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Reviewer: Tasha
Anonymous
Date: 03/27/06 - 04:53PM
Title: None
I think you should leave it. But I'm still interested in reading the other one. Maybe you could put that one up temporarily.
Reviewer: Tanya
Anonymous
Date: 03/27/06 - 04:25PM
Title: None
i didnt get a chance to read the other version so i dont really know what your talking about... but really i like this version and probably would like it alot better than if you posted the other. i love this story and cant wait till you update again :o) hopefully it wont take you forever.
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 03/27/06 - 04:20PM
Title: Pieces
I like this one better :) Not just cause I don't want Justin to be a rapist (lol) but I think this one just fits right. Anyway, that little mix up now over, more soon!!
Reviewer: jrtluva05
Signed
Date: 03/27/06 - 03:55PM
Title: Pieces
Much better hun.. i like this ending better.
Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 03/27/06 - 02:47PM
Title: Pieces
I think this chapter suits more the story! I mean the way you've been carring the characters and all. Can't wait for a new update!
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 03/27/06 - 11:41AM
Title: None
Now having read what everybody else has said, I think Jaz has hit it on the head - I couldn't put my finger on it earlier but that's exactly what I was thinking, that given how he's been in previous chapters this seems a little too out of the blue... like there wasn't even a hint of anything nasty lurking beneath. But as, ever - it's your story, so you go with your gut :o)
Reviewer: Tren
Anonymous
Date: 03/27/06 - 01:17AM
Title: Pieces
iunno about yall but ima freak and that was hot!! lmao i like it for some strange reason and i think its highly crazy lol forreal tho lol seriously that was crazy plz update iunno if JT would do that lol
Reviewer: Tren
Anonymous
Date: 03/27/06 - 01:15AM
Title: Pieces
iunno about yall but ima freak and that was hot!! lmao i like it for some strange reason and i think its highly crazy lol forreal tho lol seriously that was crazy plz update iunno if JT would do that lol
Reviewer: Jaz
Anonymous
Date: 03/27/06 - 12:47AM
Title: None
I haven't been able to read and reveiw and much because ever since the upgrade my computer won't access this website for some reason and it won't let me reveiw. But AHEM, honestly, I think you should go with what makes you comfortable. I think it's an interesting twist, unique. BUT, I honestly think it's a little random. Kinda what you did with your story before you know? Like it doesn't seem the FIT. I understand the shock factor but it seems so off with the rest of the story that to tell you the truth I think that the other version might fit better. I think this one is just too random considering how the rest of the story is and the previous chapters. BUT, still do what you think is best. That's my opinion though. maybe post both. Being the lover I am, I dont like violence and crazy drama so I'll prolly go with the other version. lol But whatever's cool. Later
Reviewer: Barb
Anonymous
Date: 03/26/06 - 11:51PM
Title: None
I say it depends on how the 'rape' senario would affect the end of the story...so if it's not vital to the rest of the story in a major way, then post the other version. However, if it is important, then keep it...that's my opinion
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