They call me Soul Serenity sometimes. So Leslie, Mzmillion, Soul Serenity, take your pick.
For all you authors, I will let you know now! I am the Archives Detailed Sex Pusher... if I read your story, I will ask for more sex and more details, lmao!!! I'm serious! I'm sorry, its just something about reading a story with Justin being 20+ years old and not having sex! It's weird and unrealistic to me. We all know he is too damn fine for him not to be getting some so make it real and let him screw!!!! lolololololol....
There was a penniless, wallet less, white boy in my house in the middle of North Philly with cuts and bruises and memory loss and all I had was a pocket knife, three bandages, and a cat to protect me. UPDATED 9/21
Ok at the beginning of this chapter, I was ready to give up on Sasha, b/c she was getting on my damn nerves but of course she had to come around....THANKFULLY.... they are my fave and I didn't want to divorce them.... oh and the sex, was so real, the description of her body, and all the things that would make a woman self conscious around a man while pregnant was pointed out but they worked it out... or rather Justin worked it out and I'm sooo happy for the physical....FINALLY! Please don't make me wait too much longer.
Woooo very good chapter....oh man, I just can't wait to see what happens when he gets his memory back and what happens between them then...lol.
so so sad, but this seems like a good goodbye... justin is a dumb ass for going to back to a cheater though.... but i know he is scared.
omg omg omg, it was so sweet....girl you know you gotta update soon, please.
I'm goinng to be self indulgent and say that the sex scene was all for me........lmao! I loved every sentence of it and you couldn't tell you had a problem writing it because it was long and great and.......I'm a freak!!! It was hot.. I had to stop in the middle and take a break and then read the rest because it was intense.... thank you thank you. I love that she likes Jess...its nice.
Author's Response: LOL it was ALL for you, boo! see how much i care? lol it was hard to write tho...glad you loved it *blushes*
Wowwww, Loved this chapter, it was like I could feel the weirdness between them, it was hard to read but it was very well written...I loved it.
so sad, i feel so bad for them, you can tell justin is trying to stop himself so much and she is trying not to show to much.....just say "i love you" and get it over with people.....lol.
fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck....this better not be it....I'll kill you...ok maybe not but I'll boycott.....something.
oh shit now.... justin playing hard to get
i love sash being the main pov, but a little tiny bit of justin is great too
hmmm, this chapter was good. I hope you know you did the breakfast part twice, with her microwaving and coming to the table twice...lol.
I thought his step moms name was Lisa and the dogs names were Buckley and Brennan with Bren being a girl.....
Either way I'm loving this story
Awwww.....this was a really good chapter. I hope this isn't ending soon.....I can't wait for more
Author's Response: hmm...no, i don't feel it ending soon, but my brain cells are dying trying to write these days. i have so many thoughts but no way of getting them on paper right... not that you wanted to know all that, haha. thanks for reviewing!
Your seriously doing me in... this story is soo not PG, I swear it was some freakiness talking about multiple orgasms and fingers and come on............*cries*..........you can do it, I know it....slap a big ole NC-17 rating up there...lol. I do hope for something soon!!!
Author's Response: LMFAO. i'm seriously cracking up. damn it...now you've convinced me! lol i'll TRY. i suck at the sex scenes tho... really. i read other visuals on here and i'm AMAZED and then i read my stuff and it's like... poop. LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL if i write one, i have to at least like it a little bit before i post it. if it's just embarassing, i won't put it up. deal? deal. lol
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