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Reviewer: jrtluva05
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Date: 07/28/06 - 10:53AM
Title: Something Rotten in the State of Denmark
lol that was cute.. i had a problem readin the update tho.. it's all squished together an the spacing is not there.. but yeah.. good chapter!! update soon!
Author's Response: Ye Gods - I have no idea why it's done that, it never usually does... Thanks for letting me know!
Reviewer: jrtluva05
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Date: 07/28/06 - 10:53AM
Title: Something Rotten in the State of Denmark
lol that was cute.. i had a problem readin the update tho.. it's all squished together an the spacing is not there.. but yeah.. good chapter!! update soon!
Reviewer: CoachTiffany
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Date: 07/28/06 - 01:10AM
Title: Something Rotten in the State of Denmark
If it's so hot and they get sweaty just sitting around they might as well just get it on again and get all sweaty for a good reason...not like they haven't done it twice before...who needs sorority girls and basketball players anyway? Granted I am a sorority girl but in this situation I think Justin would be much happier with a girl who has a dislike for the Greek system...if you catch my drift ;)
Author's Response: See, this is why I missed your reviews so much after NSMB went away!!
Reviewer: meaghan
Anonymous
Date: 07/26/06 - 09:46PM
Title: The Trouble With Me
YEA!!! i love getting stuff from his point of view. cant wait for more!!
Author's Response: Hee, Justin's one of a kind alright :o) Thanks hon!
Reviewer: CoachTiffany
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Date: 07/26/06 - 12:13PM
Title: The Trouble With Me
I read this when you posted it on your site and now I've read it again and I loved it both times...although I know your writing style my wishful thinking (keyword: wishful as I know it won't be happening) wants you just to fix things and make Justin and Cara happy ASAP...but like I said...I know better than that :)
Reviewer: Violeta
Anonymous
Date: 07/25/06 - 08:29PM
Title: The Trouble With Me
Great chapter. And I mean great. All of it. Justin's insecurities seem to be showing up more now, and I loved the way he thought of JC, just like I loved the way they interact with each other. You're doing a wonderful job describing the characters' feelings dear. Now, I need more please :D
Author's Response: Justin? Insecure? *whistles innocently*
Reviewer: CoachTiffany
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Date: 07/17/06 - 05:30PM
Title: Relapse
What a wonderful surprise to come home from vacation to updates...and to see that Cara and Justing hooked up yet again...I have to say that I love it...but knowing you nothing will come easily for the two...that would just take away all of the fun you find in torturing your readers wouldn't it? Haha loved it :)
Author's Response: You know me far too well, Nicole.
Reviewer: Danielle
Anonymous
Date: 07/12/06 - 03:03AM
Title: Relapse
you should clarify whose point of view you are in, sometimes it takes me awhile to get it and it would be easier for you to put the name. i was what exactly does she mean by relapse, i keep thinking about someone doing drugs until i got to the end of the chapter. i'm expecting her to be pregnant, babies bring drama and that's what this story is mostly about. Author's Response: It would be easier for you if I put the name, sure, but I like to make sure my readers are paying attention ;o) There\'s only two of them giving perspectives, and the clues are there to tell you who\'s speaking pretty much straight off - Cara for example\'s not likely to talk about herself in the third person, and if somebody\'s talking about working in the library it\'s probably not going to be Justin. Unless of course I\'m being purposely cryptic about who\'s speaking for a reason... (I ought to put a warning label on my stories, I forget that not everybody knows I\'m evil and allergic to allowing my readers an easy ride *lol*)
Reviewer: meaghan
Anonymous
Date: 07/11/06 - 07:43PM
Title: Relapse
how could u do that to me!!?? leave me out of all the gross and yet somehow sexy details??!! i'm gonna come to that island and throw a computer at u and get more NOW!!! :)
Author's Response: leave me out of all the gross and yet somehow sexy details *lmao* I don\'t know why but that just really cracked me up *lol* But no coming to the island to throw things at me, you wouldn;t want to hit poor old JC here by accident would you? *hides behind JC*
Reviewer: jrtluva05
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Date: 07/11/06 - 01:38PM
Title: Relapse
lmao! that was just too good!! lol damn cara & justin did it again.. wel hopefully they'll keep doing it.. an end up together hehe hint hint lol great update girl! can't wait for more
Author's Response: I\'m sorry, was that a hint? I think I missed it ;o)
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