Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 06/06/05 - 11:08AM
Title: Chapter 21
"Yay! This shit is workin! She’s looking at me anxiously, like she wants me to put it on her. Yeah, I’m a put it on you girl. Can you handle it? Yeah, I know you want this milk in your Cocoa Puffs." *lmao* Can't...breathe...laughing...too...hard!
Author's Response: Hey, this is Melanie, author of the story "Gray Dreams" that you were reading. It\'s been a while, I know lol and I\'m EXTREMELY sorry for that. I just thought that I should let you know that I actually finished this story a long time ago (about Sep. of 05), but I was so busy w/ my readers at another site that I sort of forgot about this one. So, I\'ve decided that I need to put up all of the chapters here as well. So, I\'d say by Friday there should be a bunch up, just check for them...if you still want to read the story, that is. -Melanie
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 06/06/05 - 10:55AM
Title: Chapter 21
Hey, I remember this! This was my story. But I don't remember reading it on here...then again, I don't remember what I had for breakfast. Welcome back.
Reviewer: Christina
Anonymous
Date: 06/06/05 - 01:17AM
Title: Chapter 29
I've been reading on JJB but you know what happened to that. What up girl!?!?! I just keep checkin' back until you get to the end of the story. where I left off... :)
Author's Response: Hey, this is Melanie, author of the story "Gray Dreams" that you were reading. It\'s been a while, I know lol and I\'m EXTREMELY sorry for that. I just thought that I should let you know that I actually finished this story a long time ago (about Sep. of 05), but I was so busy w/ my readers at another site that I sort of forgot about this one. So, I\'ve decided that I need to put up all of the chapters here as well. So, I\'d say by Friday there should be a bunch up, just check for them...if you still want to read the story, that is. -Melanie
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 12/08/04 - 11:51AM
Title: Sixteen
Are they friends? Are they a couple? I need to know girl. This story has gotten me hooked!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 12/08/04 - 11:31AM
Title: Fifteen
Justin's a v-card holder???? LOL! Didn't see it coming. LOL! Nice chapter. . .
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 12/08/04 - 10:41AM
Title: Fourteen
Well, I wasn't expecting all of that! LOL! Hot chapter!
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 12/08/04 - 10:34AM
Title: Thirteen
I hope Melanie dumps Damien's bitch ass.
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 12/08/04 - 10:14AM
Title: Chapter 12
I was about to cry! I thought they shot Justin! I was like "NOOO!!!!" LOL! I'm glad he's okay.
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 12/08/04 - 09:53AM
Title: Chapter 11
Ew, he found a Trojan! LOL!
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 12/08/04 - 09:35AM
Title: Chapter 10
That Milk Man nickname is hilarious! I'm glad him and Melanie are cool.
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