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Date: 04/21/09 - 02:15PM
Title: All Trick and No Treat
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Reviewer: LipV
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Date: 02/22/07 - 07:56PM
Title: Walk Away Part Two
Please Update! I love this story.
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
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Date: 01/13/07 - 09:23PM
Title: Walk Away Part Two
Um, yeah... Well, I think the date for the last time this story was updated says it better than any whining request for an update I could think up. :D
Reviewer: justinzgirlkb
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Date: 12/14/06 - 10:54PM
Title: Walk Away Part Two
please update soon, i just reread this chapter and am in love with this story all over again. ps- i think a nice song that could go with this story is "(Another Song) All Over Again" by JT. :)
Author's Response: I know it's been forever since I updated, but life has been less than fun for the past few months. Also, the next chapter is proving to be hard to write because a lot of secrets will come to light. As far as using Another Song, you are reading my mind. I was like JT gave me a perfect song for this story, lol.
Reviewer: S Jane
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Date: 10/28/06 - 08:23AM
Title: Walk Away Part Two
i have just spent the last 2 days that i had off work absolutley addicted to this story. It's great how each person is comming across. You feel bad for one and side with the other and then wammo you've swapped sides. You can feel why she is addicted to Justin but also see why she's holding back form others. It's just wow great writing.
Author's Response: Woohoo! Always happy to hear from a new reader. I'm glad to know that the way I'm trying to portray the characters is coming across. Everybody in this story has their good points and their bad points.
Reviewer: Sassy Spacey
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Date: 10/28/06 - 02:20AM
Title: Walk Away Part Two
Oh goodness. What an awesome add. Great job. I actually feel kinda bad for Justin. I know I'm probably speaking too soon, but :(. LOL. Great job though, I can't wait to see what happens next. :) -Traci Author's Response: Thanks. Justin can inspire a bit of sympathy one second and make you want to strangle him the next.
Reviewer: kahlymilla
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Date: 10/25/06 - 09:45PM
Title: Walk Away Part Two
Okay so I had two chapters to catch up on. Those two chapters were really deep, the lastest one in particular. I don't know how to feel about these two characters. I want to be on Kay's side and tell her to stay strong, but Justin actually sounded sincere when he begged her to take him back and maybe she should have because he's definitely making her pay for it now. Their relationship is just one long rollercoaster ride I wonder when it'll actually be some balance in there relationship. But I guess that'll happen when the time is right for both of them even if they just remain friends. Now about the sex. Wow that was...how should I word this...it was hot. And I know sex scenes can be difficult to type because you want to craft it the right way without coming off slutty and plus you want to keep you morals in tact. lol. I like how you incorporated xtina's lyrics in between action it gave the scene some substance. Great job Dianna. -Kahli Author's Response: Thanks much. I think this chapter explains a lot of Justin's behavior, such as why he dips after his late night visits. Then on the other hand, can we really blame Kayla for shutting him down? Justin has blown a lot of smoke at her, so her ability to judge his sincerity is warped. Extra thanks for complimenting my sex scene. I can't ever read my own sex scenes. Once I write them, I leave them alone and I can't ever tell if I've gotten it right. I depend on reviews to let me know if they're any good or not, so thanks once again.
Reviewer: Timberlake
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Date: 10/25/06 - 06:23PM
Title: Walk Away Part Two
OMFG! THat really tore me apart. Jesus christ, I know I'm about to sound like a dumbass, but I would've opened that door and gave him one more chance, LMFAO! Moving in, no. But relationship, yes. There was just something different with it. He was so open with her and she shut him out. . . The boy's already crazy. The therapy would've done him some good. My god, it made me cry. You always make me cry. That ain't right, child. That ain't right! LOL. Anyways, the sex was hot as hell. Made me want some of that timberass, LMFAO
Author's Response: Now, I think people are starting to see the part of Justin that keeps Kayla hanging on. Sorry about the crying, but you know how much I love my vulnerable, heart on his sleeve Justin. And don't blame my sex scene, I suspect that you always want some timberass. lol
Reviewer: emkay
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Date: 10/24/06 - 10:01PM
Title: Walk Away Part Two
so i started reading this along time ago, lost touch with this website and have come back and spent the past two days rereading the whole thing and god damn i love it. lol. i get so frusterated at points tho! that tricky bastard.. haha, but i love it! and can't wait to find out what happens.
Author's Response: Thanks for finding this story again. It is definitely frustrating at times, but I hope it's the kind of frustration that keeps people wanting to find out what happens next.
Reviewer: Timberlake
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Date: 10/24/06 - 02:33PM
Title: Walk Away
OMFG! That BITCH! UGh, i hate Justin. I really do. Open relationship? Firing Sky? Oh LAWD! lol
Author's Response: Justin was in rare a**hole form in this chapter, wasn't he? Now skip your behind on over to part two, lol.
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