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Reviewer: jrtluva05
Signed
Date: 04/24/06 - 04:41PM
Title: Chapter Sixteen
Lmao.. wow that was good i am now caught up on all the chapters an i've got to say i really love this story.. im not a big fan of jc fics but this on caught my eye.. an it's really good, funny, cute an i can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Violeta
Anonymous
Date: 04/24/06 - 10:38AM
Title: Chapter Sixteen
Nice update!!! Continue please!!!
Reviewer: Kim
Anonymous
Date: 04/24/06 - 09:29AM
Title: Chapter Sixteen
I loved it...not what I expected, but I loved it! More please.
Reviewer: adidas76
Signed
Date: 04/24/06 - 08:28AM
Title: Chapter Sixteen
Two updates, woohoo. Is it wrong of me that I let out a chuckle when he put her on her butt? lol I think people in JC's real life underestimate him as well. Great job.
Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 04/24/06 - 06:32AM
Title: Chapter Sixteen
Great chapter! =)
Reviewer: LaLa
Anonymous
Date: 04/24/06 - 01:20AM
Title: Chapter Sixteen
Aww, she was only trying to help. but at least she can feel safe that he can somewhat protect himself.great update though.
Reviewer: Kim
Anonymous
Date: 04/23/06 - 11:14PM
Title: Chapter Fifteen
I love these two together, but since that was a chapter with little drama, I assume more is coming?
Reviewer: Violeta
Anonymous
Date: 04/23/06 - 10:37PM
Title: Chapter Fifteen
Ay Dios!!!! The stalker is ON THE TOUR!!!!!!! Ahhhhhh!!!!!!!!! Who is it??? I'm getting really nervous here...
Reviewer: westernway
Signed
Date: 04/23/06 - 07:08PM
Title: Chapter Fourteen
I just read through this whole story in one sitting! So good! I really like it and the idea is very original. I really liked how you waited for fourteen chapters to keep Al and JC from actually getting together, it made for suspense and kept me hooked until the end of the chapters. Great stuff, good imagery, and the characterizations are spot on! Great job, can't wait for an update!
Reviewer: grishy
Anonymous
Date: 04/23/06 - 03:14PM
Title: Chapter Fourteen
It was great, keep going please
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