Penname: LuLu [Contact] Real name: Nikki
Member Since: Apr 09, 2007
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The Wolf Pack: The Next Generation (Shift and JT's reign) by Schnessa (NC-17) [Comments - 162]

There stood his crew, his pack, his brothers in arms. This was his family and the place he belonged. Prison time was mandatory, Gun-running and drug smuggling was work, Alcohol was necessary, doing the Drugs was optional, A cracked out wife was part of the territory and a family with the love of your life (who wasn't your wife) was a treasure. This was the life he led and the path he chose.

 

*Inspired by SOA, Hells Angels and every other MC out there.



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Mystery, Suspense

Series: None
Chapters: 34
Wordcount: 78043 - Hits: 113643
Complete?: No - Published: Sep 27, 2008 - Last Updated: May 23, 2010 -
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Reviewer: LuLu Signed
Date: Oct 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: He was born for this.

Ok so Justin, Shift and company aren't eaxctly the "good guys" but this Teak has got to go. She needs to get caught fast and tossed out before she really sees or hears something incriminating and ruins everything.

I bet that confrontation between Justin and Shift after the LJ incident was explosive.

Great chappie!

Author's Response:

Yeah they're not so good but Teak is playing her own hand here so.....We'll see if she gets caught or if she gets caught up in the Wolf Pack lifestyle. I'm sure it was very explosive but there's more on that in this update that I just did. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: LuLu Signed
Date: Oct 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: You fucking shot my man....

Well...Teak's days are numbered...

Damn that was some hardcore Justin and Shift. They are not a couple to mess with.

Author's Response: They are definitely not a couple to mess with! Teak better watch out...or should she? lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: LuLu Signed
Date: Oct 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: show your colors....

Oh pooh I can't see the banner :(

Ok I see what's happening now. Teak's falling for the Pack - she's gonna turn on the ATF, not them. I like the idea of that. I really didn't want to see Justin and Shift get rid of her. Now I am I right to sense something brewing between Teak and Trace? They'd be cute together.

Ok you got me worried about Kale. He may be riding with his grandparents, but being Justin and Shift's son, he's still a target. Then again, the title makes me think Paul and Lynn are the ones in trouble. As sad as it would be if they died, it would be worse if something happened to Kale so in the end I hope Kale is the one to survive whatever's coming.

More soon please!

Author's Response: I fixed the banner just for you! lol Well see what Teak's going to do! I'm still playing with a few ideas. There could be something between Teak and Trace but remember there are more members of the pack lol. I guess we'll just have to wait for the patch-over to see what happens with Kale. I'm working on an update right now so hopefully it'll be up by tomorrow but we'll see how busy I am. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: LuLu Signed
Date: Oct 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Are you fucking glaring at my girl?

Love the banner. Adrianna Lima & Justin - HOT!

This story just keeps getting better and better. Please don't let anything too bad happen at the patch over - don't go making me cry girl. LoL.

Author's Response: Nikki, glad you liked the banner. Wasn't Kale just cute as hell? lol Awww I'm glad you're liking the story...I tried not to make you cry but I'm not making any guarantees! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: LuLu Signed
Date: Oct 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Our son's coming to us....

I know Justin and Shift are destine to take over the Pack soon, but I really hope both Paul and Lynn are okay.

And Kale needs to make it to his parents soon and safely. Hard asses or not, I don't think those two could survive losing him.

Great chappie! I didn't cry LoL, but Paul and Lynn's futures are still a mystery. Poor Justin. Can't wait to see what the fall out of all this will be. Whatever MC attacked them is in deep shit.

Author's Response: Well Nikki, I'm glad you didn't cry. lol We'll see about Kale....This next update will let you know which MC did it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: LuLu Signed
Date: Oct 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Let's burn this place......

I had a feeling the Lion's Pride was responsible and I'm glad at least some of them were dealt with, Justin and Shift style. Now they have to find Paul.

*Shaking my head pitifully* Only Justin and Shift would turn a hostage situation and gun fight into foreplay. LoL.

Yay! Kale's okay and safely back with his parents.

This newbie - Jaime - she may be riding with Trace, but he's Teak's man, not hers - at least in my book LoL. I'm team Treak!

Thumbs up on another good one ;)

Author's Response: Yeah only Justin and Shift! What can I say to that? lol Yay! Kale is okay! He's so cute.....I don't know about Jaime and Trace. Awww Team Teak!! lol that made my day! I hope to have another update soon but we'll see if I can work it out! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: LuLu Signed
Date: Oct 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: That ain't happenin'....

Ooh some Treak cuteness. I love it!

Author's Response: EEEEPPPPP TREAK!!!! LOL Nikki that seriously made my day! Go you and your Team Teak-ness! lol Also thanks for that other review although I don't know what happened to it I did get to read it! Love ya Bish!

Reviewer: LuLu Signed
Date: Oct 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Give credit where credit is due.....

It might have gotten spammed, but I sent you an email.

I just wanted to let you know that IMO you made it clear (to me directly in the response to my review) that your story was inspired by SOA, but I could and still can see that it is definitely an original. I love your story. So you keep on keepin' on girl lol.

Author's Response: Thanks Nikki, I did get your email and I responded back. Hope you love the new update! MUAH!

Reviewer: LuLu Signed
Date: Oct 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: It's our club now...

WTH! What happened, why did they kill Paul? Explanation please missy. *hands on my hips, tapping my foot - waiting* LoL.

Author's Response: lol Nikki! lol Um....well they killed Paul because.....I CAN'T TELL YOU! lol You'll just have to read the next update! lol

Reviewer: LuLu Signed
Date: Oct 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Paul had sealed his fate....

Awesome twist girl. First off, all this time I thought Paul was Justin's real father. Now that I know he wasn't and that he sold Justin and Shift out - put so many members and especially Kale in danger - for such selfish reasons, well....*shrugging my shoulders* He got what he deserved. I'm just happy Lynn had nothing to do with it cause that would have been an even worse betrayal.

Great update! I can't wait for the next! Time for Justin and Shift to reign supreme!

Author's Response: YAY for the twist lol! No I thought I would make Randall Justin's real father you know since he is...he'll be popping up later though. We'll see about Lynn...I'm still on the fence with her.

Reviewer: LuLu Signed
Date: Oct 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Hope you liked Millington....

Aww poor Jaime - Not. [I feel like such a biotch saying that, but oh well you know what team I'm on ;)] This chapter just gave me another reason not to like her. Ok so what if she and Trace had relations? Look who he came home to. If she tries to step into Teak's territory I hope Teak goes Shift on her ass. They better keep an eye out for Jaime though. I feel like she could be trouble.

Damn, the Wolf Pack is no joke, the regular citizens of Millington aren't ones to be messed with either. And Shift - she's a trip, I love her LoL.

Great chapter. Keep 'em comin'!

Author's Response: Yeah I don't like Jaime either so I'm glad you don't Nikki! lol Don't mess with Millington or Shift! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: LuLu Signed
Date: Nov 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 22: Can I help you Darlin'?

Ooh a new club and family member. But how's she going to feel if she finds out Justin killed her father?

I didn't have time to respond to the last chapter - read through it when I was in between classes - so I'll do it now. Girl you know I loved the scene between Teak and Jaime. I had to laugh cause it was like Teak was channeling Shift from when she got the same lesson. Hopefully Jaime'll know her place after that.

Author's Response: We'll see how she feels about Justin once she finds out.....I knew you would love the fight between Teak and Jaime. That was all for you Nikki lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: LuLu Signed
Date: Nov 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 23: Where you go I go....

Oooh Uncle Barley is in TROUBLE. Hell he's really stupid too. I would not want Justin and Shift hunting me down.

Aww thanks V for dedicating Jaime's beatdown to me. LoL. Treak fan or not she deserved it for stepping out of place.

Now I'm worried about Addison. Actually I'm worried for her, unlike Jaime at this point, she could get seriously hurt for giving Justin the eye.

More soon please! I can't wait to find out what's going on.

Author's Response: Okay Uncle Barley obviously isn't the brightest crayon in the box....I totally agree that I wouldn't want JT or Shift hunting me down....no thanks....lol No problem Nikki...I just knew you would like that part...I still love it and get giddy everytime I see TREAK! lol EEEPPPP! I know...what the hell is Addison thinking...obviously she isn't because Shift would scare me! lol

Reviewer: LuLu Signed
Date: Nov 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 25: Behave while I'm gone....

The flashback on Justin and Shift: the teenage year - *shaking my head pitifully*. Those two were and still are a mess. LoL.

So glad Kale's safely back with his parents. Now its time for Uncle B's recokoning. I feel sorry for him....

Author's Response: yeah I thought ya'll would like to see them in their younger years. I feel sorry for Uncle Barley too....I just update so take caution when reading. Thanks Nikki!

Reviewer: LuLu Signed
Date: Nov 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 26: Did I tell you she's my girlfriend?.....

Wow that was intense, but you did a really good job writing this chapter.

Loved the little Kale and Aunty Teak moment.

Author's Response: You know I thought this was going to be intense and graphic because we all knew Barley was getting it for what he pulled, I just didn't realize how graphic and intense I made it until I got the reviews back. Because then I went back and read the whole chapter in it's entirety and even I thought it was a bit graphic lol. But thanks for the props Nikki because that made my day. I loved the moment between Teak and Kale too...it just cemented the fact that she's family for me.