!!!  I am absolutely in love with these two and the plot.  I get so excited when I see that it has been updated.  I like both perspectives but I think maybe just telling it through Marissa perspective would make it even more powerful.  But, I will love it either way!!!!  Cannot wait to read more!!!!

Reviewer: shan030709 Signed
Date: Apr 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I was bawling!!!  Geesh, this is intense, but also very very addicting!!  I cannot wait to see how the funeral goes and everything after that.  Especially with her family!!