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Reviewer: Lizzy3218
Anonymous
Date: 05/22/06 - 02:46AM
Title: Temporary Sanity
OMG she chose C didn't she? I cannot believe how stupid that girl is. Justin is manipulative but seriously, she needs to get her sh*t straight cause she's messing up her life. Great update chica.
Author's Response: I think it\'s pretty obvious which one she chose. Personally, I would say A, or B if I was in a forgiving mood. But never C. Kayla\'s life is fairly messed up, but maybe she\'ll get it straightened out. Maybe.
Reviewer: kahlymilla
Signed
Date: 05/21/06 - 08:57PM
Title: Temporary Sanity
Wow....that's all I can say right now lol. But let me say that I'm glad that Kayla broke his damn foot with the door. Because his ass fucking deserved it! Damn, I sound very indignant right now don't I? Anyway, I had an accident like that, were my twin (milla) closed the door on my foot. I had to go to the hospital because my toenail came off! EWW I know. lol Back to the story now...Justin is too damn smooth for his own good and it's fucking sickening! I can't wait until his manipulation blows up in his fucking face or until Kay stops falling for it. I wish for some happiness for that girl because she deserves it. If in the end they end up together I hope it's because they have worked on their problems and not because Justin has her trapped. Great Chap Dianna. -Kahli Author's Response: Sorry to hear about your toenail. I have absolutely no tolerance for pain, I would have cried like a baby if something like that happened to me. As far as the story, a broken foot is the least of what Justin deserves.
Reviewer: Amy A
Anonymous
Date: 05/21/06 - 08:50PM
Title: Temporary Sanity
I finally thought she was getting some sense but at the same time I can't blame her. Great chapter! Update soon xxx.
Author's Response: Hey, that was only 2002. We\'ve got a couple of years to go yet before Kay gets any sense. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: meaghan
Anonymous
Date: 05/21/06 - 07:02PM
Title: Temporary Sanity
first off, i love ur theory on how he actually broke his foot!! lol second of all OH MY GOD!! cant wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thank you. Hopefully I can have the next chapter up pretty soon.
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
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Date: 05/21/06 - 05:42PM
Title: Temporary Sanity
Long lost mother X-mas present, kinda sorta (okay, not really) marriage proposal. Damn, Justin is too smooth with the lies and manipulations. I'm sure that next convo between Rachel and Kay isn't going to go over well. If I were Rachel I wouldn't know what to say to a friend like that who goes from being all, 'I hate him. It's over. I actually caught him cheating this time so I'm gonna move back to ATL' to immediately flipping it to, 'Hey, guess what? I'm getting married, girl!' Even though Rachel does know what to say, she has to get sick of saying over and over to someone who doesn't seem to want to listen. Anyways, I'm glad she broke his foot lol, it was funny and well deserved. Now if only Justin could really get his shit together like he's been constantly claiming that he was going to do (which I'm seriously doubting that he ever will) or Kayla gets her shit together and stops falling for his mess and listens to the advice that Lynn gave her earlier. Cause that's how it's gonna end right? They're gonna be like Lynn and Randy? Or maybe that's just the best case scenerio for their dysfunctionalism. haha Update soon!
Author's Response: Good gracious. That\'s a whole lot of reviewing. I didn\'t even know you were reading this one, so thanks for letting me know what you think. I just had to have her break his foot, the timing was right for this chapter and he really did deserve it. As for how it all will end, you\'ll just have to keep reading to find out.
Reviewer: Violeta
Anonymous
Date: 05/21/06 - 04:27PM
Title: Temporary Sanity
That sneaky manipulative bastard!!! I hate him!!! He doesn't deserve Kay's love and much less her trust. Great chapter, you have an amazing way with words hon!!
Author's Response: Thank you. Justin is definitely a piece of work.
Reviewer: Sindi
Anonymous
Date: 05/21/06 - 02:08PM
Title: Temporary Sanity
Break the whole damn body Kayla break it all, but hey foot is good enough. Great chapter I wonder what happened to her mother later in the years. Kayla stop acting dumb. Update!
Author's Response: Kayla and her mother had a falling out and never ended up getting that close, but that\'s not to say that she might not make another appearance before this whole thing is over.
Reviewer: Nikki g.
Anonymous
Date: 05/21/06 - 01:36PM
Title: Temporary Sanity
I freakin love all of the analogies that you have in this chapter. I think that we all know what she chose; it doesn't take a rocket scientist to know that she chose "c." PLease update this story very, very soon, thanks. J&B!
Author's Response: thanks. I was trying to think of a way to finish up this chapter and that pop quiz popped into my head nearly word for word. I just had to include it. I\'m working on the next chapter at this very moment.
Reviewer: jrtluva05
Signed
Date: 05/21/06 - 01:12PM
Title: Temporary Sanity
wow that was good!!!! im really beginning to hate justin in this story.. he's such an ass.. an damn kayla broke his foot! lmfao i love how you have used the stuff that justin went thru in real life to your advantage and made it into the story it's pure genious!!! awesome girl just awesome! can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I always thought Justin\'s explanation of what really happened to that foot was kind of sketchy, so I decided to see what I could do with that.
Reviewer: Kijuana
Anonymous
Date: 05/16/06 - 11:11PM
Title: Prologue
Very well written story so far. I love the fact that Kayla has flaws too; makes the story more real. Can't wait to read more... Patiently waiting, Ki Author's Response: Hey, Thanks for checking this story out. Hope you continue to read it.
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