Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Sep 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 26
Well I hope she actually finds and does something for herself. She needs to get back to being herself cause at the end of the day that's all she'll have and she has to live with the person she becomes. She definitely was bold at the beginning of this chapter. Forget making justin feel better though! He has brought this all on himself and he can fix things, but he doesn't. So she shouldn't feel the need to fix it, at least temporarily. She needs to not be so freaking nice. She makes sacrifices, puts her self (mentally, emotionally, physically) on the line for others...all for people who don't deserve it, are cold hearted, ignorant, and vindictive and she gets absolutely nothing in the end. Amelia most definitely doesn't give her anything except a pay check, and justin is not giving her what she desires the most, which is his heart one hundred percent. His body is great and all, but it only goes so far and she ends up feeling guilty and like crap. Stop being so effing nice! It's so sad. Everybody in this story is such a sad individual, even amelia. It's sad that she's become who she is and it's sad that she such a bia. Haha. We know why justin and charlie are sad individuals. As I read this chapter I had the thought that I think one of the reasons justin may like charlie so much is that she is like an old version of amelia. His amelia that wasn't the power and money hungry vindictive she-devil that she is today. Maybe that's a stretch since he hasn't actually had that thought exactly, but that's just what I think. But how things are going she's slowly make the transition to becoming a version of amelia, and not a good one. BUT it is great that she has caught herself ahead of time. It's so sad that she won't quite a job because of a man who she does not have...who she may never have. She better find herself and fast. And I've said it from the first time you mentioned justin's finances a few chapter back...justin, his finances, amelia - all tied together. When you prove me wrong I will admit that I was wrong, but until then...haha. Oh! It seems to me that amelia was eavesdropping on the convo between the 3 girls cause she knew they had been to Saks and that they asked charlie to go shopping with them. Yes she told them to do it, but how did she know they did it right then? I don't know. Maybe I need to re-read that part again, but I was like "something is not right." Update soon! :o)
Author's Response: Yes I've kind of come to notice that everyone in this story is kinda lame and sucky lol I didn't FULLY intend for them to be that way, like I wanted them to be flawed and as real as possible and I think that they are to a certain extent but damn lol I like what you said about Charlotte being like the old Amelia. I hadn't really thought of it that way, more so in the sense that Charlotte is very different from Amelia but you're kind of right. She's very much like Amelia used to be. I love when you guys make me see stuff in my characters that I didn't even notice before! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
