Author's Response: glad you enjoyed it... but that\'s the reason kelly and joey dont get mad they understand... i think the parents needed to be upset.. i\'ll try and update sooner
Reviewer: sophie
AnonymousDate: 03/09/06 - 11:27AM
Title: Chapter 6
i like the plot to it. And i acutally like dialouge explaining things over simpy paragraphs. It depends on the type of story, and this one is the type that would work best with dialouge explaing
