Penname: Nik [Contact] Real name: Nikki
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Intuition by ialwayzbesingin (R) [Comments - 34]

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Justin Timberlake is the top FBI agent in his field.  Head of the missing persons unit, he’s sought out and recovered dozens of people over the years, only to have his marriage fall apart in the end.  He’s depressed, that’s a given, but he’s always remained focused on his work.

Gracey Starvich has a gift.  She can see things.  Most people take her for a joke, but for the few that don’t, she uses her gifts to better the lives of innocent people.  Offered the job of a lifetime from the FBI, she’s eager to put her gifts to the test once and for all.

But Justin has never been one for psychic phenomenon.



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Suspense

Series: None
Chapters: 20
Wordcount: 66255 - Hits: 14353
Complete?: No - Published: Aug 27, 2013 - Last Updated: Oct 22, 2014 -
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Date: Dec 08, 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Seriously? OMG!!!!!

 

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Date: Dec 07, 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

The details of that room are terrifying!

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Date: Dec 08, 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

So this should be a movie...I'm just saying. I'm stalling on going to work for reading this! LOL

Reviewer: Nik Signed
Date: Dec 07, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

OMG, Creepy!!!! You've definitely captured attention with this.

Reviewer: Nik Signed
Date: Dec 07, 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Spooked the hell out of him, didn't she? I'm curious to see what else she discovers as well.

Reviewer: Nik Signed
Date: Dec 07, 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

*shudders* Damn the internet...

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Date: Dec 07, 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

This guy is seriously demented. I hope they get to all of the girls quickly!

Reviewer: Nik Signed
Date: Dec 07, 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

0_o

Reviewer: Nik Signed
Date: Dec 07, 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Great glimpse into the past and into Justin's inner turmoil in this chapter. Makes you really sympathize with Monica and Nat knowing she divorced him and took their child away out of necessity not out of selfishness.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying this. I'm hoping to finish it one day. i have lots written for future chapters...just trying to connect it all.

Distortion by god gave me style (R) [Comments - 5]
One smile on just a random work day changes the lives of three people forever. You never truly know who you're dealing with until it's too late...

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Suspense

Series: None
Chapters: 2
Wordcount: 3627 - Hits: 1067
Complete?: No - Published: Sep 01, 2013 - Last Updated: Sep 03, 2013 -
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Date: Sep 01, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: prologue

*Insert Slow Hand Clap* I like this, B. I really, really do! I've always liked those crime shows, I'm a bit morbid, but this is very engaging. Cannot wait to see how this sordid tale unfolds!

Reviewer: Nik Signed
Date: Sep 03, 2013 Title: Chapter 2: one

I like Kasey very much. She's a doll and Val is definitely someone to watch out for. She better back back! Lol. Great update. 

Healing Wounds. by B-Twice (R) [Comments - 58]
Past Featured Story

After a house foreclosure, failed marriage and other events. Melanie Jacobs needs a clean break. A new start at life. At the age of 28, she is convinced by her loving cousin that Los Angeles was the place for her to start the healing process... but another shot at love?

 

Runner up For: Best Characterization of Justin

 



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe

Series: None
Chapters: 19
Wordcount: 66537 - Hits: 17566
Complete?: No - Published: Sep 22, 2013 - Last Updated: May 09, 2015 -
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Reviewer: Nik Signed
Date: Oct 17, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Intriguing strart. Great descriptive writing, B!

Author's Response: Oh thanks NIK!! I've gotten alot of help through the years working with Coffee and reading your work :)

Reviewer: Nik Signed
Date: Oct 17, 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Just say Yes.

Melanie definitely is going through turmoil! I'm glad that she decided to go ahead and move with her cousin and I LOVE Sanaa Lathan so I can't wait to see what is next!

Autumn Nights and Texas Skies by god gave me style (PG) [Comments - 4]
She spots the superstar a few minutes later, a Miller Lite in his right hand as he stands tall amongst the younger girls who swoon over him. He laughs over something one of them has said and brings the bottle up to his thin lips, tilting it slightly to allow the drink to enter his mouth. He's dressed as a 1930's gangster, a black, pinstripe fedora sits cocked to the side on top of head with a matching suit covering his strong build. He's beautiful just as he is now, nothing more than a high school senior. Next year, everything will be different.

Categories: Challenges, Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe
Challenges: POP!TOBER FICTION WRITING CHALLENGE 2013

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 6490 - Hits: 622
Complete?: Yes - Published: Oct 21, 2013 - Last Updated: Oct 21, 2013 -
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Reviewer: Nik Signed
Date: Oct 22, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: one

I loved your writing voice in this. As I told you before, I really loved the description during the football scene. I totally felt like I was at the game and you know that I secretly LOVE football thanks to my ex, lol, so it was great for me. Great decision moving to Texas!! :-)

Noir: Strip...Tease...Play II by Keediluv (NC-17) [Comments - 2]
Sequel to Strip...Tease...Play.  The night of the VMA's.  Naughty things happen. :)

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Chris Kirkpatrick, JC Chasez, Joey Fatone, Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Romance
Challenges: POP!TOBER FICTION WRITING CHALLENGE 2013

Series: Relax, It's Just Sex
Chapters: 4
Wordcount: 5190 - Hits: 2489
Complete?: Yes - Published: Oct 26, 2013 - Last Updated: Oct 26, 2013 -
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Date: Oct 27, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Back At It

The face! :-O STEAMY!!! Great writing!

Author's Response:

Lol thanks honey!!

Ki