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Reviewer: JamieLynn
Signed
Date: 01/17/07 - 01:20AM
Title: Immaculate Disaster
I love it! You could write the phone book and make it sound good. I dont think you've ever written anything bad, well at least that I've read. LOL
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 03/13/06 - 11:48PM
Title: Immaculate Disaster
Ugh! That's it?!?!?!?! You give us this wonderful thing and stop right there? Low, really low. But good. Soooooooo gooood!!!!!! Infac, it's so good that I'm going to start a petition to get you to add more to it...seriously. Well, okay maybe that's a little extreme...maybe.
Reviewer: Violeta
Anonymous
Date: 03/13/06 - 12:00PM
Title: Immaculate Disaster
Update! Update! Update!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Lesli
Anonymous
Date: 03/13/06 - 04:30AM
Title: Immaculate Disaster
I agree with everything Ashley said. This is too good to be a short story. Anyway I LOVED IT!
Reviewer: Ashley
Signed
Date: 03/12/06 - 08:26PM
Title: Immaculate Disaster
You should be ashamed of yourself because I was all set to come here and post my update like a good author should and then proceed to get ready for my Monday like a good student should, but what happens? I'm caught by the nebulous (and ingenious) title that you created, Miss Hollie. Now, on top of that, you mean to tell me that's all I get? I WANT MORE. I wanna know what happens when he wakes up. I wanna see them interact, and you know, more of a bad good thing. Or a good bad thing... I'm not sure which. But I want more dammit. And okay, this right here: But the thing about him is that he has all this rough edges and mismatched things that shouldn't make sense but you put them together and it all just… does. He's this big mishmash of imperfections that add up to something incredible. Annoying and disgusting and cocky and at times kind of absurd, but incredible nonetheless. That struck such a chord with me, because that's seriously what I see when I look at that kid and you summed it up amazingly accurately beautifully, so yes, I'd like to see some more of that awesome talent you have for description in this capacity. In other words, make it longer! You have 7 days to respond to my plea. That is all. =D
Reviewer: jrtluva05
Anonymous
Date: 03/12/06 - 07:39PM
Title: Immaculate Disaster
that was awesome hun, i really like it.
Reviewer: nikki g.
Anonymous
Date: 03/12/06 - 06:06PM
Title: Immaculate Disaster
wanna read more soon. please and thanks. J&B!
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