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Justin was her knight in shining armor who whisked her off to his castle in LA. They became best friends and even more until one day, she suddenly left without a trace. Now, after five years of silence, Grace is back and Justin wants some answers...



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: None

Series: None
Chapters: 11
Wordcount: 13667 - Hits: 22152
Complete?: No - Published: Jul 23, 2008 - Last Updated: Jan 11, 2009 -
Reviewer: Niffer Signed
Date: Jul 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Ohhh think that was a low blow!  I probably would have hit his pretty face!  lol! 

Reviewer: Niffer Signed
Date: Jul 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wonder how he fucked up???  Love it!

There stood his crew, his pack, his brothers in arms. This was his family and the place he belonged. Prison time was mandatory, Gun-running and drug smuggling was work, Alcohol was necessary, doing the Drugs was optional, A cracked out wife was part of the territory and a family with the love of your life (who wasn't your wife) was a treasure. This was the life he led and the path he chose.

 

*Inspired by SOA, Hells Angels and every other MC out there.



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Mystery, Suspense

Series: None
Chapters: 34
Wordcount: 78043 - Hits: 113777
Complete?: No - Published: Sep 27, 2008 - Last Updated: May 23, 2010 -
Reviewer: Niffer Signed
Date: Oct 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: Character Profiles.

Loved the pics and bios. 

Author's Response: Good...I figured it was needed.

Reviewer: Niffer Signed
Date: Oct 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 19: Something for PawPaw?

Great update.  Hope Randall's right and Justin gets him out.  Wonder what he did to get into jail.  Who'd he kill?? 

Author's Response: I hope Justin gets him out too! I don't know why he got locked up or who he killed...guess we'll have to wait and see! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Niffer Signed
Date: Sep 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Getting out of the pen

Really great start!  I usually don't like alternate universe stories but I'm really enjoying this one.  I think it has something to do with bikers and outlaws!  I have a weakness!  LOL!  Looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: I know bikers are my weakness. I just want Justin to be a bad boy! lol Thanks for reading and Reviewing!

Reviewer: Niffer Signed
Date: Sep 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Getting out of the pen

Really love the story!  Please, please update soon! 

Author's Response: I'm glad you're loving the story. I will try to update as soon as I can! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Niffer Signed
Date: Sep 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Glad you updated!  Great chapter.  Love how mama Lynn won't let anyone mess with her son!  Yay it would be good if you added a biker glossary at the end of the chapters.  Please update again soon!  Can't wait.

Author's Response: Mama Lynn is so protective of her son it's insane! I'll add the biker glossary...on certain words. I'll try to update as soon as possible. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Niffer Signed
Date: Sep 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Never sit on another man's bike!

Wow!  Love how badass Justin is.  Think that Lyle guy is going to cause some problems.  They might need to take care of that.  Love the fast updates.  Keep them coming.

Author's Response: I know I love badass Justin! He might because he does like Alyssa but I think he knows not to mess with the club. We'll see what the club does. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Niffer Signed
Date: Oct 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: A good Old Lady can make or break a club...

Loved the update.  She went into the military?  That kicks ass!  Bet no one wants to mess with her!  Hope the undercover gets sniffed out quickly and doesn't cause any problems.  More pretty please, with a cherry on top!  LOL!!!!

Author's Response: Awww thanks I thought the pace of this update was a little slow but I had to introduce Teak. Yeah Shift went to the military...we'll see soon exactly what she did there. I don't see Teak leaving the story soon....we'll see how involved she chooses to get with the club. I'll update asap....lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Niffer Signed
Date: Oct 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: He was born for this.

Great update!  I knew something had happened between Lyle and Shift.  He's lucky that he wasn't killed!  Sneaky Teak is going to get it.  Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: We'll just have to wait and see about Teak...I wonder how come everyone hates her? lol Yeah LJ is lucky that Justin didn't kill him. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Niffer Signed
Date: Oct 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Don't be a Paulie.

Wow!  Don't mess with Shift!  Marines!?!?!  Love a hard ass girl.  Ohh can't wait for the patch over.  Loved the two updates posted together.  Maybe we'll get two more???? 

Author's Response:

Yeah everyone is learning real quick you don't mess with Shift in these early chapters....but Justin will have his reign coming pretty soon. We'll see what happens at the patch over....OH I just did one update but it's a long one...does that count as two? I hope so! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Niffer Signed
Date: Oct 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: It's your choice how she dies...

It's kinda sad that she was killed but if she was gonna nark she should have known it was coming.  Stupid doc now he is owned by the club.  LOL!  Justin with Kale was adorable.  He had a little helmet, sunglasses and cut!  Mini Justin!!!!  Next chappie please!



Author's Response: Yeah it was kind of sad....She should have known to not have narked or threaten to nark. Yep the club owns the doctor now!!! We'll see how that plays out. Yep Kale is a mini Justin. He wants to be just like his dad. We'll see about an update I'm trying to write something right now lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Niffer Signed
Date: Oct 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: You fucking shot my man....

Another great update.  Glad you have Trace in this story.  Love how Shift got pissed because they shot her man!  LOL!  I love her stomping in the windshield. 

Author's Response:

Yeah I had to add Trace...he's such a big part of Justin's life that he has to be involved. yeah she kicked in the windshield but it's Justin!!! If he was my man and he got shot I would do the same damn thing! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Niffer Signed
Date: Oct 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: show your colors....

Wow!  Loved that Justin is possessive!  Glad that Teak is turning to their side.  Justin's right having someone in the ATF would really benefit the club. 

Author's Response: Me too...I like possessive Justin! lol Teak is turning...I think that makes everyone happy so far. I thought it would help having an insider but we'll see how that works out because I'm not making any promises! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Niffer Signed
Date: Oct 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Are you fucking glaring at my girl?

Stupid girls!  Shift looks hard ass and they mess with her?  WTF!!!!  LOL!!!  Loved the update.  Can't wait until they get to Texas.

Author's Response: I know stupid stupid girls! lol Thanks I hope you like this next update! Thanks for reading and reviewing!