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Reviewer: Kijuana
Anonymous
Date: 09/25/06 - 02:57PM
Title: All Trick and No Treat
Aww man! Just when I think JC(the love of my life, lol) is the perfect man for her, he goes and gets all 'Justin' like and stuff. I think that in the end, she should learn to say no to both of them. But hey, what do I know? Awesome chapter hon! Ki Author's Response: I swear, I hated to do that to JC, but that relationship just was not going to work. Way too one sided. Kayla still has a lot of work to do on herself before she can really be with anybody.
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 09/25/06 - 02:51PM
Title: All Trick and No Treat
Even thoough I think the characters are each discovering the truth behind everything...I'm so glad they are growing up and learning. Underneath and with everything that has happened, I really want her and J to be together bc I think she can help him to continue on this successful change into the man that he wants to be. I really do. I sorta want a happy ending. Smile, thanks and please update very soon. J&B!
Author's Response: It has definitely been a process, but I would like to think that between the first chapter and this one, all of the characters have learned something. It's what they do with that knowledge that will make the difference.
Reviewer: Lynn
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Date: 09/25/06 - 01:19PM
Title: All Trick and No Treat
Bravo!! Excelent come back from a long time gone!! God, I hope Justin and Kay can work all this out. I LOVE JUSTIN!!
Author's Response: Thank you. I have turned into the laziest writer ever. I have the next chapter practically done, but I'm procrastinating about editing it. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: vessy
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Date: 09/25/06 - 01:15PM
Title: All Trick and No Treat
i love it. can't wait to read more. will you really finish the story soon? nooooo :(
Author's Response: Don't worry, I am wrapping the story up, but I still have at least eight chapters to go. I still have to finish explaining their past.
Reviewer: maureen
Anonymous
Date: 09/25/06 - 11:30AM
Title: All Trick and No Treat
awesome!!! keep them coming and soon please!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much.
Reviewer: Veronica
Anonymous
Date: 09/25/06 - 11:28AM
Title: All Trick and No Treat
Loved the update soooo sweet I really hope justin and Kayla get together soon!!!
Author's Response: We'll see. Thanks for letting me know what you think.
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
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Date: 09/25/06 - 02:20AM
Title: All Trick and No Treat
Ay dios mio...I loved every bit of the Justin/Kayla in the parking lot scene. So very cute, had me smiling. haha It's moments like that, that I remember why I liked them together. And then JC comes, and I'm dying to know what his secret is. I've been wanting to know ever since Justin started dropping hints that he might be shady. Sounds like he sabotaged (sp? I think i spelled that wrong haha) Justin in some way. But that scene with JC and Kay when she's packing...was really good too, 'specially the 'justin is a dick' part. I had to fan at my eyes for a moment. haha JC's a good guy, so it sucks that it couldn't work out the way he wanted. But maybe it didn't work cause he is a good guy and you know what they say about good guys. Oh and LOL @ Rachel in the beginning. haha This whole chapter was great, I should be doing some school work or sleeping...but I couldn't help but read. Update again real soon! I LOVE this story, if I haven't said that already.
Author's Response: Girl, you better do your homework. I won't be responsible for you flunking out of school, lol. But seriously, I have to admit that I teared up a little bit myself when I was writing the scene with JC. Because he really is a good person and he does love Kayla, but it just wasn't meant to be. I completely changed the end of that chapter, I originally had Kayla and JC having a really bad fight and then just leaving it at that, but that wasn't the way that I wanted to leave things with them. And Rachel is a nut.
Reviewer: angel_from_africa
Anonymous
Date: 09/25/06 - 01:45AM
Title: All Trick and No Treat
dont leave us hanging!!! Please update soon!! That was so good!!!
Author's Response: Chapter eighteen is practically done. Hopefully I won't be so long between updates.
Reviewer: justinzgirlkb
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Date: 09/25/06 - 01:43AM
Title: All Trick and No Treat
aw the puppy is so cute! i love this story. i'm glad you finally got a chance to update....great job! update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you. I wish I could have gotten my picture of Nemo to post, he's a sweetie. I know that it takes me a long time to update this story, but I'll try to do better.
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
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Date: 09/24/06 - 02:40PM
Title: What Goes Up . . .Must Come Down Part Two
I love when you write it out as scenes. Not that the summary part isn't good too, but I'm definitely a fan of your scenes. They're so real, something you can actually see happening as you read. But this hand to wall scene... Ay dios mio...that was an emotional scene for me. And the song choice was perfect, I had to go into my itunes so I could listen to it as I read. haha I know they aren't good together, I know that...but for some reason I still want them together. At least never have Cameron in it again, 'specially no mention of sex between Justin and Cameron. haha He doesn't even want her twiggy ass anyways. He wants Kayla. But they're too screwed up to be together. *sighs* Couples therapy, maybe? haha Great chapter. Update soon (aka right now)! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, chica. I'm glad that the emotions that I was going for came out in that scene. Jay and Kay are both crazy, they are disturbingly dysfunctional, but still people root for them to be together. Hmm, We'll see. And I hate to break it to you, but Cam will be making at least one more appearance in this story. Naturally her and Kay get into it again. I just love having them argue with each other. It usually turns out pretty funny.
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