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Reviewer: dizzyupthegirl
Anonymous
Date: 06/11/05 - 02:26AM
Title: Chapter 33
man, i'll admit that most of the time both justin and melanie be pissing me off! just the way they treat each other. one minute they care, then they're fighting or ignoring each other and when mel should be mad JT she's not. i would've fucking HEATED if i figured out he'd ditched me for that slut kelice. who cares how hot she is? well, yeah i've been reading this for the longest, i just never reviewed. sorry about that. so, anyway, i'm hooked now. plz update soon! and give that bizz-niitch kelice what she deserves already!
Reviewer: NIkki G.
Anonymous
Date: 06/10/05 - 11:10PM
Title: Chapter 33
I lovin' it and hope that you update very soon. Thanks. J&B!
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 06/10/05 - 03:04PM
Title: Chapter 21
Yay! This shit is workin! She’s looking at me anxiously, like she wants me to put it on her. Yeah, I’m a put it on you girl. Can you handle it? Yeah, I know you want this milk in your Cocoa Puffs. ROFL! The best line EVER! LMFAO!
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 06/10/05 - 02:49PM
Title: Chapter 20
OMFG! NO!!! Melanie's gonna play his ass. There's just no way.
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 06/10/05 - 02:26PM
Title: Chapter 19
Aw, poor mama! I feel so bad for them both! Justin took the money and so would I, LOL!
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 06/10/05 - 02:08PM
Title: Chapter 18
ROFL! Justin had me rollin' when he was playing the shit out of his dad, LMAO!
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 06/10/05 - 01:18PM
Title: Chapter 17
Aw, that's fucked up, lol.
Reviewer: jrtluva05
Signed
Date: 06/09/05 - 11:46AM
Title: Chapter 29
this story is awesome! keep it up! i love it!
Author's Response: Hey, this is Melanie, author of the story "Gray Dreams" that you were reading. It\'s been a while, I know lol and I\'m EXTREMELY sorry for that. I just thought that I should let you know that I actually finished this story a long time ago (about Sep. of 05), but I was so busy w/ my readers at another site that I sort of forgot about this one. So, I\'ve decided that I need to put up all of the chapters here as well. So, I\'d say by Friday there should be a bunch up, just check for them...if you still want to read the story, that is. -Melanie
Reviewer: Cara
Anonymous
Date: 06/09/05 - 11:33AM
Title: 1
yo this story is tight I love it. I'm waiting on the next chapter so hopefully its comin soon
Reviewer: Francine
Anonymous
Date: 06/07/05 - 03:15PM
Title: Chapter 29
ive been following your story since the beginning and its so hot!!! i love it...update please
Author's Response: Hey, this is Melanie, author of the story "Gray Dreams" that you were reading. It\'s been a while, I know lol and I\'m EXTREMELY sorry for that. I just thought that I should let you know that I actually finished this story a long time ago (about Sep. of 05), but I was so busy w/ my readers at another site that I sort of forgot about this one. So, I\'ve decided that I need to put up all of the chapters here as well. So, I\'d say by Friday there should be a bunch up, just check for them...if you still want to read the story, that is. -Melanie
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