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Reviewer: Madcrazychick
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Date: 09/24/06 - 02:13PM
Title: What Goes Up. . .Must Come Down
"I don’t know what you were hoping to prove by bringing her up in here, but that emaciated wench has got to go."
haha Oh, man, their whole argument was hilariously bitchy. I wish C. Dumaz had of gotten her ass beat though. Ay dios mio...they're (Kay and Jay) both crazy. JC's crazy (in love). Dumaz needs to be dropped kicked out of the picture. haha I can see how this is her fault with the whole JC thing then lying about it, but I dunno...it just seems like what he's doing to her is worse. Like it's an intentional thing vs. a mistake. But Justin's back now and looking like he's ready to kick some ass if need be...haha onto the next chapter/part...
Reviewer: LuLu
Anonymous
Date: 09/12/06 - 10:30AM
Title: What Goes Up . . .Must Come Down Part Two
Wow J has some serious issues, damn straight he needs some therapy. I wanna know how he thinks JC betrayed him, I feel like there is some secret issue still between those two & I can't wait to see how Justin managed to get Kayla to become his bed buddy after all that.
Reviewer: Timberlake
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Date: 08/22/06 - 12:23AM
Title: What Goes Up . . .Must Come Down Part Two
omg, i'm so fuckin' weak. i cried. ugh, that bitch! he makes me so sad for him. he's CRAZY. that boy needs dr. phil lmao. oh lord, i can understand kayla now. this chapter just show's how. . . complicated justin really is. his rare vulnerable moments tear me apart and make me think 'maybe he's just broken. nothing a little love can't fix', but it's not that simple. he's deeply scarred. hurts me to read it, it really does. i LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVEED this update! WOOT! WOOT!
Author's Response: Thank you. I was trying to give a little insight to what is that Kayla sees in Justin that most people usually don't. He's not just a horrible person, but he is severely messed up. Even though she should know better, his vulnerability still plays on her emotions.
Reviewer: Timberlake
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Date: 08/22/06 - 12:05AM
Title: What Goes Up. . .Must Come Down
ahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lmao. i LOVE it. Justin is a muthafudgin' dickbag! How dare he? Kay should've thrown a pot of hot grits on his nut ass, LMAO. i'm glad JC still has her back. i figured she'd turn to him. and Justin thought he had her. . . HA! mad as hell when he found her missing from his crib, LMAO
Reviewer: meaghan
Anonymous
Date: 08/21/06 - 07:27PM
Title: What Goes Up . . .Must Come Down Part Two
awww!! that just broke my heart!! i love this story and i cant wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm working on the next update now. I'm a total slacker, so I can't say for sure when it will be ready. But I'll try to make y'all wait too long.
Reviewer: Kijuana
Anonymous
Date: 08/21/06 - 02:31PM
Title: What Goes Up . . .Must Come Down Part Two
Wow, that was an awesome chapter. It felt like there was so much more that he needed to tell her but she wasn't hearing it. I felt bad for him but that is the chance you take when you love someone that intensely. This story is amazing. Ki Author's Response: Thank you. I tried to write it a little ambiguosuly to leave some things open to interpretation. Since the story is only from Kayla's point of view, there are a lot of things that happened that she wouldn't know about. He could have told her a lot of things,but she didn't want to hear it. but can we really blame her for not wanting to hear it?
Reviewer: Amy A
Anonymous
Date: 08/18/06 - 07:04PM
Title: What Goes Up . . .Must Come Down Part Two
Wow, that was beautiful, I don't know who i feel sorry for more. Everypart of this chapter was flawless and perfect, i really felt what JC, JUstin & Kayla were all feeling. I wish i could say more but that was so good i'm speechless xxx
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I was so nervous about not getting the emotions right in this chapter. Thanks for the compliment.
Reviewer: Lynn
Anonymous
Date: 08/17/06 - 07:27AM
Title: What Goes Up . . .Must Come Down Part Two
Awww, Justin.... I love him!! Even though he acted like a #1 asshole. Update soon!!
Author's Response: Justin was a little extra in that chapter, but he had his reasons. I can't say what they are, you'll just have to keep reading. LOL.
Reviewer: Francine
Anonymous
Date: 08/17/06 - 02:23AM
Title: What Goes Up . . .Must Come Down Part Two
i just started reading this story yesterday and i have to say that it is THE best story i have ever read..and i've been reading fan fiction stories for a while lol. not only is it well thoguht out but it has this passion that you can almost feel coming right off of the page. Please please please keep updating..you're a genius and your writing s freaking incredible!
Author's Response: Oh my. I'm blushing from such high praise. I can't believe you read all this in just a couple of days, but thanks for giving this story a try. I'll try to update more often.
Reviewer: jrtluva05
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Date: 08/16/06 - 12:32AM
Title: What Goes Up . . .Must Come Down Part Two
Wow i actaully weeped for justin.. damn girl you know how to get the emotion out.. wow i can't wait till you upate!! please do it soon.. dont wait forever again Author's Response: Aww. I wasn't trying to make anybody cry. But the end of that chapter was kind of sad, it had to be. I'll try to make the next chapter a little lighter if I can. Thanks so much for reading.
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