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Reviewer: meaghan
Anonymous
Date: 10/23/06 - 10:07PM
Title: Walk Away Part Two
awww!! that was the saddest thing in the whole world!!! can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: Anonymous
Anonymous
Date: 10/23/06 - 07:19PM
Title: Walk Away Part Two
Damn. Just. Damn.
Author's Response: I hope that's a good thing. lol
Reviewer: cae329
Signed
Date: 10/23/06 - 05:00PM
Title: Walk Away Part Two
i completely love this story. you're such a good writer! let me know if you still need a copy editor for it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I was just kidding about needing an editor. Although, if the next chapter works me over like this one did, I might take you up on that offer. lol
Reviewer: Lynn
Anonymous
Date: 10/23/06 - 03:51PM
Title: Walk Away Part Two
God! I LOVE THIS F*&^ing story. Can I host it? I'd love to. Hit me up: isgonnabelynn@yahoo.com - Lynn
Author's Response: Thanks. I was thinking about trying to do my own website then I remembered that I can barely turn my computer on, lol. I would def be interested in having my story hosted. Thanks for the offer.
Reviewer: Lizzy3218
Anonymous
Date: 10/23/06 - 03:02PM
Title: Walk Away Part Two
I almost said that Kay finally developed some sense by not taking Justin back but the fact that she kept sleeping with him messed up any common sense that she might have had. She needs to start taking care of herself and think of her child, Justin needs to grow up on his own cause no one can change him... not even Kay.
Author's Response: Kayla and common sense are not terms that belong in the same sentence.
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
Signed
Date: 10/23/06 - 02:48PM
Title: Walk Away Part Two
Well, damn. That was heart breaking. :( I loved the part where he's like 'Tell me you love me' cause that right there started to make me feel so bad for him. I knew it was gonna end up with just another break-up, or something like since they weren't together anyways. haha But then the next day he made it worse by being all in love and lovey dovey and...sweet...and gawd...I wanted her to take him back. Those pleases outside of the door were heart breaking. Damn, I know this was in the past, but I can't remember what happened to them more in future to know if they got closer to being better. I hope him not asking to be taken back doesn't mean that if she asks him to take her back that he won't do it. *sighs* Ay dios mio...these two are just the poster children for 'can't live with 'em, can't live without 'em.' I hope they can clean up their mess. Update soon!
Author's Response: As the past unfolds, I think it becomes easier to see how Justin keeps reeling Kayla back in. It's obvious that he loves her, but it's also obvious that he has got some major issues to work through.
Reviewer: Keediluv
Signed
Date: 10/23/06 - 02:42PM
Title: Walk Away Part Two
Addiction is the only way I can describe what's going on between Justin and Kayla. I honestly feel sorry for the both of them. Girl, this is better than General Hospital and I love General Hospital. Awesome update honey! Ki Author's Response: Thank you so much. It's funny that you make the comparison to General Hospital, because I call this story my "soap opera" fic.
Reviewer: Lizzy3218
Anonymous
Date: 10/23/06 - 02:35PM
Title: Walk Away
Holy shit I officially hate Justin. OMG that boy is infuriating but Kay is a lil on the dumb side too. I can't wait to read the rest.
Author's Response: Don't sugarcoat it. Kayla is a whole lot on the dumb side. I don't even have the words to describe Justin.
Reviewer: whit
Anonymous
Date: 10/23/06 - 02:34PM
Title: Walk Away Part Two
AWEsomeness!! me likey-likey lots
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: vessy
Signed
Date: 10/23/06 - 01:50PM
Title: Walk Away Part Two
gosh i love this story. how could she not take him back :( i feel so bad for him
Author's Response: Thank you. It was kind of sad to see him begging like that, but keep in mind that Kayla definitely had her reasons for turning him down. Maybe one day they will be able to straighten themselves out.
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