woohoo!! so much tension...sexual tension. haha. i love it! i'm really enjoying this story and i can't wait to see what happens next, especially with their little talk. update soon! :o)
no.freaking.way. you better update and fast! haha.
"Just so you know I will fight for you if I have to and I will win." uh oh...thems be fighting words...and i'm sure it will be taken literally. i don't like toni and i want her out of the story. now. thank you. haha. *sigh* of course it's going to make it drama filled and have me on the edge and loving & hating it at the same time. why does she let toni do that to her? don't give in so she'll leave you alone! let her know what's up and make sure that that's the end of it, and that's that! ugh. haha. now her thinking about her relationship with justin? ummm...thinking over. go for it. club scene next? hmm...who knows what could happen. hehe. update soon! :o)
:o) soooo cute. i'm so rooting for justin (obviously). i mean his whole family liked her! deal sealer. haha. i'm mad that Angie is even giving Toni another chance! i mean seriously?!?! haha. when i read the last update I was like like, "ugh! no! stay away! justin is what you want!" but i guess i'll just have to be patient. toni is nothing but drama. i just hope angie makes the right decision aka justin. update soon! :o)
now of course i liked this chapter. justin and angie getting closer always makes me happy. haha. when i read that last line i was like, "haha!" then i thought about it and i was like, "oh crap." it makes me think that toni is going to show up and be one of those things that stops angie and justin. not cool...soooo...don't make that happen. haha. update soon please! :o)
uuuuuugh. she's making me mad. justin may be patient, but i'm not and i think she needs to choose. trying to have the best of both worlds it seems. haha. there's a reason why she and toni aren't dating right now isn't there? so ummm yeah. i mean, he's patient now, but how long will that last?!? ok, so you are the author and can make it last a very long time...don't torture me please. haha. update soon! :o)
you know i actually hope they don't sex. i just don't like how she's going back and forth, back and forth. she needs to make a decision. if you want to try things with toni, fine. be an idiot and do that and stop leading justin on. yeah he knows the deal, but it's still being led on. i think if they have sex, then she chooses toni, it will make it a lot worse than if they didn't have sex. it's like she always has a backup. i mean, if when she looks in justin's eyes and her answers are seen, why can't she see and feel the answer to who she wants in his eyes or toni's eyes? ugh. anyway. haha. update soon. :o)
so cam may have acted stupid and was a bish, but i'm glad she showed up. that little jealousy tink felt is good in my opinion. she needs to feel it more strongly cause maybe it will push her in the right direction. aka justin's direction and be done with toni. i'm glad they got interrupted. haha. maybe justin will take that as a sign and decide that they just need to keep it on the friend level until she decides what she wants. i still think tink's in the wrong here. update soon. :o)
*sigh* i don't even see why she's still trying to figure out if she wants justin or toni. she's not with toni for a reason and i'm pretty sure what her friends and family think about toni is correct. i just couldn't be ok with how things are going if i was justin, but i'm not him soooo...haha. maybe if she didn't know he'll be there waiting she'd make up her mind, make the RIGHT choice, and be with him only. update soon. :o)
Set in New York City, Justin Timberlake and Amelia Domineck are the hottest couple in the Manhattan social scene, and their wedding is fast approaching Event of the Year status. Amelia, headstrong and domineering, is not just planning her wedding, she’s choreographing it and Justin seems to simply be along for the ride, as well as Amelia’s assistant Charlotte who after accepting the job wonders if slavery somehow became legal without her realizing it. A Lolita wedding planner, a flakey assistant, and one bridezilla converge together to bring Charlotte and Justin closer and Justin begins to wonder… is this really all that’s left for him? A ring and a promise of forever with Amelia, or does he dare to dream of something more?
dang it justin! who has the balls in this relatonship?!? haha. i completely dislike when amelia makes him feel like a child and he lets it happen. he's a grown man. he can rn his business how he wants. obviously he doesn't do too bad of a job or it wouldn't be going so well. charlotte just needs to loosen up a little. stop thinking that justin has ulterior motives. she did really good though once she just went with the questions. it's kind of funny how she goes back and forth though. amelia has her loosing her freaking mind now! questioning everything...that can't be healthy. haha. update soon! :o)
Author's Response: Hahahaha yeah everything was going great till Amelia called huh? Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
i absolutely loved this chapter. it was so freaking wonderful. the dialogue was just awesome and had me rolling the whole time. and it made me feel so many ways. reading about the interactions between justin and amelia are so uncomfortable because i feel so mad that she controls him so much, and there is no reason behind it. maybe he's stuck in who she was in the past, but he needs to come to terms with the change. how can you let somebody treat your family the way she does? she feels like she's better than justin's family. the family she is marrying into. he's not going to just be part of her family, she'll be part of his family, and for her to treat and behave that way with them...i mean, his grandma pats her shoulder stiffly, then pats charlotte's and squeezes it too. amazing. genuine affection for your grandson's fiance's assistant who you just recently met, but none (rightfully so) for your grandson's fiance. everything amelia does revolves around social status, material possessions, and money, not feelings. justin voicing in his head all these little things he has come to notice and appreciate about charlotte, stomach curling, licking his lips, and body shivers...i love it!! then the end...man...i figured they wouldn't actually kiss, but that was awesome anyway. what trace said may have hurt, but the truth hurts sometimes. maybe justin needs to hear more of it. i'm wondering what charlotte's waiting on too. i'm waiting on the thing that snaps them together. gaaah. sorry so long. i got carried away. lol update soon please! again, wonderful chapter. :o)
Author's Response: YAAAAY this was such a great review! I love your thoughts on how Amelia fits into (or doens't rather) Justin's life and his family! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
wonderful update. he can't even see his wedding? can he see a future? a happy one that is. coming from who he was to just being known as amelia's finance has got to be a big blow. you may be in a relationship with someone, but you still want to be seen as a person who has their own personality, thoughts, beliefs, etc. and not just an afterthought. oh, and stomach flutters? hmmm. i'm glad charlotte and justin are getting to know one another. there's a little trust there now. not majorly, but it's there. i just wonder what will happen once she goes back to working by amelia's side...or maybe that won't happen and amelia will make her stay with justin as part of her scheming plan. i guess we shall see.
Author's Response: YES EXACTLY! I really like your analysis of Justin. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
awk.ward. that was just uncomfortable. haha. she was like a robot. she even made it sound like it was a dull process like putting together a tv stand or something. it's sad. he thinks about how they/she used to be, then he has to remind himself that he loves her. he really does. maybe he loves who she used to be and he's still hanging on to that; living in dreamland. i mean, can you really blame that on age? yeah they are older, but they are definitely not 80. anyway, i really like this story. can't wait to read more. :o)
Author's Response: HAHAHHAA Putting together a TV stand!!!!! That's great!!! I'm glad you're liking it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
:o) dang it! i want my charlstin! now! haha. so pretty much nobody likes amelia. not even justin's family. they tolerate her. i mean, they aren't even married yet, but justin's going to have to deal with this for the rest of his life. has he thought of that? i just hate how she makes him feel like he needs to correct himself, what he says, how he acts, etc. in her presence. he can't even be his true self. that blows. do you really want to be a character in your own life? uuuuugh! i just can't stand it! it's so sad. i bet justin's fam is going to love charlotte. probably be praying to God that he will marry her instead of amelia by the time christmas is over. haha. i really hate that she can't go home to her family. amelia just wants her miserable since she's feeling miserable with justin's family. misery loves company. but i'm happy justin is trying to cheer her up. he knows how it is, but i mean...he had to for his career, for something he loved, but for charlie that's not the case and that really sucks. anyway, yeah...i love this. update soon. :o) oh! but in regards to the previous update, one thing amelia is probably right on, is patti. mmmhmmm....
Author's Response: Wow I really like your thoughts on Justin and Amelia's situation! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
HALLE-FREAKING-LUJAH!! Justin, you haven't made it to the light at the end of the tunnel since you haven't ended the relationship, but that light sure is getting brighter baby! haha! oh my goooosh. stop being so amazing woman! where to start? this revelation that justin is having...he really just needed somebody to question him. somebody to cause him to think and question himself, while making him comfortable. maybe it helps that charlotte is coming in as fairly new in viewing ther relationship, but she sees how damaging it is to him only after a little time. justin's family loves charlotte! gah! so many times i was reading this chapter and i was just like, "heck yes! you are getting it!" he's known all of these things. he just hasn't let himself think them and believe the; coming up with excuses. he's the one coming up with excuses for somebody elses behavior. he shouldn't have to do that! yes the business is hard, but business and family are two different things. she needs to leave the toughness at home and not treat her fiance, the man she supposedly loves, like he's a client or a rowdy musician. he knows what he's doing, he's a grown man, he's your fiance! you shouldn't have a guard up around this person. he knows why he quit music, he knows why he thinks he used to be good at everything, etc. it all goes back to amelia. you still are good at everything. you just have a person constantly making you feel not worthy. brainwash much? he doesn't even feel comfortable with amelia. he has to always be on point, he can't relax, he can't be himself. why go through your life as an actor? there is only one you; be you.
ok, final stuff. sorry, i get caught up. haha. but when he mentioned "He knows she’s not going to freak out on him for reasons he doesn’t completely understand." and "Everyone always wanted to know everything...he figured he could at least try to answer." it made me think of crazy fans and the public/press. crazy fans, public, press = amelia. she's like the crazy fans. she freaks out on him for reasons unknown and that he doesn't understand. prob cause he doesn't do anything wrong in the first place, but i'm just saying. she's the public/press because she doesn't care how he feels or what he thinks. she just uses what he does and says against him to rip him apart and make him feel how he does now. he didn't let the press do that to him, but then get this girl in the picture that he used to love (cause he doesn't really love who she has turned into) and suddenly he's buying into this crap. throw in love and things get screwy. that is not love! i'm so sorry this is terribly long, but i had to get it out. you always get me going girl. haha. update when you get a chance. school has taken over my life too. haha.
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