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Reviewer: Mia
Anonymous
Date: 12/13/05 - 06:04PM
Title: Dolce and Gabbana, The Village, and A Kiss
lol she finna do tha nasty lol. oooooooo i kno tha next chapter gon be on fire lol im tooo thirsty now. she fina get some timberlove lol
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks so much for reviewing! I hope you enjoy the next chapter as much as you think you will. ;)
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
Signed
Date: 12/13/05 - 05:31PM
Title: Dolce and Gabbana, The Village, and A Kiss
Oh snap, Mel's about to get her freak on! :) But how sad will that be when he's calling out for Maddison the whole time? And that dress...lawd my cheap ass felt for her when she had to pay for that. lol I love how they are together, that hanger, madwoman part at the beginning was cute. But things are about to get so messed up though... tell me, why'd you have to go and make things so complicated? What happened to Avril? First she starts getting all girly, then she starts dressing/looking like Hilary Duff...lol anyways...well, at least it was fun for her while it lasted. Oooh, what if he's bad in bed? haha, then she could just tell him right then and there as she's kicking him out. haha, I'm mean, I doubt Mel would do something like that though. Good update, update soon!
Author's Response: Girl, you know that I just adore you. Thanks so much for reviewing. I'm so glad that you are liking this story and find Justin and Mel's relationship so cute. (that's what I was going for, lol). You were a little random there with the Avril stuff, but that's what I love about you. Thanks again for reading and reviewing--I really appreciate it.
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 12/06/05 - 01:07PM
Title: Liar, Liar Pants on Fire
Ahh... I foresee badness, I do, but they're just so darn CUTE!!!! What with him being all hot and touchy feely and her being so bashful and... oh dear Lord I'm doing it again. Oh who cares, I can;t sit here and tell you how fabulou syou are enough. One of these days you may or may not get sick of the shameless flattery, but 'til then I'll just sit here and butter you up!!!
Author's Response: Aww, you are just too sweet! Ugh--I just love you! Thank you so much for the wonderful compliments. I'm so happy that you like this story so much, that makes me feel really great (to put it mildly). Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing and I hope to read another review from you on the next chapter. :)
Reviewer: Barb
Anonymous
Date: 12/06/05 - 01:46AM
Title: Liar, Liar Pants on Fire
lol I can feel some sort of drama coming up! can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Drama? If you'e read any of my other stories you know that I hate drama....LOL! Mwahaha! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: glitter15
Anonymous
Date: 12/06/05 - 01:42AM
Title: Liar, Liar Pants on Fire
Awww, I'm sorry I haven't reviewed until now, but this story is just so cute. Hahah. I love Bobby and Mel, they are too cute. They remind me of me and my retarded ass brothers, who I can't stand and drive me nuts on a pretty much daily basis, but whatever. lmfao. Poor Mel....too bad she can't just tell Justin that she's not Madison. Seems like he's already starting to notice the difference though. I just hope you don't pull one of those scenes where they have to do a switch, and Justin is trying to fuck Madison instead of Mel or something horrid like that! ROFL. Only my dirrty ass would worry about that, but you know how I am if you ready any of my stories. LOL. Aren't you gonna write a sex scene for me in this one honey? Smooch, smooch. Pweaaaaaase. HAHAHA. :p Great job so far hon...=)
Author's Response: Awww, thank you! Writing for Bobby and Mel's relationship is one of my favorite parts of this story so I'm glad you enjoy them so much. As far as that not so nice scene you're worried about, I don't forsee that happening in the future. ;) So you want a sex scene huh? Hmmm.....I'll think about it. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: MeMyself
Anonymous
Date: 12/06/05 - 12:44AM
Title: Liar, Liar Pants on Fire
He's so hot! How can anyone just be his friend?! lol She's crazy! She couldla been with him if she had told the truth, he seemed to be cool about her real job, but NOOO, she's kept up with the LIES, and he's not gonna be happy when he finds that out. Ha, bobby is cool. I want a cool brother lol more soon :D
Author's Response: LOL! Everyone seems to like Bobby and wish they had a brother like him. I wish I did. ;) I don't know how anyone could just be his friend either especically when it's obvious that he likes her. Thanks so much for reviewing and I can't wait to read what you think of this next chapter. :)
Reviewer: broken_souL
Anonymous
Date: 12/06/05 - 12:08AM
Title: Prologue
Aww, I loved the flirtation! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! An update is coming very soon.
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
Signed
Date: 12/04/05 - 12:34PM
Title: Game Time
I'm surprised that Bobby didn't come in after he heard the glass breaking and mess it up sooner. But I guess he was so focused on the game that maybe he didn't hear it. Anyways, I like Mel's narration...the way she describes things and thinks about them is interesting. And I hope she does persue a relationship with Justin, obviously they're cute together. Update soon!
Author's Response: To be honest I sort of forgot about Bobby and that he should have heard that glass break. Let's just say (as you said) that he was too into the game to notice. ;) Anywho, thanks so much for the compliments and I'm happy to read that you like Mel so much. I'm updating soon and I hope to hear what you think of it. Thanks so much for reading and leaving such great feedback for me.
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 12/03/05 - 07:13AM
Title: Game Time
Yeah, because she's so not going to get it together with him and yet handily forget to confess her little sin of lying about her name, and that's so not going to cause trouble with her overly famous sister... ya know, this is so like last week when my friend told me she had a crush on a guy still pining for her ex, you know when you can just see the crap before it even happens??? Except that me comparing story characters to a flesh and blood person obviously means that you have me far too invested in this story already and perhaps I ought to get out more??? *lol* That said, I think it's testament to how generally fabulous you are that this thing is only 6 chapters along and I was already staring at the screen practically willing Justin to kiss her despite the fact I foresee only doom if she doesn;t tell him her real name and in a speedy fashion... *takes deep breath after big run on sentence*. Okay, shutting up now, you know I love ya!!!
Author's Response: Wow, a nice long review--just what I like to see, lol! Thanks so much for taking the time to review, I really appreciate it. :) I'm so flattered to read that you're comparing my story to real life. You are just too sweet with your wonderful compliments. I just don't know what to say *blushes*. Thanks again and I hope to read more from you on the next chapter.
Reviewer: MeMyself
Anonymous
Date: 12/03/05 - 12:14AM
Title: Game Time
Cute :D She needs to tell the truth though! More soon :D
Author's Response: Justin will find out eventually. ;) Thanks for reading and more is on its way.
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