Penname: MochaB [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: Sep 08, 2007
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25. Pisces. Born and raised Texan. I've been reading fan fiction for many, many years now. It's my secret little pleasure in life. My love of *NSYNC and JT is my not-so-secret pleasure in life and I like it that way.
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Past Featured Story

This is the story of my son and his father. But before that, it’s the story of his father and me, back when he was just some guy at a frat party.



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 33
Wordcount: 102606 - Hits: 23281
Complete?: No - Published: Jan 07, 2015 - Last Updated: Jun 26, 2016 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Mar 18, 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

How I've waited patiently (not really lol) for that moment! Lol first I literally laughed out loud when Chris said his favorite part of S&T is when Justin stops singing and Jay Z starts. That was hilarious. And I can't even fault Chris for his behavior or his comments. He's a child, and although he has shown that he's curious about his father, the one fact that he knows is that his father hasn't been there for him in 13 years. He probably wonders why but all he can feel right now is hurt. He may be thinking ok my dad is JT. Why couldn't he be there for me? He doesn't lack money or the means to be there for me. I'm positive he doesn't know that Justin has provided support all this time as well even though he couldn't physically be there. But im sure being there for him physically is more important to Chris. Anyway Mac is berating herself for thinking Chris was ready, but I really think he was ready until he was face to face with Justin. He's been asking her questions. But that fact that he is Justin Timberlake probably threw him off and probably made him angry. So I don't think she should be so hard on herself. I feel bad for Justin but he's not an idiot. Everybody involved knew it could go a number of ways. They just got the way that was least wanted. Lol anyway I was nervous reading it! I can only imagine the tension in the room. But it was realistic which I loved. I also laughed at the mascara face/guacamole part. I love when we get those comments or parts that remind us of a memory or moment from their younger days. I just love reading the interaction between Mac and Justin both the past and present. The present interactions show that there is a love and bond there that can't be broken, and I don't mean because they have a child together. They genuinely care about each other as people. Plus with what they went through, which I know we will read more about later, probably made that love and bond stronger. Anyway, so glad we finally reached this moment! Lol can't wait to read more! :o)

Author's Response: Thanks for the thoughtful review! I'm glad you're enjoying it and catching everything that's going on... and reading between the lines so much :)

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Apr 06, 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Way to knock my happiness down a notch with the news that he's engaged. Lol does his fiancé know about Chris? And him and Mac don't even talk about it, which means something...I mean I know that he kind of has two lives. Or at least Mac and Chris are part of his life that obviously is separate from his celebrity life, but there's something behind that. Actually that's probably me and my wishful thinking. Lol And I am certainly very interested to know the story behind Justin's mother's reaction and how she did behave and how she feels now concerning Mac and Chris. That's so sweet of William to do all this time though. Anyway, I'm glad Chris talked to Justin a little bit. It's progress. I always end up cracking up at some of the dialogue in your stories. When Mac suggested she just play the piano during the convo and Justin said he'd sing it made me laugh so much. Then when her dad was like I like you less now. LOL so funny! But I say her dad handled it fairly well. I mean nobody was killed on the spot so I say it went fairly well. And Justin being smooth and getting those digits. Playaaaaa! Lol update soon!! :o)



Author's Response: You'll get to learn all about Justin's mother's reaction in the next chapter, just posted! You'll learn more about your other questions soon! I'm glad you're liking it, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jun 17, 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Awwwww...when Justin kissed her bump and started crying I promise my eyes didn't get a little misty. Lol But Justin has gone and messed things up. HE'S the one getting married. Does that mean she now has to beat up his fiancé? Lol man I sure wanted that devil to say something crazy to Mac so Mac's mom can give her a beatdown. But there's still a chance for it to happen so I won't give up hope. Lol again, Mac's parents....thumbs up. How can that woman even look at Mac's parents hugging and treating Justin like he's family and not feel a bit of remorse for who she is and her behavior? The devil I tell you. Update soon!! :o)

Author's Response: haha that's for reading and reviewing! You're probably right, Mac should have to beat him his fiance now. haha And yes, his mother is still crazy! 

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jun 26, 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Ha! Mac is so lucky. Lol but really she is. She could've had 2 jerks for exes, but she doesn't. But Matt needs to take a chill pill. Chris' father has nothing to do with him. It would've if they would've gotten close to marriage as I'm a proposal, then I would say that he should be given the information on who the father is BUT only after Chris was told. I can see how initially he feels a little upset by it but in the end he shouldn't. And Chris is obviously having some trust issues with everybody, including his mom. Thinking everybody was in on the secret except him. But she should nip that cussing thing in the bud. If that was my mom she would've rose out of that bed and slapped me clear across my face for saying the F word. No matter what the circumstances are. I think she needs to sit down and have a serious talk with him. Cut the being best buddies stuff and be the parent and talk to him and let him know what's up. I know he needs time, and that's fine, but in the mean time he can't be a little jerk to everybody. Teach him how to behave in tough times. We definitely need a chapter dedicated to Justin and Chris going home together. Update soon! :o)

Author's Response: Thanks for the comments! Everybody needs to take a chill pill and relax haha! 

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Aug 19, 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

LOL hilarious!! I'm glad Justin is able to be there and he was there for the birth. I think it's sweet Justin has a picture of her in his wallet. Do I think he still has feelings for her? Yep. Lol but I think they are repressed feelings due to all that legal mumbo jumbo and his mom. He forced himself to move on and now he's engaged. But I think he still loves her, and not just as his forced-ex-turned-mother-of-his-child. But again, it's buried in a deep dark cave. Lol I'm surprised that when she finally understood why he was upset she couldn't just understand he as upset because he loves her. Even if she doesn't think he loves her in a significant other way, she has to know he loves her and cares about her in a super close friend basically family way. He wasn't just worried cause she's the mother of his child. I need more details on what happened at Justin's house with Chris. Justin needs to spill. Lol anyway I'm loving all these fast updates! I had to play catch up! Lol update soon! :o)

Author's Response: Your wish is my command! :-p Just updated with more about what happened at Justin's house! Thanks for the lovely feedback :0)

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Oct 12, 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

It's probably bad that I laughed at the last chapter when she was telling him to stop crying. But I know postpartum is serious and real and not funny. But I couldn't help it. lol anyway, I love Trace! He's so hilarious and just says what he wants. And I'm so glad to know what happened at Justin's house. I just love how music is such a deep connector between Justin and Mac. And I love how it is a comfortable area for them, and I love how after the awkwardness it just feels like old times when they used to hang out as close friends. It's nice and I love reading it ("that's my girl," "typical Justin/Mackenzie" etc) but I feel like it will change when Justin tells his fiancé about her and Chris. And the awkwardness will come back and things will be difficult again. But I'm enjoying it while it lasts! Glad I caught up. Update soon! :o)

Author's Response: Thanks for catching up! Glad you're still reading and enjoying it! :-)

Millie tends to keep herself to herself. Not a lot of people really get to know her and she likes it that way. So why is it that every time she speaks to him she says far too much?

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, General

Series: None
Chapters: 18
Wordcount: 38887 - Hits: 7500
Complete?: No - Published: Jan 24, 2015 - Last Updated: Oct 09, 2015 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: May 12, 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Her sister sure has a lot to say about Justin's relationship with Millie, yet she ain't saying crap about her own relationship with her sister. Millie seems to be ok with finding out Felicity and her sister hung out in London on occasion, but Lizzy sure didn't volunteer that info. I don't care that there were hostile feelings between them, or from Felicity towards Millie. Justin is indeed curious about Mllie and that curiosity can come across like he's trying to figure out a puzzle but when it comes down he's just trying to get to know her and Lizzie doesn't know him at all, and hasn't even been around long enough to see him treat her like some so-called puzzle! I mean did Felicity say some crazy stuff about Justin to her over dinner?! She doesn't know the type of person he is so she's the owning around these accusations and its just like "ok hold up. You just got into town and haven't been around your sister in years." She should focus on her own relationship with her sister than worrying about Justin. And really he is treating her like a person. He's not being delicate with her. He can read between the lines and knows his boundaries; when topics are not up for further discussion. And his sarcasm and humor with her...anyway, mind your business little lady.  Anyway update soon! :o)

Author's Response: I always love your reviews. Sometimes you say stuff that is so dead on what I was trying to do and then other times you point out stuff I hadn't even thought of!!

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Apr 14, 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Hmmm very interesting. Very interesting indeed. Lol this whole story is intriguing and I'm loving it. Update soon!!

Author's Response: Thank you lovely :o)

Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Jun 17, 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

well that was an interesting turn. Lol I think Justin is interested in her and thinks she's pretty, but I do think he'll stick to being a friend for a little bit longer if he is interested. Meaning I don't think he'll be jumping her bones next time they see each other. Lol I also think that Millie does need to lighten up a little, but her uprightness is just her nature. Plus I'm sure with what she's dealt with (her dad and the industry) has impacted how the is as well. So she's not all gung-ho about taking all these risks. But she should start small and take some little risks to be more of who she is and not let others rule her. But one thing she needs to do is just talk to her sister like an adult. Her sister may be adult age, but she still behaves as a child in some ways, but the only way Mille will get through to her or start building a relationship with her is if she talks to her like the adult she now is. They both know she wasn't in Lizzie's life, not her fault, we all get it. As for Lizzie's jealousy or feelings of inadequacy or whatever she's feeling due to Millie and the stuff she was told by her dad and the world and the comparisons, that's something she's going to have to get over herself.  Or trying to figure out who her sister is...whatever it is she's struggling with she has to figure out and resolve herself. She also needs to realize that she's fresh meat to this country and this industry she's trying to enter so her sister is just trying to look out for her, and Millie obviously knows some stuff she doesn't about the industry. But that brings us back to Millie just needing to come on out with it and stop this secretive crap. Can't build a relationship on secrets. Let her sister know what's up then let her sister do what she wants cause at the end of the day it is her life. Finally, Lizzie needs to be open herself about how she's feeling about Millie as well, how she was still keeping in touch with Felicity, etc. And picking a fight with Justin isn't going to bring her and her sister closer together, especially if all they are going to do is fight when they are. They both got lots of stuff they need to say to each other and only after its all out in the open can they rebuild their relationship. Update soon!! :o)

Bittersweet

You're gonna be the death of me

I don't want you, but I need you

I love you and hate you at the very same time 



Categories: Challenges
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Humor
Challenges: It's Gonna Be MAY! *NF Spring Writing Challenge 2015

Series: None
Chapters: 2
Wordcount: 7115 - Hits: 776
Complete?: Yes - Published: May 18, 2015 - Last Updated: May 19, 2015 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: May 21, 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Rebecca

Man I wanted this to go for one or two more chapters!! What a freaking jerk! What a freaking male! Does no wrong, can't even see how hurtful he's being by what he's saying, then turns it around and wants his girl to baby him. Now look at him...realizing what he's messing up royally and now all panicked and sentimental. Yeah boy you're about to loose all of this *gestures at her body* lol great little short!! :o)



Author's Response:

Thanks! I originally wanted it to go on a couple more chapters too, but couldn't get my act together! Maybe I'll add more to it someday. It's not good for me to focus on more than one story, then it never gets finished!

 

 

Past Featured Story

After a misunderstanding, Justin makes things right with Lana.

A sequel to "The Midterm" 



Categories: Challenges, Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Erotica, Romance
Challenges: AWESOME AUGUST 2016- #JCTURNS40 EDITION

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 4312 - Hits: 488
Complete?: Yes - Published: Aug 01, 2016 - Last Updated: Aug 01, 2016 -
Reviewer: MochaB Signed
Date: Aug 02, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was so excited to get a notification that you added a new story! This was a great and sweet sequel to " The Midterm." Can always count on Trace for a good laugh. Lol