Reviewer: stimble
Anonymous
Date: 01/06/06 - 01:05AM
Title: The story
okay so the way you wrote it need some work, but the plot, if you elborated more, was a good idea. You could have turned it into a good long story with detail in it to convince the reader that the characters do actually have feelings for each other...I'd say a work in progress. with good potential
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 12/13/05 - 05:17AM
Title: The story
How could you do that!
Author's Response: Sorry! There is actually a sequel, I just haven't posted it yet.
