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Reviewer: Timberlake
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Date: 04/21/06 - 08:38PM
Title: Part Two: Virginia is for Lovers
Remember that old Nsync video? The one set in the insane asylum? Remember that scene where Justin looked like he was about to burst into tears and you just wanted to give him a hug? That’s the look that he was giving me. ROFL! He was so damn adorable in that vid, lol. Anyways, this is so fucked up. They really are a match made in hell. If they could just take a break and work out their insecurities, maybe, just maybe, they could be something. Something good for each and Jonah. Oh, and Mari was a WONDERFUL name to choose, darlin', LOL Author's Response: Glad you appreciated the shout out. I definitely gave the maid that name on purpose. I just had to throw in a little something about that video. It was one of my early faves and definitely kick started my Justin love.
Reviewer: kahlymilla
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Date: 04/21/06 - 07:40PM
Title: Part Two: Virginia is for Lovers
I hate it that Kay is so insecure, but love makes people do crazy thing. Kay was right they are a "match made in hell" I couldn't have said it any better myself. lol. But I'll tell you one thing that made me mad, when Justin said "Maybe if you’d open your legs, I’d have a reason to be at home." Saying that was just low. Thank the lord this is a flashback because if he was treating her like that in the present Kay would be so depressed from all the years of insecurities that she would be in a psyche ward somewhere. Great chap. We need to update Sexual Suicide our damn self.
Author's Response: Justin has definitely got a lot of nerve. But if Kayla didn\'t let him say things like that and get away with it, maybe he would have straightened up a long time ago. I still haven\'t read the Sexual Suicide updates. I need to do that this weekend.
Reviewer: Kahli
Anonymous
Date: 04/21/06 - 07:25PM
Title: Part One: Jonah
Hmm...I was starting to like Justin until I read this flashback. That asshole makes me want to jump in the story and give him a Baltimore back alley beatdown. Maybe Kay deserves one too because she keeps believing his bullshit lies. lol. Ok onto the next chapter let's see if my anger escalates any more. lol Great chap
Author's Response: Flashback Justin is not a nice Justin.
Reviewer: kahlymilla
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Date: 04/21/06 - 07:10PM
Title: Do Unto Others
Wow I haven't been to nsyncfiction in a minute! But I didn't forget your story. I'm glad you updated during the time I wasn't online. It's just that college is hectic nowadays. Anyway about the chapter it's a shock to see that Justin is getting his shit together and Kayla is not. It seems as though they have switched places, especially the way Kay is manipulating JC and leading him on. I can't wait to go on to the next chapter I hope the public's reaction is not harsh. Great chap Dianna
Author's Response: Thanks for checking up on this story. I\'ve been slacking about coming around these parts myself. I\'m glad that you caught the way that the parallel that I was trying to create between Justin and Kayla. He may be moving on, but Kayla is still stuck. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: meaghan
Anonymous
Date: 04/20/06 - 08:37PM
Title: Part Two: Virginia is for Lovers
yea!! thanks for making this chapter something worth waiting for! can't wai for more!!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: jrtluva05
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Date: 04/20/06 - 06:35PM
Title: Part Two: Virginia is for Lovers
very good im so glad you updated i've been waiting for this particular update.. Now i have a suggestion maybe you could give us justin's point of view on what's going on? i think that would be interesting. :D
Author's Response: I won\'t be able to work Justin\'s Point of view into this story, but that doesn\'t mean that we won\'t get to hear his side. That\'s all I can say.
Reviewer: angel_from_africa
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Date: 04/20/06 - 05:34PM
Title: Part Two: Virginia is for Lovers
that was good... please update soon!!
Reviewer: justinzgirlkb
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Date: 04/20/06 - 04:36PM
Title: Part Two: Virginia is for Lovers
sometimes, i just want to PUNCH her....omg...how did she fall for it. UGH...justin sucks. the end. MORE SOON!
Reviewer: Lizzy3218
Anonymous
Date: 04/20/06 - 04:07PM
Title: Part Two: Virginia is for Lovers
Yay you're back, it's about time girl. I loved this chapter but Justin is such a dick...ugh! Update soon pretty please :-)
Reviewer: LuLu
Anonymous
Date: 04/20/06 - 04:04PM
Title: Part Two: Virginia is for Lovers
Welcome Back!!! Awesome as always of course, but can we please knock Kayla upside the head to wake her ass up. I understand being in love, but when there's obviously no respect or trust there's no point in holding on. If I was Kayla I would get a backbone, pack up my shit, get out of there and do I was necessary to take care of myself and my son.
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