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Reviewer: Timberlake
Signed
Date: 06/13/06 - 02:24PM
Title: Temporary Sanity
LMFAO! This chapter had to be the funniest. I cannot believe that Kayla fell for all his lies. As a matter of fact, I’m not even sure that she likes men. Keep that on the low. LMFAO! As soon as I read that, I was rollin'. If Justin ever said that to me, I would just have to walk away. And the Alyssa incident. . . Don’t let the Hollywood pedigree fool you. Alyssa has a lot of New York hoodrat in her. I nearly lost a lung from laughing so hard. I only said that I was sorry because I felt like I should. But I’m not sorry and if I had the chance, I’d do it again. The only thing I’m sorry about is that I only got your foot. I wish I’d broken the whole damn leg. ROFL! Why couldn't Kay keep that 'I don't give a shit' mentality? She should've routed after he came from the hospital. As a matter of fact, she should've left while he was gone. Damn, she makes me so frustrated. After the whole Alyssa thing, I would've definitely said fuck the bullshit and left his ass. She should've he had something major like that for her. Damned dog, lol. Oh, and I chose A, by the way, LOL!
Author's Response: I kind of figured that A would be your choice. LOL. I try to give Kayla a sense of humor about the past. I think if I didn\'t make it kind of funny, it would be too depressing.
Reviewer: Amy A
Anonymous
Date: 06/13/06 - 11:08AM
Title: Part One: Always on My Mind; Part Two: Sign Your Name
Wow that was intense & nice & long, i loved it, i'm a Justin fan and i'd be happy if Kayla got with Justin but JC is sooo lovely and he totally madly truly deeply loves her. I only wish for his sake she gets some sense because i don't think Justin will ever feel that way about her, although, i would have totally fallen for him in the shake and rag store (aww Justin can be soo cute sometimes) but back on topic. How could she do that to JC? Update soon. xxx Author's Response: I\'m working on the next part now and I think it may be almost as long as this one was. Hopefully I\'ll have it finished soon.
Reviewer: jrtluva05
Signed
Date: 06/13/06 - 02:04AM
Title: Part One: Always on My Mind; Part Two: Sign Your Name
okay... damn that was awesome an i really can't think of anything else to say.. i had this long list of things i wanted to say in the middle of the chapter but now im just like WHOA! HOW can she have sex with JC!! damn she should be with Justin.. okay theres something.. well uhm can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Another speechless person? Goodness, I was trying to create some drama and I guess I did.
Reviewer: Keediluv
Signed
Date: 06/13/06 - 01:31AM
Title: Part One: Always on My Mind; Part Two: Sign Your Name
OMG!!! Awesome ma! I'm a JC girl personally so I'm excited anytime you like the him and Kayla together. I can so see those two together. Too good...this story is just too damn good! Kijuana (Ki) Author's Response: That\'s one vote for Team JC. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: GREG
Anonymous
Date: 06/12/06 - 10:50PM
Title: Part One: Always on My Mind; Part Two: Sign Your Name
WOW KAYLA REALL IS A FOOL BUT I GUESS SHE IS VERY CONFUSED THIS SORY GTS BETTER WITH EACH CHAPTER IT IS VERY BELEVABLE IT DOES NOT SEEMS LIKE FICTION BUT REALITY
Author's Response: You think so? Thanks a lot. I think confused is the kindest way to describe Kayla. LOL.
Reviewer: meaghan
Anonymous
Date: 06/12/06 - 07:50PM
Title: Part One: Always on My Mind; Part Two: Sign Your Name
i cant believe that just happened!! NOT COOL!! my heart is breaking!! and ur the only one that can fix it!! please hurry!!
Author's Response: Goodness, I\'m making people speechless and breaking hearts. I feel bad y\'all. I\'ll do my best to have another update this week.
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
Signed
Date: 06/12/06 - 11:46AM
Title: Part One: Always on My Mind; Part Two: Sign Your Name
He's everything you want. He's everything you need. He's everything inside of you that you wish you could be. He says all the right things at the exactly the right time. But he means nothing to you and you don't know...why. lol Sorry, that's just the song that came to mind while I was reading the last part with JC, which was heartbreaking. He's perfect for her, but I still want her to be with Justin and for as much as she's trying to deny it I think she really does want to still be with him too. Otherwise why run from a good thing with JC? The biker bar/country song...was adorable. If my limewire doesn't act like a punk I might try to find that song. lol And the Jonah waiting up for them and making them share a bed bit was simply adorable too. And she knows she didn't let him keep his arm over her just for his comfort. Bug-a-boo or not, she finds comfort in his touch too. Oh and in response to your response on my last review, yes I've been reading this too, I caught on late and starting read 'em out of order. Still don't think I've read them all. lol I'm just weird like that, with a tendency to ramble. Anyways, I love this story. You have this great way of writing that just pulls the reader in. Update soon!
Author's Response: Great minds think alike. I had originally used that song to narrate the second part of the chapter. But I decided to go with something, that would make it a little less obvious that Kayla was going to run out on JC. Lol.
Reviewer: Lynn
Anonymous
Date: 06/12/06 - 10:30AM
Title: Part One: Always on My Mind; Part Two: Sign Your Name
Wonderful!! Can't wait for more. And yes, Kayla was a bitch, but it's okay cause I'm a Justin gal, and I want him to get IT. lol
Author's Response: You\'re bad. Justin may or may not get "it". Keep reading to find out.
Reviewer: angel_from_africa
Anonymous
Date: 06/12/06 - 07:59AM
Title: Part One: Always on My Mind; Part Two: Sign Your Name
I can't beleive she did that to JC! OMG!! More please!! But justin was funny as hell with the mirror thing and the sofa thing as welll... good job!
Author's Response: Thank you. Kayla is definitely making a mess for herself.
Reviewer: Lizzy3218
Anonymous
Date: 06/12/06 - 03:24AM
Title: Part One: Always on My Mind; Part Two: Sign Your Name
I cannot believe she just did that. Kayla is so damn stupid sometimes. Now that Justin is fixing himself up and trying to change his life, here she is fucking up hers(again). Sleeping with JC is gonna cause way more problems than she anticipated. STUPID STUPID STUPID. UGH!!! lol. Sorry I kinda got excited there. Great update chica. Author's Response: No. It\'s good that you\'re excited. I was definitely trying to create a sort of "what the hell is she thinking?" type reaction. Thanks for telling me what you think.
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