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Reviewer: nikki g.
Anonymous
Date: 11/25/05 - 08:30PM
Title: Chapter 2*~
very good. update soon and thanks. J&B!
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 11/25/05 - 04:37PM
Title: Chapter 2*~
LEAVE HIM ALONE! It's obvious he's up to no good but she just keeps going back.
Reviewer: Sasha
Anonymous
Date: 11/25/05 - 01:31PM
Title: Chapter 2*~
Mackenzie what in the hell? lol she has seriously gone nuts hasn't she? She is about to sell her soul to the devil with the mess she's involving herself with. I hope that now that she's realized what's going on in her life she'll change it before she gets too wrapped up in it. Great update! Can't wait for the next one!
Reviewer: Anna
Anonymous
Date: 11/25/05 - 11:42AM
Title: Chapter 2*~
Can we say Justin is a sexual predator? The girl is 19 and he's 21 and he practically is shaping the girl to be his sex slave you might as well say. Mia I'm sure she's gonna start playing a roll in everything at some point because there is no way with the way Justin described her that she will just sit back and let all of this happen infront of her eyes. Jonathan, he seems like a nice guy but if he's friends with Justin then who knows what he's like, he may just as bad as him. I hope you update soon I wnat to know what Jonathan will be like!
Reviewer: Tamya
Anonymous
Date: 11/20/05 - 09:54AM
Title: Chapter 1
Alright first of all Justin better have some good reason for getting that poor child mixed up in some mess and lord only knows what Mia's like because from the way she appeared to act around Mack she seems to be a little....uppity. Update soon!
Reviewer: Anna
Anonymous
Date: 11/19/05 - 11:39PM
Title: Chapter 1
Poor Mack, I'm glad that Sasha was nice enough to take her in and the whole mess with Justin I'm sure he'll mess something up and screw with her already sucky life. Update soon please!
Reviewer: Anjelica
Anonymous
Date: 11/19/05 - 09:54PM
Title: Chapter 1
Mackenzie stay away from him! He'll get you hurt! LOL There is so much mess going on already, this is gonna be a great drama story I can tell, it's crazy! Update soon! Gracias!
Reviewer: Sasha
Anonymous
Date: 11/19/05 - 08:00PM
Title: Chapter 1
LOVE this story, and by the way love the name used *wink* lol, I really hope you update soon. Mackenzie sounds like she's holding onto a lot of things that neds to be broken down before she can live her life, also for the sake of her I hope Justin doesn't do anything stupid. Hope to see an update soon.
Reviewer: Mary
Anonymous
Date: 11/19/05 - 07:52PM
Title: Chapter 1
Wow I'm glad that Sasha came and too Mackenzie in, its sad that she had been living on the streets but it seems things are kind of moving up for her, other than the fact that Mike sounds like a jerk and Justin just completely took advantage of her. Also the whole mess with Mia will be something else to keep an eye on huh? Well I love this story and I can't wait to see what's coming up! Keep up the awesome work, thanks.
Reviewer: Tammy
Anonymous
Date: 11/19/05 - 07:28PM
Title: Prologue
Love it! Please update soon.
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