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Reviewer: Gigi
Signed
Date: 06/11/06 - 11:02PM
Title: Part One: Always on My Mind; Part Two: Sign Your Name
Well hey I'm another one you left speechless. I thought I knew what I was going to say now I'm not so sure.
Author's Response: I really had to fight with myself about whether or not to post this chapter, because I know that it put Kayla in a really bad light, but flawed characters are interesting.
Reviewer: E
Anonymous
Date: 06/11/06 - 09:01PM
Title: Part One: Always on My Mind; Part Two: Sign Your Name
Wow. I just don't know what to say. I am speechless. That was a great chapter. I am excited to see what happens next.
Author's Response: I can\'t believe I\'m making everybody speechless. I hope that\'s a good thing.
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 06/11/06 - 08:46PM
Title: Part One: Always on My Mind; Part Two: Sign Your Name
Unbelieveable. Don't know what to say. This is like...woah. Please, please update soon. Please and thanks. Great job. Thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you. Can\'t believe that I\'ve left you speechless, but I\'m kind of proud of that reaction. Working on part three to this chapter right now, but I won\'t give any predictions on when it might be ready, because it always takes me a lot longer than I think it will.
Reviewer: Violeta
Anonymous
Date: 06/11/06 - 08:45PM
Title: Part One: Always on My Mind; Part Two: Sign Your Name
I have read every single chapter of this story and enjoyed it thoroughly, but this one chapter just blew out my mind. The slow change of feelings in Kayla is almost imperceptible to the blind eye, but a refreshing twist for the ones who read between the lines. Her feelings for Justin are still there, but I dare to say that they're slowly turning into something different. Her date with JC was a nice change of scenario for Kayla's life, and you wrote it beautifully. Your description of JC's feelings was portrayed in such a human and vivid way that I could practically see it all happening in front of me. Hopefully Kay will see that she does deserve someone who loves her unconditionally... Really, this was amazing, and if you were looking to cause a reaction in your readers...congratulations!! You left me thinking. Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so much. I was kind of afraid to write this chapter and I can\'t tell you how many times I rewrote it. I wanted to take Kayla in a slightly different direction. I was trying to convey that while she\'s getting better, she\'s got a long way to go. Thanks for letting me know what you thought.
Reviewer: Riley
Anonymous
Date: 06/11/06 - 05:55PM
Title: Prologue
Such a fantastic and innovative story, but seriously - UPDATE asap; i can feel withdrawal symptoms looming... lol! x x
Reviewer: Kijuana
Anonymous
Date: 06/03/06 - 06:59PM
Title: Temporary Sanity
I personally would have chosen B, but I think C leaves for a much more exciting story. Good couple chapters lady! Can't wait to read more, Ki Author's Response: B. would have been my choice too, but if it had been Kayla\'s choice I wouldn\'t have much of a story left. LOL. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Tasha
Anonymous
Date: 05/24/06 - 02:46PM
Title: Temporary Sanity
That was Great she should have (and I'm not a violent person at all ,I'm a good church going girl.) broke his damn dick in the door them bashed his face in,but that's just me . i know She'lll get her act together it takes time and when she's been hurt enough it'll come . As always great cha[ter lovr how it was written and i'm on the edge of my seat for for the next one.
Author's Response: Dang! Remind me to stay on your good side. LOL. Thanks for reading this and letting me know what you think.
Reviewer: Laurencoz
Anonymous
Date: 05/22/06 - 10:31PM
Title: You Can Run but You Can't Hide
incredible how it just keeps getting better and better - ah i love this story!
Author's Response: Thank you. I am constantly amazed by the amount of feedback that I get on this story. I\'m just glad that I\'m keeping people entertained.
Reviewer: Lynn
Signed
Date: 05/22/06 - 12:58PM
Title: Temporary Sanity
Can I just tell you that I LOVE Kayla!! Keep up the good work. I LOVE IT!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Kayla is sometimes difficult to write because this is the first female character I\'ve done that is so flawed. It\'s hard to find the balance between sympathizing with her and wanting to wring her neck. But I\'m trying.
Reviewer: angel_from_africa
Anonymous
Date: 05/22/06 - 11:48AM
Title: Temporary Sanity
that was funny and good as usual... keep it going!!!
Author's Response: Thank you.
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