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Reviewer: justinzgirlkb
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Date: 02/06/07 - 11:10PM
Title: Tear Down My Reason
so i finally go to sit down and read this story and although i am enjoying it (the drama, adam levine....), i am torn because kendall is almost too fickle to understand. just when i think she has it all together, something gets messed up and it's a downspiral.....you gotta make me believe again, because i'm distressed....update (really really) soon!
Reviewer: vessy
Signed
Date: 06/29/06 - 09:05AM
Title: Tear Down My Reason
wow, can't wait to see what justin will do.
Reviewer: Sara
Anonymous
Date: 06/27/06 - 04:55PM
Title: Tear Down My Reason
Well, considering that she just heard Justin giving Lauren the brush off and it was fairly clear that anything he did with her was while with Cameron, not Kendall. Waittttttt a minute, all this time I'm thinking he cheated on Kendall and it was Cameron? Or was it both? Or..... *Help*
Reviewer: alisa
Anonymous
Date: 06/27/06 - 01:12PM
Title: Tear Down My Reason
great chapter!! i love the conversations you put in your stories because theyre always really intense and honest. and thats coming from somone that doesnt really like justin and cant stand lauren but that was a great scene with them. so glad to see adam back and i totally loved the way that went down with them. it was all about the descriptions baby! you did a great job with that and this whole story. cant waittt to see what goes down next! update soon!!
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
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Date: 06/27/06 - 03:07AM
Title: Tear Down My Reason
I shoulda known something horrible was going to happen when I read that you said you liked the chapter. The last time you said was the 'Shit, Damn, Motherfucker' one. lol Well shit, damn, motherfucker again! It was right here 'Our eyes lock and I expect every feeling I was learning to suppress to resurface, but no. Our eyes lock and that’s it.' that I knew she was probably going to slinking off to Adam. I liked the way you described Adam's gait, I could just picture that whole scene. And then Lauren just had to follow Justin in the room, talking all that mess. I wonder if she made up that thing about Ken going to meet 'an old friend.' Cause I ready to mad at Kendall right there. And maybe that was her plan all along and then when she heard her huzzie friend and regretful boyfriend talking she did what in the back of mind she wanted to do all along: run back to Adam. But when she's with Adam, she runs back to Justin. *shakes head* Only difference is Adam didn't try to get her back once she's gone. I liked the way Adam handled her random appearance at his door though. lol I know I should be sympathetic to Ken since she just found out about everything (he was sleeping with Lauren before and while he was with Kendall right? And not just before?), but handling it the way she did makes it damn hard. So I can't help but feel bad for Justin. They both made mistakes, only Justin didn't fess up to all of his. Shit, damn, motherfucker. lol
Update soon!
Reviewer: Kimmy
Anonymous
Date: 06/26/06 - 07:12PM
Title: Tear Down My Reason
I feel bad for her but she shouldnt be doing this...lol. Sorry is getting really good. I can't wait for the next update. Make it soon please.
Reviewer: courtney
Anonymous
Date: 06/26/06 - 04:12PM
Title: Tear Down My Reason
Love the story, hate lauren.
Reviewer: princess
Anonymous
Date: 06/26/06 - 03:38PM
Title: Tear Down My Reason
it is official. This girl is stupid. He isn't cheating on her with the damn girl. I would be mad at Lauren for trying to push up on my man who clearly didn't want her anymore. They both did fucked up shit before. This girl makes me want to pull out her hair. It was like she was looking for a reason to go back to Adam. But great girl, fabulous. More soon please.
Reviewer: B
Anonymous
Date: 06/26/06 - 02:48PM
Title: Tear Down My Reason
ok maybe my theory about Kendall knowing was wrong but once she saw adam in the hotel I knew hell would break loose. this is about to get crazy! Great chapter
Reviewer: Sara
Anonymous
Date: 06/26/06 - 01:51PM
Title: Tear Down My Reason
Grrr I knew you would do that. GAH! I just knew they couldn't be happy for more than 8 minutes. Why must you torture me so!!!!11! I guess I should've known the truth would come out at the most inconvenient time, but see this is why Justin should've told her already. Ugh Ugh Ugh, I wanna smack him for being stupid and hiding all this time with no real reason except not wanting to talk about it. Dumb. ASS. Kendall is a whole different issue because she's been messed up from the getgo. Between her mom and her dad, girlie is scared to feel anything and that's gonna be a HUUGE obstacle for her and Justin and even her and Adam. So so so sad. Dude I love when I can get all analytical. Keep it coming!!!
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