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Reviewer: Gigi
Signed
Date: 03/12/06 - 05:49AM
Title: Chapter 8
Who kidnapped him and why?
Author's Response: I never really intended on saying who. I suppose I didn\'t plan that out very well. Going to have to re-think this. May not state a name, but I\'ll figure out a way to explain a little bit more in the story. Thanks for your comment.
Reviewer: Courtney
Anonymous
Date: 03/11/06 - 11:12PM
Title: Chapter 8
Those last two chapters were absouletely awesome! You are doing amazing things with this story and i can't wait for another update!
Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you are enjoying the story. :)
Reviewer: Gigi
Signed
Date: 03/11/06 - 10:10PM
Title: Chapter 7
Michael's an asshole and a jerk.
Author's Response: He certainly wasn\'t using his seven second delay, that\'s for sure. :)
Reviewer: Kat
Anonymous
Date: 02/26/06 - 11:17AM
Title: Chapter 6
great chapter love how the characters are developing
Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Kat
Anonymous
Date: 02/17/06 - 08:59PM
Title: Chapter 15, Chapter 16-18 (Chapter 5)
*claps*... an update this makes me happy after a long week of midterms... good chapters.
Author's Response: Hope your exams went well, and thank you.
Reviewer: Courtney
Anonymous
Date: 02/17/06 - 08:48AM
Title: Chapter One
That was a really great update. I love how they've bonded and how they're pretty much together now. Hopefully they can work together to get past all of their pain, and yeah, i'm still dying to know all about what happened in their pasts
Author's Response: I tried responding earlier and thought I had accidently deleted your review. Glad I didn\'t because I would\'ve felt like an ass. Thank you and it is coming. :)
Reviewer: Gigi
Signed
Date: 02/17/06 - 04:12AM
Title: Chapter 15, Chapter 16-18 (Chapter 5)
That chapter or chapters were really cute.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Gigi
Signed
Date: 02/12/06 - 07:14PM
Title: Chapter One
No problem. I just want to know who was behind the kidnapping? Because at one point he says "I smelled her I smelled her perfume". What was that about?
Author's Response: I was just asking about the dialogue because people have commented in the past, that it\'s sometimes hard to follow with the way I write it. I haven\'t said, as far as who was behind the kidnapping. It was a panic reaction to his having smelled the same perfume on someone.
Reviewer: Kat
Anonymous
Date: 02/12/06 - 12:29PM
Title: Chapter 14
okay loved it. I'm official addicted to this story. Hope theres an update soon
Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you are enjoying the story. When it happens, the next update should be longer than this one.
Reviewer: Gigi
Signed
Date: 02/11/06 - 11:31PM
Title: Chapter 14
I want to know more. Who did what?
Author's Response: Who did what? Is this plot-wise or a problem with the way I\'ve written the dialogue?
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