Penname: MochaB [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: Sep 08, 2007
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25. Pisces. Born and raised Texan. I've been reading fan fiction for many, many years now. It's my secret little pleasure in life. My love of *NSYNC and JT is my not-so-secret pleasure in life and I like it that way.
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Tara Miller is the next big thing in the movie industry. She goes off to Tennessee for three months to film her next movie. But she has no idea what's in store for her when she gets there.

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Romance
Challenges: Somebody

Series: None
Chapters: 22
Wordcount: 72591 - Hits: 42689
Complete?: No - Published: Jul 20, 2008 - Last Updated: May 31, 2010 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Sep 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 06

i like how justin is just like go with the flow. haha. he's not too caught up in it. he's letting whatever happens, happen. as for susan, i don't want to say she's rude , but i thought she would appear nicer. haha. i mean they were friends for so long, then dated for so long, only to get a divorce, which happend 2 years ago. you can't be more friendly now? haha. update soon. :o)

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for leaving your thoughts, I love to know what everyone thinks. I should have another update coming soon, and don\'t worry you\'ll find out all about Susan :-P. Thanks again for reviewing! I should have another update comin soon! -Traci

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Sep 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 07

eeeeek!! they kissed! finally! showing that they like each other! but boooo because of what hannah said and that makes me think of the prologue. so now i have conflicting feelings. haha. i'm happy they kissed and i hope it evolves, but just knowing that what happened in the prologue will be happened in the future is a bummer. haha. update soon! :o)



Author's Response: Yeay! Glad you enjoyed it. I always look forward to your reviews every chapter :-D. Thanks for always reading and reviewing! More is coming soon, school is just kicking my butt a little bit, but I WILL budget my time :) Haha. Thanks once again for leaving some feedback! :) -Traci

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Oct 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 08

listin to little randy being the matchmaker! haha. soooo cute! it seems that randy has taken a liking to tara, which can only help justin. i can only hope that randy does like her, but would he feel weird of confused by having her around a lot when he has his mom? i guess we shall see. i do hope that justin and tara's relationship continues to grow though. and hannah and trace...mmmhmmm...haha. i totally understand about school so update again when you get a chance! :o)

Author's Response: Glad you\'re enjoying it! I always look forward to your reviews so THANKS so much for leaving them :) Anyway, more is coming soon. I have a BUNCH going on this week, so after Monday I can finally work on a new update :) Thanks for stickin by me with this and waiting patiently :-D. I love Randy :) So more of him is coming soon! Anyway, as usual thanks for reading and reviewing! -Traci

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jan 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

ugh, they both are right to be wary of this relationship they are starting and i think it's smart. of course even though it has a chance of ending badly, i can't help but want them to continue to see where things will go. they're just cute! haha. but tara meeting his family...that's a big step, especially for these two people who are already wary about things. eek! i can't wait to see what happens next! oh, and talk about fantasy. teacher/cheerleader. lol

Author's Response: Haha. I\'m glad you\'re enjoying the story. THANKS so much for continuing to read and review! More is coming soon. School starts up soon but hopefully I\'ll still keep up with writing. They are both wary of relationships and have their own reasons for it, but hopefully they\'ll get past that :) Glad you enjoyed the lil teacher/cheerleader thing ... haha I didn\'t even realize I did that! :-P Anyway, as always THANKS for reading and I\'m glad you\'re enjoying it! TTYL -Traci

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Mar 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Ugh. I can't help but to love their cute moments no matter how worried I am about their future. Haha. Its just so sweet! She met his parents, which is a big step and they seem to like her. Sherry...I'm sure she'll report to susan, but whatever. Anyway, hannah and trace are funny. Trace's persistence is paying off. Can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you for sticking with me on the story, even though the updates take so long! :) The cute moments are the best, I just wanted to throw one in there and I\'m glad you liked it :) I\'m glad you\'re enjoying the story. Trace is my favorite it write right now, he\'s so persistent as you said and I love it! :) More is coming soon! -Traci

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Apr 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

woo she has three more months there? plenty of time to well...you know. lol i'm loving all this affectionate stuff that's going on between tara and justin, and this chapter was full of it. :o) they're just so cute! and although i knew they wouldn't have sex since they haven't known each other for too long and they were at his mom's house, that little scene was still very nice to read. haha. and heather and trace. heather tries to play it off, but she knows she likes him. haha. i'm still loving this story. i'm glad you updated! :o)

Author's Response: I figured you would like some little affection stuff which was why I thought it was about time for them to be cute together :) I\'m glad you\'re enjoying it and thanks for always reading and reviewing! I\'m glad you enjoyed the scene in the bedroom ;) I enjoyed writing it. Haha. *whispers* I think you mean Hannah instead of Heather. But thanks for your review! More is coming soon! -Traci

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Apr 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

i loved this update! i love how with each update they get more touchy feely. haha! i just like the small touches, and kisses, and smiles you know? (i.e. lunch scene = giddy smile lol) but my gosh i was excited that they would have alone time, and i was so hoping for along time at his house! not that i wanted them to have sex. i just think they deserve a good uninterrupted makeout session. LOL i know she had to work, but gosh i wanted it to happen. next time? lol but tyler...that was rude. tara's relationship with justin is absolutely none of his business. i understand he likes the girl, but seriously...stay out of it. he knows nothing about justin. ugh. ok, update soon! :o)

Author's Response: I love your reviews! Thank you so much for continuing to read and review it means alot :) The touches, kisses, and smiles are the best part :) I\'m glad you\'re enjoying them as much as I am. The alone time at his house is coming soon, don\'t worry :) Tyler is a little pushy isn\'t he? LoL. I\'m sorry he\'s annoying you so much though Hehe. Anyway, thank you SO much for continuing to read and review the story. I\'m glad you\'re enjoying it. There is more to come, I don\'t know exactly when but soon. Thanks again! -Traci

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jun 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Ohmygosh they need some uninterrupted alone time like yesterday. Lol I knew that the issue of her being famous and leaving had to come up sooner or later. They got through it smoothly, but this is just a small trip. The ending of filming and the possibility of them being away from each other is definitely in the back of their minds. Rightfully so, but justin said I love you! Wowie! And she feels the same even if she didn't say it! They just took it up a notch. I love their couple moments. Hopefully they get that much needed alone time in new york. Update soon! :o)

Author's Response: I\'m so glad you\'re enjoying it! Like I had said summer is starting soon! I do have a summer class but it\'s only for 5 weeks and it\'s online, so it shouldn\'t keep me too distracted. I\'m actually working on the next chapter so hopefully there will be another update soon. Anyway, I agree some uninterrupted alone time would be nice, but there are always responsibilities that arise. I like their couple moments too :) There always seems to be an interruption though :-/ I\'ll work on that. LoL. Anyway, as always THANKS so much for reading and reviewing. More is coming soon! -Traci

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jun 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Ooooo...that markus...you are officially on my bad list. Ugh! You know I wasn't expecting that to be thrown in, but I can't say I'm surprised. Ugh. Whatever. Tyler better not start no crap, but I won't get my hopes up. Please let them still have a good time. I don't expect it to be drama free, but I do hope it is still a great time. *sigh* haha. update soon! :o)

Author's Response: I\'m not very happy with Markus either at the moment. LoL. I\'m glad you weren\'t expecting it, that means I\'m doin\' my job :) It def won\'t be drama free, but there will be some moments. Thanks for continuing to read and review! I\'m glad you\'re enjoying the story still. More to come -Traci

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jun 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Hannah and trace! Lol hope she loosens up more. Haha. Can't wait to see what happens in NYC. Update soon! :o)

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Thanks for continuing to read and review! I appreciate it :) More is to come soon! :) -Traci

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jul 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

I'm almost scared to see what happens at the club. I know some drama is coming. Maybe not at the club, but somewhere. Haha. Justin seems to be doing ok with things. Not great, but ok, and that's understandable. I just don't want this exposure to her life to make him more wary of things with tara. I'm glad things went great with dinner though! Cute dress! Love the little bows. I haven't got to look at the hotel yet (I'm a weirdo who enjoys looking at hotels online so I will later haha) and the jacket page gives me an error, but shows lots of their jackets and blazers which are nice. Thanks for the pics/links though. It's nice to have a visual. I can't believe it's been a year! Wowie. Haha. Have fun on vacation! :o)

Author's Response: Drama? Why would there be drama? ;) I think Justin\'s been doing okay too, but really I think it\'s a lot for him to take in to see Tara in this enviornment. This is her enviornment while TN is his :) I\'m so glad you\'re into the story still and it still has you interesed! :) THANK YOU so much for continuing to read and review it means SO much to me :) I\'m glad you liked the links too! I loved her dress. The Hotel looked fantastic! Sorry about the jacket, the link was kinda old :( Anyway, I am still having a bit of writers block if there is anything you\'d like to see feel free to e-mail me Spacey1141@hotmail.com I\'d love to hear any ideas you have. Anyway, thanks again! Glad you\'re enjoying it! :) -Traci

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Oct 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Look at small town justin handling business!! :o) that was sexy. Haha. Seriously though I was like "you go boy!" I know justin doesn't think of tara how roger described her. Douchebag. Lol tara is a nice girl and justin is a nice boy. They're nice together. And he pretty much said he loves her! Eeek! :oD I'm a little confused as to if they had sex or not or just had a nice little makeout sesh. I can't wait to see what happens next between them and with their time in nyc! So happy you updated! Update again soon! :o)

Author's Response: I thought you forgot about the story. LoL. I wouldn\'t blame you though, my lack of chapters was starting to get annoying :( Sorry! Well, the story is PG-13 so it was supposed to imply that they did :) LoL. Sorry if it was confusing. I\'m glad you\'re still reading and enjoying the story, thanks so much for continuing to put up with my lack of updates and still review. I\'m hoping to have another chapter up by the end of the month, seems kind of far but if you think about it October is almost half over. Anyway, more is coming. Thanks as always for reviewing! :) -Traci

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jun 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Woohoo an update! Haha. :o) I'm glad the trip went well. But *gasp!* the dreaded talk is coming up. Eeeek. Good job tyler. As if it is any of his business at all. Can't wait to see what happens when they talk things over to decide what they will do. Update soon! :o)

Author's Response: You are back! I thought you gave up on me. :( LoL. Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm glad you're still enjoying the story! More is coming soon! I have already started writing the next chapter. WooHoo! Anyway, thanks as always for revewing! :-D

Sequel to Love & Trust Alonsha Daniels is back home in Los Angeles, trying to put her life back together. As she slowly, but surely gets herself back on track, she realizes that forgiveness is easier said than done.

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance

Series: The Lonnielake Series
Chapters: 37
Wordcount: 153775 - Hits: 115517
Complete?: Yes - Published: Aug 09, 2008 - Last Updated: Sep 13, 2008 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Aug 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Expect The Unexpected

hahaha!! i knew it! when he said he hadn't been honest with her i was like, "this boy is gay." haha. that really blows, but can you be mad at him? i mean, yes you can, but it's so great that he came out with it now instead of further down the line. he should've did that before they had sex whie on the trip though since he obviously realized he's gay before that time. tiffany and ally are going to crack up though i bet. as for cameron, she makes me all kinds of mad because she's been all kinds of wrong and rude. what she was saying about justin has some truth to it, but like lynn said, she doesn't trust him. plus, she's using alonsha as the problem for their continuously rocky relationship. i think it's already over and they just need to end it, but they are trying to hold on to whatever it is they have. justin shouldn't have to change his friends for some girl, and visa versa. like tiffany said (i think), there is no time frame on love. justin probably does still love her and wants to get back with her, but he can't admit it to himself yet. *sigh* who knows? haha.

this is already long, but i loved love & trust. i remember reading that a loooong time ago. i want to say a few years ago, but i could be exaggerating, but it does feel like a very long time ago when i first read that. i had to go back and skim/read to remember everything correctly though, but yeah...loved it. i'm glad to be reading the sequel. keep up the great work on this and your other stories. i love the others too. i know i haven't commented on all, but i'll get to it one day. haha. :o)



Author's Response:

haha, wow, thank you! i agree with what you said. i don't mind the long reviews, it makes me happy to get a great response like that. actually, any respond makes me happy, haha. cameron's a douchebag and i think i've pretty much established that, but at the same time, you gotta petty the girl. she's old. lol. let me stop. she's pretty cool in real life as far as i know. but yeah, love & trust is a little dusty, throwback of mine. it was my baby, haha. i had to skim through it my damn self just to remember it all. craziness.

and don't worry about all the reviews. it's so nice to know you actually like my stories. that's a compliment that i honestly appreciate and don't even think i deserve, so thank you a million times over. i should probably get on replying to these things as much as you need to get on writing them, haha. read them all though, i swear. i'm just lazy. i have no other excuse. but really, THANK YOU ALL! yeah, that's how i get it done. in one review response. lol

okay, i'm blabbin' here. thanks again, sugar! =]

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Aug 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: What Friends Are For

very interesting. haha. alonsha is a great friend. i would've reacted the same way when he started hinting at another break from friendship. i was getting annoyed at him doing that, so i completely backed her up when she was just like forget it. but for her to still fly out to TN to show her love and support for him and his family is special. everything about how he acted once she got there made me say, "hmmm..." haha. in a good way though. cameron didn't even know his grandma and didn't try to get to know her? i'm pretty sure that's a huge red flag right there. to not get to know one of the most important people in his life? that obviously hits a nerve. anyway, if justin is still mad at alonsha for leaving he needs to talk things out cause the longer he holds it in it's going to fester and grow. update soooon! :o)