Reviewer: Ani
Anonymous
Date: 06/22/05 - 07:04PM
Title: Chapter 35
So I've finally caught up and I'm officially hooked. This story is thee sh*t and I can't wait for more...
Author's Response: Hey, this is Melanie, author of the story "Gray Dreams" that you were reading. It\'s been a while, I know lol and I\'m EXTREMELY sorry for that. I just thought that I should let you know that I actually finished this story a long time ago (about Sep. of 05), but I was so busy w/ my readers at another site that I sort of forgot about this one. So, I\'ve decided that I need to put up all of the chapters here as well. So, I\'d say by Friday there should be a bunch up, just check for them...if you still want to read the story, that is. -Melanie
Reviewer: Timberlake
Signed
Date: 06/20/05 - 08:01PM
Title: Chapter 35
They are so cute together. Whoa, Lynn is getting a new man! That's right baby! LMAO. And Melanie should've kicked that bitch's ass! Nicole is going to get hers real soon, LOL.This story is so bangin'! Update soon!
Author's Response: Hey, this is Melanie, author of the story "Gray Dreams" that you were reading. It\'s been a while, I know lol and I\'m EXTREMELY sorry for that. I just thought that I should let you know that I actually finished this story a long time ago (about Sep. of 05), but I was so busy w/ my readers at another site that I sort of forgot about this one. So, I\'ve decided that I need to put up all of the chapters here as well. So, I\'d say by Friday there should be a bunch up, just check for them...if you still want to read the story, that is. -Melanie
Reviewer: live4five
Anonymous
Date: 06/13/05 - 08:13PM
Title: Chapter 35
I like this story i really do but sometimes Justin be sayin stuff that be wrong and melanie will be mad for like 2 seconds then shes right back happy again when she should be mad at him for a while. I'm like the other girl I'ma drama queen. MAKE DRAMA. its cool though.
Author's Response: Hey, this is Melanie, author of the story "Gray Dreams" that you were reading. It\'s been a while, I know lol and I\'m EXTREMELY sorry for that. I just thought that I should let you know that I actually finished this story a long time ago (about Sep. of 05), but I was so busy w/ my readers at another site that I sort of forgot about this one. So, I\'ve decided that I need to put up all of the chapters here as well. So, I\'d say by Friday there should be a bunch up, just check for them...if you still want to read the story, that is. -Melanie
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 06/11/05 - 09:59PM
Title: Chapter 35
This story is great. Please update soon and thanks. J&B!
Reviewer: Amber - Jrtluva05
Anonymous
Date: 06/11/05 - 09:20PM
Title: Chapter 35
really good story hun! i'm lovin it!
Reviewer: dizzyupthegirl
Anonymous
Date: 06/11/05 - 08:24PM
Title: Chapter 35
i agree, there needs to be a little more dama. i mean, you put them in dramatic situations but when melanie gets mad at justin she never stays that way. she always gives in too easily. and damn, i wanted to hurt nicole and joya my damn self! that heffa had so much NERVE! now, i'm wondering if i'm gonna like this whole twisted version of the parent trap. i mean, it's true. once a guy cheats, he'll do it again. lynn deserves so much better. well, that was a quick update. hope u update soon again!
Author's Response: Hey, this is Melanie, author of the story "Gray Dreams" that you were reading. It\'s been a while, I know lol and I\'m EXTREMELY sorry for that. I just thought that I should let you know that I actually finished this story a long time ago (about Sep. of 05), but I was so busy w/ my readers at another site that I sort of forgot about this one. So, I\'ve decided that I need to put up all of the chapters here as well. So, I\'d say by Friday there should be a bunch up, just check for them...if you still want to read the story, that is. -Melanie
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