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Reviewer: Lynn
Anonymous
Date: 12/19/05 - 02:39PM
Title: Prologue
Very Nice literature. I can't wait to read about what happened with Jc. But I am biased and I hope everything turns for the better with Justin cause I WUV him even though he's being a complete ASS.
Author's Response: Literature? I'm flattered. I love Justin too, so writing him as such a jackass isn't the easiest thing in the world for me to do. He is goind to do a lot of shaping up if he really wants to fix things with Kayla and Jonah. Always glad to get a new reader. Thanks.
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 12/18/05 - 09:23PM
Title: Back to the Beginning
What was he doing in her house?
Author's Response: You'll find out soon. I probably won't be able to update agian until the weekend.
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 12/18/05 - 09:22PM
Title: Happy Family
Yeah I want to know what happened between her and JC too?
Author's Response: Keep reading you'll find out. Let me just say that the only truly innocent person in this story is Jonah.
Reviewer: E
Anonymous
Date: 12/18/05 - 09:21PM
Title: Happy Family
Wow, two chapters in one night. I don't know what to think of Justin. He said some awful things to Kayla. What I want to know is what exactly happened between her and JC. I was not expecting that. I wonder what will happen when Justin finds out. Thanks for the two chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. What I'm going to try to do is always post two chapters at once. One from the past and one from the present. This is like trying to write two stories at once, so I might not be able to keep that up, but that's the way I want to do it.
Reviewer: E
Anonymous
Date: 12/18/05 - 08:44PM
Title: Back to the Beginning
I love this story. It is good to see where it all begin. Great job.
Reviewer: nikki g.
Anonymous
Date: 12/18/05 - 07:45PM
Title: Back to the Beginning
i like it, so update soon and thanks. J&B!
Author's Response: Thanks for giving this a try.
Reviewer: Rina
Anonymous
Date: 12/15/05 - 01:01AM
Title: Is This The Right Time?
oh my God! I love this story. keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it.
Reviewer: E
Anonymous
Date: 12/14/05 - 11:11PM
Title: Is This The Right Time?
Wow I loved that chapter. I was not expecting the JC factor but I like it. I am a JC girl that has Justin issues at time so I know this is going to be tough for Kayla. Right now I want her with Justin but that may change as the story continues. Can't wait for the next chapter. Good job.
Reviewer: isela
Anonymous
Date: 12/14/05 - 04:52PM
Title: Is This The Right Time?
i like where this is going. can't wait til you update!
Reviewer: timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 12/14/05 - 04:14PM
Title: Is This The Right Time?
aww. i can kinda see where she's coming from. when you fall for someone, it's hard to let them go. damn it. justin and his charming ways. and you put JC in the mix. . .lol. he loves her and jonah. he should with her, but at the same time, i'm rooting for justin's dumbass, lol. wow. i loved it. update soon.
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