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Reviewer: Tasha
Anonymous
Date: 03/26/06 - 10:59PM
Title: Prologue
While I would love for him not to be like this agter how well he has been so far ,I think that fate is sonething that we can't control and maybe just maybe it was meant for you to post this chapter instead of the other. I really don't want him to have raped her cause i don't want her to feel pain like that .I think he he should yell and be pissed off but not rape , I don't know I say do what you feel is best you are a good writer so i'll love it no matter what . damn that was long. lol
Reviewer: justinzgirlkb
Signed
Date: 03/26/06 - 08:21PM
Title: None
because i'm a hopeless loser who believes in happy endings, i don't want him to have raped her. :( honestly, i thought it would be a dream or something, if anything......:)
Reviewer: Mr_Mrs_JRT
Anonymous
Date: 03/26/06 - 05:06PM
Title: None
Please use the other version because i can't stomach Justin doing something like this i loved your justin character i say use the other version
Reviewer: Dreamer
Signed
Date: 03/26/06 - 04:59PM
Title: None
Use the other one. I was reading some of the reviews too and no matter how amazing Justin was all story long, your not gonna find one girl who's gonna forgive him for raping Melony... like i think you should leave it so he knows she's beenlying, but just let him get super mad and stuff...thats just what it think anyway
Reviewer: daat
Anonymous
Date: 03/26/06 - 04:45PM
Title: None
Keep it! I like that everything's now in the open.
Reviewer: nikki g.
Anonymous
Date: 03/26/06 - 03:53PM
Title: None
i don't think that you should change the story bc this will make it that much more interesting cause it's like...how can they recover after this. I like it this way, but I would really like to see the one too. please update soon and thanks. J&B!
Reviewer: maureen
Anonymous
Date: 03/26/06 - 03:22PM
Title: None
I really don't care which way the story goes I'm sure you have excellent judgement either way, but please update soon. you are driving me crazy.
Reviewer: Ann
Anonymous
Date: 03/26/06 - 03:20PM
Title: None
It's still a great story!! The story is no where near ruined! you are a great writer so keep up the good work, and i bet whichever version you leave up, we'll love it! lol it's all keeping me on edge
i think you should leave it!! I've never read a story like this and it makes it intresting to see one of the guys in that light... please dont change it!!
Reviewer: jrtluva05
Signed
Date: 03/26/06 - 01:16PM
Title: None
i think it made it more interesting, but i was completely shocked.. you should post both of the endings, an let us decide which one is better :P
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