Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Chris Kirkpatrick
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3052 - Hits: 1205
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jan 30, 2009 - Last Updated: Jan 30, 2009 -
What can I tell you? Fanfic is my escape. I like to write romance and happy endings. I have a quirky sense of humour--and I'm Canadian, so that is how I spell humour!
If there is something you want to know about me, just ask :)
Very sweet story. Thanks!
Author's Response: Aww thank you!
Meet Sierra-Marie. She's a beautiful 22 year old on the brink of her senior year at the University of New Orleans. Everything in her life was perfect...until August 29th. Find out what happens when a natural disaster happens and you go from hero to zero. Will a certain young pop star give her hope and help her get her life back?
Great story. Thank you for sharing something so personal. I am interested to see what happens with the entire family.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! I'm grateful to people like you who finds this type of story interesting. Thanks again. :)
Ki
Great start! I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.
I really like the way you use language. "The place always smelled of perfume and chicken. Don’t know if that’s a good or bad thing. I’m indifferent." I can almost smell the perfume and chicken myself. It's an interesting pairing and the passage really seared in my brain.
An accident just before the Nsync Hiatus change the life of two girls when they are hit by their bus.
Marion lost her memory and the only friends she knows now are JC and Nadine... But what will happen when a person from her past come to her?... Will she recover her memory and know who this person is? Or will she stay with JC and the new friends she is making in her new life?
I'm intrigued! I want to know what's going to happen...:)
"Her beauty has never faltered in my eyes but I know there are moments where she doesn’t feel that way. She swears she has imperfections, even though I’ve looked high and low and can’t seem to find them. It’s times like these when I take it upon myself, to remind her just exactly how sexy she is, all insecurities aside."
JC takes it upon himself to remind the one he loves that her beauty is still there, regardless of what she sees.
Beautiful story. I think I just fell in love with him too. I like the way they've been together for a long time but still have such passion and romance and love for each other. Very sweet.
Great writing style too!
I love it! Such a cute story. :)
bahahaha! Love the reference to reading fanfiction(or not)! Can't wait to see where this is going.
The face is the mirror of the mind. And eyes, without speaking, confess the secrets of the heart. Sometimes you fall for someone, even when you don't want to. Also, sometimes, you fall for someone while you're still stuck on somebody else. Complicated? JC Chasez thinks so too. And things don't get any better when all he does is deny and deny.
“Baby you're not the only one. You don't have to be afraid to fall in love and I know that you've hurt in the past. But if you want it here's my heart, no strings attached.”
Way to go on completing your first NaNo! I loved it, especially when they exposed the bad "guy" for what she was. I will definitely be reading your sequel. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this and I hope you enjoy the sequel as well. Thanks for the review.
Loved it! There's always that person that thinks of you as a little sister that you always have a crush on. Love that her fantasy became reality! And someone get that man to update his darn twitter already!!
Author's Response: That was the story of my life for the longest time - I gave her the happier ending, though :) And I agree on the Twitter comment, hahahaha
Loved it! I liked how subtle everything is. We don't know that they were smooching right until the end, and it's like the perfect cherry on the top of the ice cream sundae. :)
When you’re sick there’s only one person who can make you feel better: Doctor JC
Perfect story to read since I'm sick today. *sigh* I might feel a teeny bit better if someone sang me a lullaby too....
Great story, really sweet :)
For my Secret Santa, PopDiva!
It's the time of year for JC to get his flu shot and Chris is the unlucky one to get him to go through with it.
Thank you! It's great! JC & Chris are the perfect gift. Now if you can wrap them and get them under the tree.... but seriously, it is a great short story. I love how Chris gets himself into trouble while he's supposed to be keeping JC out of trouble! And great use of JC's quote in there!
Shawty got that super thing
Hotter than the sun of south in spain
Got me soon as I walked through the door Oh!
My pocket started tickle-ing
The way she dropped it low that thang
Got me wanna spend my money on her, her
She get it pop it, lock it, drop it,
That birthday cake,
Got a candle, need to blow that crazy flame away
Now take my red, black card and my jewelery
Shawty is cool like the fire, Cool like fire
Somebody call 911!
Shawty fire burning on the dance floor
Whoa!
I gotta cool her down
She won't bring the roof to ground on the dance floor
Whoa!
She’s fire burning, fire burning on the dance floor
That little shawty’s fire burning on the dance floor
Shes fire burning, fire burning on the dance floor
That little shawty’s fire burning on the dance floor
"Fire Burning" --Sean Kingston
Wowsers! Did it get hot in here? OK, but seriously, I liked the playful banter they had going even as they are getting down to "business". I loved that the good day was laundry day. :)
And I have to say that as soon as he complained about his sore back, I wanted to go massage it for him ;)
Great start! I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next!