Reviewer: SindiSignedDate: 06/27/06 - 03:32PM
Title: How it started
Omg it can't just stop there where's the rest. Really good story I like how you have Justin's thoughts now and then. Just a bit of constuctive criticism there were a few spelling mistakes that's all. We all make them so don't worry too much about it.
Reviewer: matthews babySignedDate: 06/05/06 - 09:36AM
Title: How it started
oooooh shame on his ass lol. Great start so far! And I'm not just saying that because we both have a story called 'The Other Woman" :D
Reviewer: chelsiaSignedDate: 01/04/06 - 08:26PM
Title: How it started