Reviewer: oldschoolfanatic
Signed
Date: 02/03/07 - 01:02PM
Title: Quick Note--Please Respond
I think the story is coming along pretty good..the plot could probably thicken a bit though..and she could be betrayed by Heath..? I'd rather see her and Justin together even though they have a long way to go.
Reviewer: stimble
Signed
Date: 12/27/06 - 03:28AM
Title: Quick Note--Please Respond
so i'm incredibly late about this but yeah, write what your heart/mind tell you to write. It much better to have a finsh product that you're happy about than a product done just to have it done.
Reviewer: Joanna
Anonymous
Date: 10/18/06 - 01:45AM
Title: Quick Note--Please Respond
I really like this one but if you think rewriting it will motivate you more than go for it! whatever you decide i will support it!
Reviewer: laurencoz
Anonymous
Date: 10/18/06 - 01:00AM
Title: Quick Note--Please Respond
I don't care either way as long as long as you keep updating cuz I love elli & justin:)
Reviewer: cae329
Signed
Date: 10/17/06 - 09:51PM
Title: Quick Note--Please Respond
Well I honestly think it's really good, but I know what you mean that you wanna start over. But I think you might be on the right track with this one, but it all comes down to your opinion. I love it the way it is, but you're the author :) good luck!
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 10/17/06 - 04:30PM
Title: Quick Note--Please Respond
See, you've already started to re-write it, which means that your heart is leading you in the right direction. As a fan of your work (and fellow author), I support your decision 510% to do a re-write. Go get 'em tiger! :o)
Reviewer: Teeny
Signed
Date: 10/17/06 - 04:26PM
Title: Quick Note--Please Respond
I totally understand what you mean, and to be honest if you really dont' like it maybe you should start again. I am, of course, being 100% selfish because I know that if you don't enjoy what you're writing then you don't write and, well, I want updates! lol It's your story, if you want to start again you go for it!
Reviewer: Barb
Anonymous
Date: 10/17/06 - 02:08PM
Title: Quick Note--Please Respond
If you think the story isn't going anywhere, then you rewrite! I've always gone by the addage that if you have a plot, and can't get to the end of that plot, then rethink and rewrite. I support ya 100%
Reviewer: Moose
Signed
Date: 10/17/06 - 12:51PM
Title: Quick Note--Please Respond
I think if you're unhappy with the way the story is going, then its not going to be enjoyable for the reader either. So if you've got a new direction that you're headed in, I say Go for it! Being an *NSYNC author myself, I know what it's like to start in one direction and then realize that you really want to go left of that, and I've found that by not allowing myself to explore my ideas, my stories end up yucky....so, I think you should do what you want with the new stuff :)
Reviewer: Hollie
Anonymous
Date: 10/17/06 - 11:27AM
Title: Quick Note--Please Respond
Well, I think you're beingoverly critical, but I'm biased. At the end of the day, it's your storya nd if you're not feeling it and unhappy with it then you should go ahead and do whatever you need to do in order to make you happy with it. Plus, there's no good in forcing yourself to write something you're not feeling Either way, I'll be waiting impatiently for the newness :o)
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