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Reviewer: greg bates
Anonymous
Date: 09/27/06 - 10:01PM
Title: All Trick and No Treat
MAN OH MAN I LOVE THIWS STORY IT JUST GETS BETTER AND BETTER WITH EACH CHAPTER
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
Reviewer: Timberlake
Signed
Date: 09/26/06 - 06:29PM
Title: All Trick and No Treat
omg. . . what the fuck did he do? i gotta know!!!!!! make her call justin! PLEASE! this new mature, but still a little too flirty justin is really hot, LMFAO! that whole car hood thing was sexy. i wish something would've happened, LMFAO! anyways, the images don't work 'cause you used a forum code. you're suppose to use the <img> tags. yeah. . . try that, lol. i loved this chapter, you need to update NOW! lol
Author's Response: Justin is pretty flirty, huh? The parking lot scene is about the only part of this chapter that came out exactly the way I wanted it to on the first try. I could have taken it further, but I felt like it was better to leave it alone. Thanks for telling me about the tags. I am computer illiterate. I'm always shocked when I can even get my chapters posted, lol. I just figured out that the pictures could be seen if you leave off the tags and copy and paste. I was working on chapter eighteen when this review came in, so maybe I'll have it ready soon.
Reviewer: LuLu
Anonymous
Date: 09/25/06 - 11:41PM
Title: All Trick and No Treat
That Skank is right HAHA I love the costume and Nemo is so cute. Good to see Justin's not acting like an asshole anymore, he seems to have finally grown up. Poor Kayla she is still hooked on the Timberlake and he's still hooked on her. They might as well get back together, be one of those couples who make each other miserable from time to time, but can't live without each other. YAY! Kayla & Justin are going to get back together. Oh and I knew there was something shady going on with JC, I can't wait to find out what it is! Author's Response: Thank you so much. Justin is trying to be better, but they've still got a little ways to go.
Reviewer: Lizzy3218
Anonymous
Date: 09/25/06 - 10:58PM
Title: All Trick and No Treat
Well, that was a great read. I've been missing this story a lot, great update. But I'm really curious about what JC did and if it had any effect on Justin and Kay's relationship? And why would he insult her like that after he promised he wouldn't be like Justin? Kay and Justin really are good together and this time they weren't having sex...lol. They need to work things out b/c even though they're crazy... I think they're even crazier for each other. I LOVED IT!!
Author's Response: I don't think that we can judge JC too harshly. He's put a lot into trying to get Kayla to feel a certain way about him, he's just frustrated at this point. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: meaghan
Anonymous
Date: 09/25/06 - 08:35PM
Title: All Trick and No Treat
yea!!! they broke up!! sorry but i dont like kayla w/ jc.....i got all excited when justin and her were outside the party!! hope they get together soon
Author's Response: That parking lot scene was kind of cute if I do say so myself. Thankfully Kayla has finally come to the conclusion that she needs to leave JC alone.
Reviewer: princess
Anonymous
Date: 09/25/06 - 06:00PM
Title: All Trick and No Treat
oh and you have to update soon because when I telll you that this story is like meth for me and I have no plans on going to rehab, I mean it
Reviewer: princess
Anonymous
Date: 09/25/06 - 05:56PM
Title: All Trick and No Treat
is it sad that I want her and justin to fix their bulshit and be happy together. I have this strange motto that when a guy breaks you its his job to fix it even if is so that you can be whole for someone else. So Justin needs to get out his tools and liquid nails.
Author's Response: Justin is doing the best he can, but he has to fix himself before he can do anything for Kayla.
Reviewer: Amber
Anonymous
Date: 09/25/06 - 05:38PM
Title: All Trick and No Treat
Well thank God those two FINALLY are headed in the direction they should have been since day one. But, ya know, I've come to learn that it takes guys awhile to figure out who they are. Not to say it's not the same for women, but guys just seem to be that much more slower and end up hurting people they really do love. it sucks, but if the two of them can get through it, it'd be a hell of a story to share with the grandkids. lol I loved it! I'm all for a Justin/Kay reunion. Great update.
Author's Response: Justin is slowly but surely on the slow road to maturity. Now I just have to get Kayla there too. Who knows?
Reviewer: Tasha
Anonymous
Date: 09/25/06 - 04:57PM
Title: All Trick and No Treat
that was great I hope Justin gets it together cause they are a family no matter how hard they try not to be they love each other . I feel for JC but got a feeling he doing something shady. They all need to get it together, Update more soon cause we all know she at Justin hotel. Love the drama .,this chapter had me in tears lol. It's just that wonderfully written much talent girl.
Author's Response: I feel for JC too. I had to rewrite this so many times because I didn't want him to come off like a complete villian. He's a good person that's done some not so good things.
Wow...that's the only thing I can say about this story. I've been reading it since you first started it, and I just can't get enough. It just keeps getting better and better with every chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter. -Rina Author's Response: Thank you so much. This is the longest, most complex story I've ever worked on, so I'm really glad to know that people like it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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