Penname: MochaB [Contact] Real name:
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25. Pisces. Born and raised Texan. I've been reading fan fiction for many, many years now. It's my secret little pleasure in life. My love of *NSYNC and JT is my not-so-secret pleasure in life and I like it that way.
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I sat in front of a mirror finishing my makeup and felt a steady throbbing like the beating of a drum in my chest. I have never been so scared in my life, and I’ve been through a lot of shit.  After taking a deep breath I stood up and fixed my fishnet stockings before taking one last look in the mirror. I look like a slut. What am I doing?
 



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama

Series: None
Chapters: 50
Wordcount: 128396 - Hits: 198846
Complete?: Yes - Published: Apr 25, 2008 - Last Updated: Jun 03, 2009 -
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Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Aug 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

first, justin and chloe together. *fuzzy feeling takes over* haha. second, oh man...i feel bad for chloe. she asked  her mom to send her an angel to help her out and maybe justin is that angel. i know she doesn't want to ask justin for money or help, but she should take that route instead of going to the club. justin is going to be pissed and that is definitely going to bring drama. justin would help her in a second, especially since it's not just her survival but brady's too. :o( update soon! :o)

Author's Response: Yes, Justin is definitely not going to be happy. Hopefully they'll be able to talk it out. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Sep 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

they've gotten themselves into what continues to grow to be a lovely little relationship! haha. “I’m a big boy though.” He answered softly. too cute! and justin...that boy...when he's not being a jerk, he's pretty great and sweet. haha. things have been going pretty well. i'm just waiting for him to have a dr. jekyl/my. hyde moment again. haha. i hope chloe finds a job and i'm glad brady has a good school to go to now. justin should just wear a superhero cape now. update soon! :o)

Author's Response: haha yeah Justin is getting to be pretty amazing, but we'll have to see if that lasts :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Sep 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

come on chloe! are you serious right now?!?! i know she's scared of that boy (cause he's not a man), but her anger at him and what he did to her and what he could do to brady should toughen her up more. she showed him that she's still weak! letting him touch her like that and kiss her and all that crap. forget about needing to deal with this on your own, cause that sure ain't going to work. she needs to tell justin and get another restraining order on that fool. ugh. she's being stupid right now. hopefully she'll let justin and whoever help her. she's not the only one in the picture now. update soon.

Author's Response: Chloe has no idea what she's doing but she's afraid to tell Justin because there's already so much drama. Hopefully she'll straighten herself out soon. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Sep 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

:o( you know justin is being really great right now, but this problem could be the thing that pushes him away. then again, maybe it won't. i know she really likes him, and she loves how he is with brady so she's probably scared to loose him, but she needs to tell him because this is no joke. she needs to think about brady and how she needs to protect him. not if justin will leave or not. she needs to tell the authorities too though. by her being secretive with this, and by not being upfront with him about problems in the past, it could be the thing to push him away. not the actual problem, but her problem. gaaah. only you know though. haha. update soon!

Author's Response: You always leave such wonderful comments, thank you :) You're completely right with everything you said but Chloe is just a big mess right now lol Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Sep 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

in the back of my head i'm always worried that justin is going to go back to his old ways. he explained himself and i don't think that was really him, so with each chapter you post that little thought in the back of my head goes away. haha. justin is being really great. amazing as chloe said. i'm glad he didn't get mad at her, but let her know that she needs to just communicate. *dreamy sigh* haha. is he going to get her an apt near him and the school?!? is he going to punch Gabe in the face?!?! please say yes at least to that! haha. update soon! :o)

Author's Response: haha Gabe does deserve to get punched in the face, we'll see how it goes lol Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Sep 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

oh gosh...please let it be fun. you HAVE to let it be fun. haha. i'm all worried that something bad is going to happen. gaaah. haha. good update though. i really liked the first part with justin and tiny. and brady is just so cute and goofy. i love the thoughts that chloe has about herself. they make me laugh. ok. update soon! :o)

Author's Response: Well we'll see if Vegas is fun or not. lol I'm glad you're liking it, thanks so much!

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Sep 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

hot much?!? that was good. reeeeally good. haha. whatever happens in vegas stays in vegas huh? only i hope it doesn't cause like i said...that was hot. haha! brady is adorable and justin with brady is just so freaking cute. i know i've said it before, but it's true. i love how overwhelmed chloe is with this trip. i would be too! i'm really hoping that vegas stays great. anyway, really great update! :o)

Author's Response: Yeah, Chloe is in a completely different world but that's a good thing I suppose. Thanks so much for always reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Oct 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

well...that went nicely. haha. i knew this bliss couldn't last too long. that really sucked. and now she gets home and freakin' gabe is there! this isn't good at all. nobody is there to protect her or help her, except the police, which means she and brady should run right back out that door and she needs to call them now. but i'm sure that won't happen. oh and this part: "I don’t know what the hell that’s about, what kind of things does he do on stage?" that made me laugh really hard. haha. i really can't wait to see what happens next. update soon! :o)

Author's Response: haha we'll see what happens, thanks so much for always reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Oct 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

is it insane to want to cause slow excruciating pain and kill a fictional character? if so, then i'm insane. haha. update soon please! :o)

Author's Response: haha no, that's not insane at all :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Oct 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

justin and tiny to the rescue! haha. i'm glad she told him everything...kind of. haha. but yeah, she shouldn't keep any of this a secret because this is serious stuff. i really just want justin and gabe to be put in a room together and justin just go wailing on him like crazy. i don't know how that could come about, but man... i mean he could just go wild on him. we're so violent. haha. update soon! :o)

Author's Response: Seriously, so violent haha. The cops should just tie Gabe up and let everyone take a turn throwing rocks and kicking him haha Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Feb 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

i really don't know if i'm mad at justin for just leaving like that. it is bad he left without saying bye to brady though, but everything else, i think i understand justin's reasoning. chloe kills me though with her thought process. she switches back and forth so many times on how she feels if one thing goes slightly out of place. she only sees the negative, which i can understand if so many negative things happen to you in a short period of time. i also feel like she looks at things from a surface point-of-view you know? ugh. i don't know. i can't wait to see what happens though.

i love the banners too. the third is my fav. rawr, sexy! haha.



Author's Response: Yeah, Chloe definitely has some problems and Justin thinks he's forcing her to get the help she needs but of course it doesn't work that way lol. Thanks for the review, and uh yeah about the banners, Vikki is amazing!

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Nov 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

very nice update ma'am. i'm very happy they have gabe. i'd be jumping for joy if they tortured him, but that's another story and i'll take what i can get. haha. but...i don't believe that's the end of gabe. you're too evil to let it be that easy. haha. jk! :o) but yeah...totally don't think that's the last of him no matter how much i wish it was. update soon! and congrats on being featured! you deserve it. :o)

Author's Response: Well thank you. You're probably right about Gabe... I am kind of evil haha. You're all for the torture... we'll see haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Nov 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

i saw that it was chapter 31 and i thought, "man...i didn't know this story was so long." then i saw your note. haha. gaaaaah. i'm happy chloe spoke up. justin does need to  understand that gabe is no joke. chloe, of all people, would know this so he shouldn't take anything lightly, especially her door being unlocked. that's a problem. i know justin is just trying to ease her distress and make her feel that things will be ok by what he says and trying to to come to the worse conclusions, but sometimes you just have to be real. it does have to work out though, but i'm thinking things could get worse before it works out. you evil author you. haha. update soon! :o)

Author's Response: haha your are psychic :) Things may get worse, or they may not... I'm not that evil ;) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Nov 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

man...that got me. sitting here in my room all teary eyed and feeling so sad. haha. that was really good. i understand that it's hard for chloe to believe justin right now, rightfully so, but i think she needs to put more trust in her relationship. her fear that he's going to walk away at any moment for some small reason that she thinks he will view as crazy or any other reason is only going to do what she doesn't want it to do; make him leave. it's just going to cause problems. give him more credit than that. yes, yall had a very rocky start, but has he not shown himself to be the good person that he actually is? i also think justin is starting to get, and let it sink in, how serious the situation is. update soon!! :o)

Author's Response: I'M SORRY! lol I always forget to leave warnings about the sad parts haha. Things will be explained more in the next chapter. Thanks for always leaving such wonderful reviews! :)

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Nov 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Yay I caught up! seriously...just talk chloe. don't hide stuff. i'm so happy she told him, even though he had to corner her into telling him, but it needed to happen cause this is serious stuff. i was hoping justin wanted the mics off so then they could talk then he'd just beat him down. haha. wishful thinking. anyway, gabe...if i could just get my hands one him. haha. i really can't wait for him to get what he deserves. that will be a joyous chapter. haha. update soon! happy thanksgiving! :o)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Chloe definitely needs to just let it all out but she's still having a hard time with that. Hopefully she will soon. I hope I can make the demise of Gabe good enough haha. Thanks again for reading and reviewing! It's going to take a little while for the update, hopefully soon after thanksgiving... which is tomorrow lol wow. Anyway, thanks Happy Thanksgiving right back atcha! :)