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Reviewer: Timberlake
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Date: 05/16/06 - 07:11PM
Title: Chapter 1
oh, me likey. the way your wrote this was so smooth and lovely. i'm going to continue. . .lol
Reviewer: kahlymilla
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Date: 11/01/05 - 09:43PM
Title: Chapter 1
Milla: Just going around looking for something to read and came across your story. The first chapter seems very intriguing. I always like when one character is keeping secrets because it adds drama to the story and I can't wait for that drama to unfold. I also like happy endings. Hopefully once she tells Justin about everything he'll understand. And her father getting remarried so quickly is kinda sad considering what they've been through. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. It's much appreciated and I'll try to update soon, however, I work slow sometimes :-)
Reviewer: isela
Anonymous
Date: 10/31/05 - 05:13PM
Title: Chapter 1
This is a great start, I'm hooked. I like the dynamic between J and Z. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks. I will try to keep the writers block from creeping up on me.
Reviewer: stacey
Anonymous
Date: 10/31/05 - 10:22AM
Title: Chapter 1
i really like this story! it's written unbelievably well and the story line is extremely interesting. really sad but interesting nonetheless. hope you continue it.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comments. Yeah, it's a little sad. I hope to make it happier as it goes on, but who knows where the story will take me. ;-)
Reviewer: Gigi
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Date: 10/31/05 - 04:24AM
Title: Chapter 1
Hey update ok.
Author's Response: I will try to do so asap.
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