Penname: LuLu [Contact] Real name: Nikki
Member Since: Apr 09, 2007
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The Wolf Pack: The Next Generation (Shift and JT's reign) by Schnessa (NC-17) [Comments - 162]

There stood his crew, his pack, his brothers in arms. This was his family and the place he belonged. Prison time was mandatory, Gun-running and drug smuggling was work, Alcohol was necessary, doing the Drugs was optional, A cracked out wife was part of the territory and a family with the love of your life (who wasn't your wife) was a treasure. This was the life he led and the path he chose.

 

*Inspired by SOA, Hells Angels and every other MC out there.



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Mystery, Suspense

Series: None
Chapters: 34
Wordcount: 78043 - Hits: 113643
Complete?: No - Published: Sep 27, 2008 - Last Updated: May 23, 2010 -
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Date: Dec 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 27: What the fuck are ya'll starin' at?

Justin...Wow... Sure Addison needed to be put in her place and Jaime was already on her third strike, but I was surprised that he dealt with the situation, specifically Jaime, so publicly.

Now the way he treated his mother even if she knew Justin didn't want Addison in his house wasn't very nice. Bad Justin. I hope he and Lynn can make amends after this.

Author's Response: I think he kind of had to deal with it publicly. He's president now so I'm sure he's setting an example and he wants to make sure that the citizens of Millington realize that just because Paul's gone doesn't mean The Wolf Pack's hold on Millington diminishes. I think he was sincerely pissed off at Lynn...we have to remember this isn't the first time she's brought Addison around when he asked her not too. First at the warehouse and now at his, and more importantly Shift's house. I think Lynn understands why and what he did enough to not hold it against him for long.

Reviewer: LuLu Signed
Date: Dec 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 28: Massey?

Damnit! Twice now my computer has spazzed out on me and I lost my original review! Ugh!

Basically what I've been trying to say is - Unless Massey leaves town right now, he might as well start writing his will. No way Justin's going to let him take Shift away from him.

I loved how the pack pretty much knows now that Trace is Teak's. Now Trace just has to get off is butt and make Teak his old lady.

I can't wait to see how this new threat to Justin and Shift plays out, especially with Addison still lurking. Those two aren't stupid enough to team up are they?

Author's Response:

Ugh that sucks Nikki! I hope your computer decides to cooperate with you later on.

I don't see Massey taking Shift anywhere. She loves Justin plain and simple. For her it's never been anyone else. I think Massey's a bit crazy to think she would willingly leave Justin.

Oh the Whole PACK knows Trace and Teak are together. He can't make Teak his old lady just yet...she's still a prospect. I think he's waiting until she a full member. But with Trace and his womanizing ways you never know.

I don't think Massey or Addison are smart enough to even think about teaming up. Addison has some kind of internal battle when it comes to Justin. She likes him, she wants him to be hers but she also knows she can't handle him. She likes the bad boys but she's never bad enough to be their girl.

Reviewer: LuLu Signed
Date: Feb 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Take your best shot.....

Now that's what I call a wedding. I expected nothing less from JT and Shift. I can only imagine how crazy their honeymoon will be. LoL.

More soon please!

Author's Response: lol It was definitely a Wolf Pack wedding...we'll see how much action they can get into on their honeymoon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: LuLu Signed
Date: May 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: I promise you that.....

I could say that I'm nervous about what's going to happen next, but I have faith that Shift's going to pull through and Justin will get the little shit that shot her. At least that better happen. Happy endings only. Don't make me hurt you girl! LoL ; )

Author's Response: Okay...um....so I guess I need to rewrite my chapter just for you! lol I'm just kidding! I have a couple of things in mind so we'll just have to wait and see! I've rewritten my chapter like four times and I'm still not happy with everything so we'll see! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

California Dreaming by CJasmine (NC-17) [Comments - 35]
A chance encounter in a Los Angeles airport leaves best friends Cierra and Adriana in their new hometown with a new friend. Justin uses his ability to convince Cierra and Adriana to drive them home from the airport late that night. He can't deny the connection with Cierra but he just got out of a very serious relationship. Cierra could give two rat tails about the Justin Timberlake, but she can't deny him either.

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, General, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 14
Wordcount: 31318 - Hits: 32939
Complete?: No - Published: Dec 02, 2008 - Last Updated: Feb 23, 2009 -
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Date: Dec 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Okay I just read your story from the beginning and...... I love it! Cierra is a trip and I think she and Justin make a very cute couple. Even though Cierra obviously has feelings for Justin, she's being very smart about them taking a step back. But Justin seems pretty set on Cierra being more than his friend and I can see that leading to a lot of juicy drama. I can't wait to see how it all unfolds. More soon please!

A day in the life of.... by Schnessa (NC-17) [Comments - 37]
“This is SuChin Pak with MTV news, bringing you the best music news on the hour every hour. We have just learned that Justin Timberlake and his three assistants have inked a deal with MTV for a new reality show. The show currently named ‘A day in the life of…me and my assistants’ will begin filming next month and will follow Justin and his assistants as they work and live under one roof. No word yet if Justin’s girlfriend, Jessica Biel, will make an appearance but we were told to expect her to be talked about. This was a surprising move for a normally very private Timberlake and I for one am looking forward to watching it.”

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Celebrity/Celebrity

Series: What I'd Give
Chapters: 15
Wordcount: 46712 - Hits: 45055
Complete?: Yes - Published: Dec 02, 2008 - Last Updated: Feb 28, 2010 -
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Date: Dec 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction...

Thank you, thank you very much V. You've written yet another story that's going to have me up in nsyncfics anonymous. LoL.

Very interesting premise. I can't wait to see how Justin and "Ladybug" pull this off.

Author's Response: lol Nikki, your review made me laugh. It's seriously not my fault, I couldn't help it. We'll just have to watch and see how Justin and "Ladybug" pull it off lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: LuLu Signed
Date: Dec 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

So Teagan's Trace's cousin - that explains how she and Justin have been together for so long and no one knew. Are we going to get a glimpse of their relationship in the past?

I love how you have the viewers' POV as they watch the show.

Can't wait for more, especially since I'm suspicious of Cassie. She might be an undercover stalker.

Author's Response:

I don't know Nikki, ya'll might get a glimpse...I'm thinking of doing an aftershow like they do after The Hills...maybe with some fan questions being answered or something like that.

Thanks I think it needed to be added because I know how I am when I watch a show.

I actually like Cassie. I think as the show progresses more...you'll like her more...at least that's the plan. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: LuLu Signed
Date: Dec 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

The three girls drunk - LoL. Since Cassie's not the crazy stalker I thought she might be, I like how she was included in the Jessica bashing confessional. By the way I wonder how the public's going to react that.

I am worried about Jessica now though, she seems like she might start buying into this cover story. Now she has true crazy stalker potential LoL.

Author's Response:

The Jessica bashing confessional~ by far one of my most favorite things to write. I personally don't like Jessica (not because of the whole dating my Justin) so to write this was hilarity. I really don't know how the public's going to react to it...I mean some fans would be happy and would be like "why the hell is he still with her?" but some of his fans like her...so it's 50/50. I guess we'll just have to tune in and see.

I think she's always like Justin. If what the three drunk girls were saying was true (which I've heard from real Justin fans) then maybe she's sees this more as her chance to get closer to him. Like maybe if she sticks around long enough he'll fall for her and they'll live happily ever after.

I think Teagan picks up on that a bit. She really doesn't have a reason to hate Jessica...that we know of...as a girl you can also tell when someone likes your man and I think that's the case here.

Reviewer: LuLu Signed
Date: Jan 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7

Wow that was close, you had me worried about Justin and Teagan for a minute there girl. But it was good that Justin got a bit of a scare cause it definitely got his ass in gear. I'm glad to see Jessica's gone, but I have this icky feeling she's not completely gone.

More soon please!

Author's Response: Hey Nikki, I don't know about Jessica! I can't give too much away since I just updated but we'll see what Jessica does next. It will always be Justin and Teagan forever! lol He proposed so it definitely kicked his ass into gear! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: LuLu Signed
Date: Jan 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8

Wow I did not see that coming. Poor Justin. Poor Teagan. I hope he wakes up soon and I hope Teagan kicks Jessica's ass for this one. Then she can be arrested.

P.S. "Stepping Stone" is my fav Duffy song LoL

Author's Response:

I know Nikki, I really don't think anyone did. I'm glad I can still surprise you every now and then. I'm sure Teagan will do something to Jessica but I don't know when. She's kind of all about taking care of Justin right now...

I love Stepping Stone too so I had to put that in there lol

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Breaking Through the Storm by CJasmine (R) [Comments - 12]
It was supposed to be our perfect vaction. Just him and myself for the first time in years. In beautiful Aruba of all places! The a tropical storm hits forcing us to stay another week, the day after he breaks up with me. Four years together and I never saw this coming.

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, General, Humor, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 7
Wordcount: 15996 - Hits: 14423
Complete?: Yes - Published: Dec 29, 2008 - Last Updated: Jan 21, 2009 -
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Date: Jan 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Thursday

Uh oh. Something's telling me that that was not Trace on the phone and furthermore whoever it was is the real reason Justin wants to go on a break. Something fishy is going on and I can't wait to find out what it is. If it's another woman I hope Jasmine kicks his ass and then makes him grovel.

Untitled For Now by Melon (NC-17) [Comments - 9]
Justin has planned a very lovely evening out with his leading lady for Valentine's Day, but the occasion is ruined when racial slurs fly from a very obnoxious waiter.

Categories: In Progress Slash Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Angst

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 7315 - Hits: 5275
Complete?: No - Published: Feb 11, 2009 - Last Updated: May 09, 2010 -
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Date: Feb 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh wow that was....I have no words, but it was very well written. I hope Rachel's okay and I wish Justin would have knock that ass's teeth in. Better yet I think he should make a few phone calls tomorrow and by the end of the day, be named the new owner of that restaurant so he can throw Marcel out on his ass.

More soon please!

August 29th:You Think You Know by Keediluv (R) [Comments - 18]

Meet Sierra-Marie.  She's a beautiful 22 year old on the brink of her senior year at the University of New Orleans.  Everything in her life was perfect...until August 29th.  Find out what happens when a natural disaster happens and you go from hero to zero.  Will a certain young pop star give her hope and help her get her life back?



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 10
Wordcount: 7179 - Hits: 16602
Complete?: No - Published: Feb 12, 2009 - Last Updated: Dec 29, 2009 -
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Date: Mar 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7:WTF?!

OMG I remember when B. Bush said that. I was like, "she did not just come out her mouth like that". Crazy!

Anywhoo...So Justin's already smitten with her baby. Might Mommy be next?

Author's Response:

I'm glad I'm not the only one who thought that was completely out of line.  As for Justin and Si-Si...you never know...!  Thank you so much for your review!

Ki

The Strength by LoungeDyvaC (NC-17) [Comments - 8]

Noree Armstrong's life takes a sharp, unexpected turn when she decides to leave her native Canada to make her mark in California as an interior designer. Counting on her success to open some doors for her, she never imagined she would be working with the likes of JC Chasez.

But when their quickly blossoming friendship crosses the line, Noree must decide whether or not she has the strength to be with JC.



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 4
Wordcount: 18357 - Hits: 9549
Complete?: No - Published: Mar 07, 2009 - Last Updated: May 06, 2009 -
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Date: Mar 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - New Start

I like it and look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: LuLu Signed
Date: Mar 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Ooh JC's got a girlfriend. This just got really juice and it looks like Sasha's days are numbered. I can't wait to see the chemistry between Noree and JC continue to bubble until it inevitable explodes.

PS. LoL at the use of Googles Map. I do the same thing when I need to orientate locations around LA for my fic.