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Reviewer: kahlymilla
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Date: 07/11/06 - 03:09PM
Title: Part Three: Fallen
This a nice chapter. I'm glad Justin stopped Kayla from making up a bunch of lies and excuses. And speaking of Kayla, she needs to handle her issues. I don't think she has feelings for JC at all. She just kind of used him. Sort of like how she used to be used by Justin. Maybe she wanted to see how it felt. Oh and why is Just making JC seem like a bad guy, telling her to be careful? I want to know what JC's done that we don't know about. P.S. Glad to hear that your mother's doing okay-Milla
Reviewer: Lynn
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Date: 07/10/06 - 12:49PM
Title: Part Three: Fallen
I was really missing Kayla and Justin there for a minute. Thanks for the update. Make me thank you again soon. :)
Reviewer: Mari (Timberlake)
Anonymous
Date: 07/09/06 - 09:24PM
Title: Part Three: Fallen
Ugh, love. Why is it so complicated? I can't seem to understand why thing are the way they are in Kayla's life. I can't understand that when she has a good thing going, something, rather someone messes it up. The whole JC thing really made both Kayla and I think: maybe Justin wasn' the problem. Maybe it was Kayla all along. . . Sure, Justin shares some responsibility, but Kay's his biggest enabler and the JC incident was definitely 100% Kay. I hope she fixes it and makes up her mind about Justin. All this nostalgic photograph looking is driving me crazy. You either want him or you don't. Pick your pick. Oh and I'm sorry about your moms, sugar. I'm glad she's feel better =]
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
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Date: 07/09/06 - 02:26PM
Title: Part Three: Fallen
I love the character development. Justin really is growing up, which is making Kayla look like the immature one now. "If you keep making the same kinds of mistakes over and over again, they’re no longer mistakes. It just becomes a part of who you are." Deep, Justin, deep. *nods head solemnly* lol So true. And then since he didn't yell or fight with her, they had a nice little moment...true they didn't express all the things that they probably needed to. But it was still nice nevertheless. And then, she just had to get up and see him off, cause she loves him...which led to sigh-worthy moment #2, with the silent, lean on me/hug. Aww, I just love the two of them together. Why can't happiness and love just shine? *sighs* Because you can't have a story without conflict. Damn rules. lol
And Justin's got me wondering now. Is there really something shady going on Mr. Perfect, JC? Or is it just that he's gonna turn all needy and clingy, which meant led to angry and ugly? Hmm.
I'm sorry to hear about your mom, but glad to hear that she's doing much better. So in honor of that, I'll leave off my predictable 'update soon' ending. :)
Reviewer: meaghan
Anonymous
Date: 07/09/06 - 01:09PM
Title: Part Three: Fallen
awww, that was really sad. poor guy :( cant wait for more, hope your moms ok
Reviewer: Violeta
Anonymous
Date: 07/09/06 - 12:31PM
Title: Part Three: Fallen
She's seriously screwed up! And this suden change of attitude in Justin just made it worse. I don't know what he was trying to say about JC or if we should believe him, actually, In don't know what to think about this whole thing. Just like Kayla, I'm very confused. I love it though. I hope your mom gets better, and don't worry if you can't update because you need to take care of her, we understand she's more important.
Reviewer: vessy
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Date: 07/09/06 - 10:04AM
Title: Part Three: Fallen
i'm happy your mom is doin't better. and od course i great chapter again! can't wait for more
Reviewer: Lizzy3218
Anonymous
Date: 07/09/06 - 03:43AM
Title: Part Three: Fallen
I'm so glad Justin didn't blow up at her. I thought he was for sure going to throw a fit but I'm glad he didn't make things harder for them. Keep the updates coming girl.
Reviewer: kahlymilla
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Date: 06/25/06 - 01:31PM
Title: Part One: Always on My Mind; Part Two: Sign Your Name
Poor JC. I feel so bad for him, he doesn't deserve what Kayla is doing to him. I mean the man cooked for her and he makes her feel LOVED, which she hasn't been feeling as of lately with Justin. Maybe Justin and Kay do deserve one another because both of them seem to be just hurting the people. I can just imagine what the hell is going to go down when Kay gets home.lol. Good update. Sorry it took so long for me to review because I didn't have internet for a week and my laptop is still in the shop. -Kahli
Author's Response: No problem. I don\'t know how you made it, I\'ve gotten to the point where I think I would have some sort of fit, if I didn\'t have access to the internet for a week. LOL. Yeah, Kay and Justin are starting to seem like they deserve each other. But I\'ve got a ways to go with this story. Anything could happen.
Reviewer: Timberlake
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Date: 06/13/06 - 03:07PM
Title: Part One: Always on My Mind; Part Two: Sign Your Name
UGh, YOU HOEBAG! LMAO! Jesus pieces, the man cooked for you, provides for your child, loves you, and know what the hell he's doing in the sack and what do you do? You leave his ass. OMG, Kayla, you fool. Poor JC. He doesn't deserve the bullshit. Justin and Kayla can stay together. JC can adopt Jonah and marry somebody worthy. The end. LMAO! Please update soon. Justin can't take the news well. Lord knows he's going to be down her throat asking her what happened. . . Damn, this was so good. LOL!
Author's Response: Your reviews always crack me up.
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