The fantasy: one of them choosing one of us
twenty-something, addicted to music, love to write, working on my Master's in psychology, waiting to fall in love...
She's a songwriter from Chicago. He's a music producer living the life in LA. One performance at a club leads to their chance meeting. She immediately dislikes him, yet he's drawn to her. So what happens when they begin to understand one another?
omg! what's wrong with JC?!
awesome update :) I love that they're getting back on track together and getting the closeness back.
sigh....yea! she's moving in!! definitely a step in the right direction for them I think. Awesome update! :)
hmmm...I wanna go skinny dipping with him!! lol...loved the chapter, as usual :) I thought it was funny though that he was dreaming about a pregnancy test...is this a foreshadowing of things to come???
dude! totally had me crying there at the end with JC singing and playing the piano and with the ring and the propsal and, and, and....sigh....it was great! I love these two together. I have loved seeing them go through the ups and downs (it's been frustrating as hell at times, but well worth it!!).
Author's Response: Ha, girl I always think of you now when I add the drama. I know it's been a hair pulling adventure so I figured some good was due, for now ;) I'm glad I could patch up the roller coaster for the moment with this and bring you a happy chapter! Thanks so much for reviewing! And I love these too so much! I don't ever want to end the story!
uhm...can you say mood swings? lol...is it possible our little Carly is pregnant?? hmmm....??? :)
Author's Response: Dun dun dun.. lol Who knows where my fictional mind will take me :)
awwww!!!! LOVED IT! Great ending. I could totally feel Jace's pain at the beginning and was seriously going to be livid if Carly didn't show up. But, she did which saved me from having to hunt her down! lol...and yea!! They're pregnant! I knew it!! So cute...I hope you do write a sequel :)
Just read this all the way through and I really liked it! I'm starting the sequel now... :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Let me know how you like the sequel!
lol...so, Kristen was pretty calm and collected for meeting our favorite group of guys. I'm guessing this story takes place before they got huge and famous?
ok, I know you already have this story all written, but...back story on Brittney? What did she do at Jive before being asked to go on tour? Shutting up and reading....
aaawww...JC's in love! uhm...but why isn't Kristen freaking out more about his attention? I know I would be freaking out and be WIDE awake if JC was rubbing my back and carrying me to bed. Ahem...whew....
"It was one time!" ahahahaha!!!
and the elevator scene between JC and Kristen? so cute!
hahahaha!!! loved the dirty message the girls left Lance!! that was awesome :)
Kristen swung the door open and her eyes fell upon the most gorgeous guy she knew. Her eyes traveled from taking every detail from his gray sweatpants, to his blue t-shirt; showing off his muscular arms that she loved, to his mouth; that the sexiest voice she ever heard came out from between the most kissable lips, his blue eyes that she easily gets lost into, than to the hair that she loved playing with.
mmm....I'd like to open MY door and see JC standing there like this!
not gonna lie...having a hard time with the whole Lance and Brittney thing! lol...but enjoying the story so far :)
aawww! I want JC to take care of me when I'm sick...
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