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Reviewer: Anna
Anonymous
Date: 03/25/06 - 09:38PM
Title: Pieces
THAT WAS UNEXPECTED!!! I can not believe he raped her!! Even though she's a sweet enough girl to be herself in the first place, he's an asshole for raping her! I probably would go tell the tabloids on him now lol. For every bad thing that comes to him, he deserve it!
Reviewer: Mr_Mrs_JRT
Anonymous
Date: 03/25/06 - 09:24PM
Title: Prologue
PLEASE HAVE THIS BE A DREAM PLEASE BECAUSE I CAN"T BELIEVE JUSTIN WOULD DO SOMETHING LIKE THAT TO HER AND I WOULDN"T WANT THEM TO BE TOGETHER AFTER THIS PLEASE LET IT BE A DREAM LET IT START BACK WHERE HE SLAM HER AGAINST THE WALL AND INSTEAD OF RAPING HER HE"LL JUST LEAVE PLEASE DON'T RUIN HIS CHARACTER LIKE THAT PLEASE DON"T I"M BEGGING YOU DON'T DO IT ANYWAYS GREAT CHAPTER
Reviewer: Dreamer
Signed
Date: 03/25/06 - 08:41PM
Title: Pieces
OMG!!!!! I can't believe Justin just raped her!! How could you do that??? Now he's just an f-ing asshole and she'll never forgive him so they'll never be together. I can't believe you just did that....lol. But please don't make her pregnant, like she delivers babies, she should know to get the day after pill. God you h ave to update, I can't believe that. If I was her I'd go straight to the cops with that story and screw Justin right over. Like what was he thinking? Like if she went to the tabliods saying he raped her, the cops would definitely get involved, right? unless you make this chapter will big dream which I kinda wish but don't at the same time....lol.... this is a long review....anyway that was so good and you so better update soon, or i'll review for all the other chapters that i haven't and stalk you until you do.....lol...i won't really stalk you...lol
Reviewer: meaghan
Anonymous
Date: 03/25/06 - 08:07PM
Title: Pieces
what just happened??!! i wasn't ready for all that!! i need a moment to gather myself! ok, yea, now that i'm relaxed i loved it and i'm so glad for the update! cant wait for more!
Reviewer: angel_from_africa
Anonymous
Date: 03/25/06 - 07:35PM
Title: Pieces
OMG!! Please update soon!! I can't beleive he did that!!
Reviewer: Tasha
Anonymous
Date: 03/25/06 - 06:44PM
Title: Pieces
He done lost his damn mind. I don;t giving a flying duck what she lied about he had no right, forget the tadbloids she need the police and he need his dick cut the hell off and her brother are to whoop his ass
Reviewer: lauren
Anonymous
Date: 03/25/06 - 06:02PM
Title: Pieces
OMG! speechless
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
Signed
Date: 03/25/06 - 04:33PM
Title: Pieces
Oh and please update soon! That has got to be some kind of horrible dream she had.
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
Signed
Date: 03/25/06 - 04:30PM
Title: Pieces
Wow. That ending was...just wow. I never would have expected him to flip out like that. Some yelling maybe, hurt feelings...but that muthafucker raped her! The whole time I was thinking, this is a nightmare right...this has got to be a nightmare cause Justin's is sweet and nice, he's not...this muthafucker who's
throwing her against the wall and about to rape her, right?!? And then he...*sighs* I don't care how many lies she told, once he started to get abusive all chances for sympathy for him was over. He's a bastard and Melony is better without him.
Reviewer: TERESA
Anonymous
Date: 03/18/06 - 12:29PM
Title: Par For The Course
LOVE IT!!! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON!!! CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!!!
Author's Response: More is on the way. I\'m almost finished with the next update. Thanks!
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