Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 06/10/05 - 03:04PM
Title: Chapter 21
Yay! This shit is workin! She’s looking at me anxiously, like she wants me to put it on her. Yeah, I’m a put it on you girl. Can you handle it? Yeah, I know you want this milk in your Cocoa Puffs. ROFL! The best line EVER! LMFAO!
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 06/06/05 - 11:08AM
Title: Chapter 21
"Yay! This shit is workin! She’s looking at me anxiously, like she wants me to put it on her. Yeah, I’m a put it on you girl. Can you handle it? Yeah, I know you want this milk in your Cocoa Puffs." *lmao* Can't...breathe...laughing...too...hard!
Author's Response:
Hey, this is Melanie, author of the story "Gray Dreams" that you were reading.
It\'s been a while, I know lol and I\'m EXTREMELY sorry for that. I just thought that I should let you know that I actually finished this story a long time ago (about Sep. of 05), but I was so busy w/ my readers at another site that I sort of forgot about this one.
So, I\'ve decided that I need to put up all of the chapters here as well. So, I\'d say by Friday there should be a bunch up, just check for them...if you still want to read the story, that is.
-Melanie
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 06/06/05 - 10:55AM
Title: Chapter 21
Hey, I remember this! This was my story. But I don't remember reading it on here...then again, I don't remember what I had for breakfast. Welcome back.
