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Reviewer: sophie
Anonymous
Date: 03/09/06 - 11:27AM
Title: Chapter 6
Nice chapter!
Reviewer: stimble
Signed
Date: 03/09/06 - 10:04AM
Title: Chapter 6
i like the plot to it. And i acutally like dialouge explaining things over simpy paragraphs. It depends on the type of story, and this one is the type that would work best with dialouge explaing
Reviewer: sophie
Anonymous
Date: 03/08/06 - 05:33PM
Title: Chapter 4
Lol that was a good chapter! Funny! Post more soon
Reviewer: sophie
Anonymous
Date: 03/08/06 - 05:26PM
Title: Chapter 4
Lol that was a good chapter! Funny! Post more soon
Reviewer: sophie
Anonymous
Date: 03/08/06 - 05:26PM
Title: Chapter 4
Lol that was a good chapter! Funny! Post more soon
Reviewer: FantaCwriter
Signed
Date: 03/07/06 - 07:54PM
Title: Chapter 4
I'm still enjoying the story, but there seems to be a bit too much dialogue in it. It gets difficult to read after a while.
Author's Response: yea i know.. i just need to figure out a way to do everything without them speaking you know? it\'s a bit hard but ill work on it..
Reviewer: Annamarie
Signed
Date: 03/06/06 - 07:11PM
Title: Chapter 1
I really like this story, and it just began. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: FantaCwriter
Signed
Date: 03/06/06 - 11:29AM
Title: Chapter 1
It's a good concept, never mind the fact I love 'let's imagine what could happen in the future' stories. Really cute to begin with and I can't wait to see where you're going. Poor Bryce seems lost in the whole situation.
Reviewer: Tricky_Chicky
Signed
Date: 03/05/06 - 11:52PM
Title: Chapter 1
Great start. Can't wait to read more.
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