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Reviewer: Madcrazychick
Signed
Date: 04/06/06 - 10:43PM
Title: Words I Couldn't Say
I could just picture her drunk dialing him and slurring her heartfelt message into the phone. lol I'm glad that he's checking up on her, even if it was via her brother. That just means that there's still hope for them. Update soon!
Author's Response: Glad you liked this chapter and thank you so much for taking the time to leave a review. I really apprecate it a lot! Thanks again and I hope to hear what you think of the next chapter too. :)
Reviewer: Barb
Anonymous
Date: 04/06/06 - 10:25PM
Title: Words I Couldn't Say
OOH..more soon!!!! Author's Response: More is coming!!
Reviewer: Gigi
Signed
Date: 04/06/06 - 09:50PM
Title: Words I Couldn't Say
Can't wait to see what happens. Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: maureen
Anonymous
Date: 04/06/06 - 09:31PM
Title: Words I Couldn't Say
really really good please update very soon.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!!
Reviewer: Mr_Mrs_JRT
Anonymous
Date: 04/06/06 - 09:24PM
Title: Words I Couldn't Say
oh my god he still love her to sweet but why did you leave us hanging like that damn you said it was short but not that short but no complaints her it was a good chapter so please hurry and update. Shronda Author's Response: LOL! Sorry the chapter was so short and I did kind of leave you hanging there didn\'t I? I tend to do that a lot. ;) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing and I\'m so glad that you liked the chapter. More is coming very soon.
Reviewer: Tasha
Anonymous
Date: 04/06/06 - 12:49AM
Title: Pieces
This version is better than the first. I really like this story. Update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I like it better too.
Reviewer: jenna
Anonymous
Date: 04/05/06 - 11:07PM
Title: None
well i think both ending could have been okay . the whole rape thing was completely out of left field and the ending where he doesnt want her there well it could deffently have its own little twist.... either way i would love to read more so please update soon with the next chapter
Reviewer: angel_from_africa
Anonymous
Date: 04/04/06 - 01:02AM
Title: Prologue
Keep the rape!! It was deifnately good for the story, and after all it's fiction... Justin would never do that, but hey it makes for an intresting read...
Reviewer: Danielle
Anonymous
Date: 04/02/06 - 03:02PM
Title: None
post the other version. i wasn't feeling how he just forced himself on her like that. kind of turned me off the story a little but not enough to stop reading it since i'm postin this.
Reviewer: meaghan
Anonymous
Date: 03/27/06 - 08:28PM
Title: Pieces
ok, well, that's better. i really didn't think that you meant he raped her but it was kinda shocking to read it. but this is better i think, i like to see justin all broken hearted and sad. cant wait for more!!
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