Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama
Challenges: THE RETELLING
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Wordcount: 22222 - Hits: 6080
Complete?: Yes - Published: Dec 01, 2013 - Last Updated: Dec 19, 2013 -
A shell is he? I wonder how miserable his wife really makes him and why?
Author's Response: *looks innocent*
Vanessa definitely sounds like a beast...but a smart one.
Author's Response: Exactly what I was going for!
Bum bum bummmmm! The plot thickens!
Author's Response: ;o)
Nice start. That twitching is kind of creepy! Lol
Author's Response: It may get creepier lol
After a chance meeting at a coffee shop, Ari and JC develop a friendship that helps them both through some rough patches. Can JC make LA feel like home for Ari? Can Ari help JC get excited about something again after all of his recent disapointments?
I absolutely love the start of this and you have a great writing voice!
Author's Response: Woo, a new reader! Enjoy the rest of the chapters and thanks for taking the time to review!
Yum, yum, yum, my friend! Loved this chapter! You already know that her sister cracks me up!
Adorable! Loved it! :)
Author's Response: Thank you :) And thank you for reading.
It was supposed to be a 20 hour ride on his new, vintage Bonneville Triumph. But a snowy, slippery night has landed him in the tiny town of Cloudcroft, New Mexico, where the Sheriff is plotting against him and the town's best bike mechanic is a woman he can't stop thinking about. Inspired by seeing JC on a motorcycle. The muse works in mysterious ways.
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Oooh I haven't been here in a loooooong time! LOL. I downloaded the eBook, however, for nostalgia's sake I'll leave you chapter by chapter reviews like we used to do in the olden days as often as I can! :) This has a wonderful start. The descriptions and tones from the beginning with how the bike just "spoke" to him and he had to have it after one ride was engaging. Cannot wait to see how this ties in with Katori and her family. Interest additionally picqued since I've now lived in New Mexico!