Reviews For Joyride
Reviewer: Jordin Anonymous Date: 03/13/06 - 04:45PM Title: In The Name Of Love

Okay, I'm typing my review as I'm reading, so you'll have to forgive me if this comes out sounding like one of Sharry's drunken Abs posts when I'm done lmao (cus I probably won't go back and edit it either lol.)  I literally laughed out loud and then snorted at the description of Adam's apartment.  Kendall and Adam are such foil characters because he totally brings out all her neurotic qualities and she definitely highlights all his dirty habits.  How cute.  And eeewwww, it's Kelly!  You know how much I loathe that wench for getting to roll around naked with Adam in that video.  Plus she's a big ol' beeyatch, so I'm mad that you've made me like her all of a sudden.  Adam is such a sheister lmao.  Now I'm wondering if he actually knew that she was dating Justin and it was all one big game-plan-thing.  Things that make you go 'Hmm.'  And why does Kelly's advice seem so ominous?  Hmm.  Kendall you better listen to that chick, she should know what kind of hell he is after two years with his crazy behind.   He really is a character, a little harsh in his truth, but I love that he says things that actually need to be said instead of letting the opportunity to be relevant pass him by (unlike a certain Kendall and Justin *rolls eyes*).  And I, too would like to know what the F is up with Justin and Lauren because Kendall is too blind and infatuated to notice, but there's either some pent up tension or already released tension that needs some attention.  Enlighten us, Ash.  That was a great breakup and I like how you switched to Justin's pov for it so we have absolutely no idea what changed Kendall's mind all of a sudden, plus we know how Justin feels about it and I hate that she's letting him blame himself for it.  Yeah, some of it was his fault, but he's not the one banging Adam now.  Sucks for him if he's not shtupping Laura on the DL rofl.  I really liked this chapter, cus like you said we get to hang out in Adam's world for a little while and see the huuuge contrast he brings to her Hollywood lifestyle.  So I guess they're like unofficially official now?  Ugh this is too much.  I'm highly addicted to this story so you're gonna have to update like right now.  And sorry in advance for the grossly long review lmao.  Love to love ya baby!


Reviewer: Sheree Anonymous Date: 03/13/06 - 12:28PM Title: In The Name Of Love

See first i was taking up for her but shes dumb. Um after the whole convo with the ex girlfriend she still goes back? Whatever happens happens and hopefully Justin wont be there to pick up the pieces. Oh and I do like Adams style even though i dont trust him. Somethings not right about him at all, but its still sexy as hell in a way.


Reviewer: lil jb Anonymous Date: 03/13/06 - 07:19AM Title: In The Name Of Love

down here in atlanta we have a name for girls like that...BLOCKHEAD, SHE A NO GOOD FUCKING BLOCKHEAD! WHAT THE FUCK?! i swear this bitch is stupider than a freakin rock! SHE A ONE OF A KIND BLOCKHEAD!


Reviewer: nikki g. Anonymous Date: 03/13/06 - 02:18AM Title: In The Name Of Love

why do i have the feeling that he's gonna totally screw her over? Update soon, please and thanks. J&B!


Reviewer: Nique Anonymous Date: 03/13/06 - 12:09AM Title: No Contemplation

Ooooh!!!!! I'm telling! Nah, I won't.  I've been anticipating Kendall and Adam doing the do since they met at the Laker's game.


Reviewer: Sophia Anonymous Date: 03/13/06 - 12:01AM Title: In The Name Of Love

Oh and I forgot to say I was thinking the same thing about how you used Heard Em Say for Justin and Kendall breaking up because all I could picture was Adam singing that OOooo part LOL.


Reviewer: Sophia Anonymous Date: 03/12/06 - 11:55PM Title: In The Name Of Love

See what I mean about supposed to be in bed?!  You and this damn intriguing story Ashley.  Like someone said, there's something wierdly likeable about Adam even though it doesn't all seem quite copasetic so Kendall needs to have a few more talks with his ex-lady before she jumps into this.  I'm gonna miss her and Justin together (YES I know it's weird but I liked them) but I find her relationship with Adam a lot more interesting of course.  I'm just nervous about it I guess.  And Lauren and Justin... Hmmmm.  That's a thought.  I won't even try to guess what's next.  Just update soon so I can find out and THANK you for doing it twice today!


Reviewer: Nique Anonymous Date: 03/12/06 - 11:35PM Title: You Hardly Even Notice

I'm without my computer for ONE WEEK...well, okay, like 9 days...and what happens? Kendall and Justin finally become a real couple.  Kendall and Adam spend some time together.  And...no, that's it.  But, the point is that I missed all this exciting stuff.  Kudos Ash.


Reviewer: Madcrazychick Signed Date: 03/12/06 - 11:32PM Title: In The Name Of Love

*Kanye

Where's the edit button when you need it? lol 


Reviewer: E Anonymous Date: 03/12/06 - 11:30PM Title: In The Name Of Love

Sara, I got the same vibe.  I think that something was happening between Justin and Lauren.  I hope not since I started feeling bad for him.  I felt bad for him during the break up scene too.  I am glad she did end it since you wants Adam so much.  Thanks for the quick update.





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