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Reviewer: Leeann
Signed
Date: 03/25/06 - 11:26PM
Title: Chapter 4
“Um yeah, I’m sorry,” Bryce said looking down at his shoes nervously. that part is funny lol. 'i'm sorry for knocking up your teenage daughter' anyway another good chapter :)
Reviewer: sophie
Anonymous
Date: 03/08/06 - 05:33PM
Title: Chapter 4
Lol that was a good chapter! Funny! Post more soon
Reviewer: sophie
Anonymous
Date: 03/08/06 - 05:26PM
Title: Chapter 4
Lol that was a good chapter! Funny! Post more soon
Reviewer: sophie
Anonymous
Date: 03/08/06 - 05:26PM
Title: Chapter 4
Lol that was a good chapter! Funny! Post more soon
Reviewer: FantaCwriter
Signed
Date: 03/07/06 - 07:54PM
Title: Chapter 4
I'm still enjoying the story, but there seems to be a bit too much dialogue in it. It gets difficult to read after a while.
Author's Response: yea i know.. i just need to figure out a way to do everything without them speaking you know? it\'s a bit hard but ill work on it..
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