Reviews For My Sister
Reviewer: broken_souL Anonymous Date: 11/18/05 - 02:21AM Title: Case of the Mistaken Identity

omg you got me sighing all dreamily over here girl! update soon!

Author's Response: Awe, thank you! :) I'm working on an update right now and I hope to have it posted no later than Wednesday night. Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Reviewer: Memyself Anonymous Date: 11/18/05 - 12:18AM Title: Case of the Mistaken Identity

Ok I get it. lol Well ok. If this is the way ya wanna go :D But in Ch. 1 towards the end it says "wishing it was Justin's arms around her" or whatever. Shouldn't it be Patrick, since she hasn't met Justin yet? Anywho more soon, I like it :D

Author's Response: I'm glad I didn't confuse you too much. ;) You were right about my little typo and you'll be happy to know that I've fixed it. Thanks so much for continuing to read my story even after I changed. I really appreciate it. Thanks again!


Reviewer: Memyself Anonymous Date: 11/17/05 - 11:54PM Title: Case of the Mistaken Identity

What!? I thought I reveiwed this?! Um..I'm still confused lol


Reviewer: anonymous Anonymous Date: 11/17/05 - 10:04PM Title: Prologue

well.. im confused now.. it seems like the story changed a lot since the last time that i read it, what's up?.. the last thing i read was when she unplugged the phone, now it's talking about being in a club.. what happens after the phone is unplugged???

Author's Response: Read the author's note and you'll get it. :)


Reviewer: Mia Anonymous Date: 11/15/05 - 05:57PM Title: None

lol i cant be her! lol i woulda did tha same thing u kno pluggin tha phone out and stuff but....kissin him ova and ova i woulda eventually told him i wasnt his gf. lol his lips make me confess lol or at least they would ;)


Reviewer: JustinsCaramelSenorita Anonymous Date: 11/15/05 - 04:34PM Title: None

okay, well WTF Melony? JUST TELL HIM ..ugh, i'm really waiting for this so called "redeeming" that you told me she was gonna do, lolol. you know she obviously doesn't think with her head ..it's simple really ..have breakfast ..erase the message when he's not around ..leave ..and then CALL back when he's not at home or whatever ..and leave the same fucking message. GOSH ..it's 2nd grade people. lolol ..well it probably WOULDN'T be that hard ..but she pretended to be her sister and got away with it ..it shouldn't be that hard ..and you know ..Justin's Madison's boyfriend ..why the hell can't he tell that's not her. i mean he's noticing little things that you know ..are weird but he's not puzzling it together. AHHHH ..just when i was starting to like melony ..i mean it's an inconvient circumstance ..you just have to FIX IT ..duh. i can't wait for the next chapter, girlie.


Reviewer: Hollie Anonymous Date: 11/15/05 - 01:52PM Title: None

Oh dear Lord... ti sis not going to go well. She broke up with him - what happens when famous superstar sister gets snapped with some other guy and Justin thinks he's being played? Or when he hears his messages? Much as I like her, she's being deeply stupid!!!! Ugh, I am far too emotionally invested in your stories, I think I need a boyfriend *lol*


Reviewer: Gigi Anonymous Date: 11/15/05 - 03:00AM Title: None

Update and soon because I want to see this train wreck.


Reviewer: kahlymilla Signed Date: 11/15/05 - 01:17AM Title: Prologue

I have twin but ooh I would never pretend to be her, at least not in that situation. lol. And what madison did was just....no words. she should've had the guts to tell him in person.


Reviewer: Memyself Anonymous Date: 11/14/05 - 11:53PM Title: None

And now I'm back! From outer space! I just walked in here to find you with that sad look upon your face! :D You missed me right? :) Well, I'm back! Ok, so mhmm..Madison sounds a little typical blonde ditz. lol Breaking up with someone on the answering machine? Ooook lol But uh oh, what's Melony doing?! What am I saying..it's hard to resist Justin. But this is baaad. She's gonna have to hide it so Justin nor Madison found out. *sigh* Well, at least she got a couple of good kisses out of it! :D More soon!





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