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Reviewer: Kahli
Anonymous
Date: 12/14/05 - 02:09PM
Title: Is This The Right Time?
Okay...well, first I agree with JC and what he told Kayla. She needs to open her eyes and see what Justin is doing to her. Because he is USING her! But since she is so love sick she pushes his disrespect behind her so she can see the good. Girlfriend, just can't say no, hence the title of the story. lol. Justin better get his shit right soon before JC comes and sweep his "woman and child" up. lol. Good chap girl, maybe we can update something today.
Author's Response: What's up? Kayla definitely needs to wake up to the situation that she's in. And I don't know what to say about Justin. He needs to straighten up or just leave that girl alone. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 12/14/05 - 01:05PM
Title: Is This The Right Time?
So, Uncle JC wants to become daddy...not number 2, but number 1, technically Justin doesn't count. I'm all for JC. :o) Not to be hard on her, but girly girl needs to get her act together, which I know she will...eventually. But, for Jonah's sake, she needs to get it together a little sooner than later.
Author's Response: Kayla definitely has a lot of soul searching to do. JC is definitely trying to get in there. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Ashley
Signed
Date: 12/14/05 - 09:18AM
Title: Is This The Right Time?
Kay, honey I understand. The shit we do for love. *Shakes head sadly* All I'm gonna say is that I'm dangerously in love with this story already and I can't wait to see where this goes. Justin and JC hating each other is yet another lovely little twist for the record books, and I'm sure there are more little surprises in store, so let's get this show on the road, girl! Or wait, it's already on the road. Let's keep it on the road lol. Great work, mama.
Author's Response: This story is surprising me and I'm the one that's writing it! LOL. I don't know where exactly I'm going with it, but I just sit down, start typing and see what comes out. Thanks for checking this story out.
Reviewer: Ashley
Signed
Date: 12/14/05 - 09:01AM
Title: Prologue
Damn girl, I feel like you're writing my life story here. Well besides the Justin Timberlake part; and the Jonah part; and the free house and car part. Okay, so really, all me and Kayla have in common is that we're pushovers that live in Atlanta rofl. But man, I'm seriously feeling her situation completely right now. Just can't say no. Ain't that 'bout a bitch. And don't ask me why I'm up at 9:00 in the morning because I wish I had an answer. All I know is that this caught my eye and I'll be damned if it doesn't have my full attention now. I'm so glad you decided to keep going cus this shit is the shit. I've officially found my new obsession for the new year LOL. Awesome work, girl. I like your style. We 'bout to drop it on yo ass right now. Sorry, but I had to get that in there lol. I'll be moving on now lol.
Author's Response: I am continually amazed by all the the love everyone shows to my little old stories. I was going to leave this one alone, but I felt like there was so much more to this situation. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: kahli
Anonymous
Date: 12/10/05 - 04:48PM
Title: Prologue
wow this story is just as good as the other one. you are a great writer. It's sad that Kayla has to be treated like that I hope Justin comes around and figures out when the right time is. So a sequel or a prequel would be nice to read. Goog work girl.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I was supposed to be writing updates for my other stories, but this is what came out when I started typing. I'm definitely thinking of doing something more with Justin and Kayla. It would be interesting to see how their relationship ended up where it is now. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: E
Anonymous
Date: 12/10/05 - 03:52PM
Title: Prologue
This was a great story. I hope you think about adding more to it. I feel like it needs a sequel. You are a great writer, I think I will check out your other stories.
Author's Response: Thanks for complimenting my writing. I always try to switch up what genre I write in because I don't want any of my stories to be exactly the same. I'm most comfortable doing romantic comedy, but I've been trying to branch out. Hopefully you'll find something else of mine that you like.
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 12/10/05 - 11:42AM
Title: Prologue
I say a sequel AND a prequel. Loved it! Especially the ending...so precious. Yea, and why come (yes, why come *lol*) Justin feels the need to hide the black woman in the background? *shakes head* Mm, mm, mm...damn shame! Six loooong-ass years. At least he's taking care of his child...AT LEAST. I'm gonna go sit with the others and wait for that sequel. :o)
Author's Response: Thanks. I do think I might do something that goes back and tells how they met. For some reason it was very easy for me to imagine Justin keeping a woman and a child on the down low. I love the man, but he does seem kind of sneaky. LOL.
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 12/10/05 - 02:57AM
Title: Prologue
Forget the sequel how about a prequel.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I'm always so nervous before I post anything.
Reviewer: whnty
Anonymous
Date: 12/10/05 - 01:12AM
Title: Prologue
awesomeness, so does Jonah know his daddy?! I NEE#D a sequel
Author's Response: Thank you. I am seriously considering stretching this out now.
Reviewer: timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 12/09/05 - 10:49PM
Title: Prologue
oh my lord, that's sad, lol. i love how her son has the same affect on her as Justin. that's crazy. he's a daddy. he better step up. i would not be havin' that, lol. loved it. you're brilliant girl =]
Author's Response: Thanks. I wrote this story in one sitting and didn't even edit it. So I didn't know how it was going to turn out. Glad to know you liked it. I hope you're feeling better.
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